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Summary: 
Isabella Swan has begun to notice changes in her body - strange, unlikely occurances that are accompanied by horrific bouts of pain.
And when Edward Cullen - miles away and living a stagnant life after leaving the only one he has ever loved - gets a frantic call from Alice, he must rush back to Forks. His next descision will change the course of their lives.
Will Bella be able to forgive Edward for breaking her heart? And when a not-so-new threat meets her eye to eye, Bella is finally strong enough to fight for herself - but will she be able to win?
AU-New Moon. Canon pairings. Rated for gore, intense scenes, and eventually some hot vampire lovin'.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 24477
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2010
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: June 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Silly Soul Stuff
A+ for the lovin' stuff.
Summary: 
Bella became a vampire 15 years ago. She has had little contact with other vampires aside from some close friends, and none that follow her diet. Things will all change when someone comes to stay for a visit. What is immortal life for if you are alone?
BellaXJasper Non Cannon Rated for later on
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 4795
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2009 Updated: November 11, 2010
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: July 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
you have a nice writing style. I'm brought into Bella's world w/o being bombarded w/ BS that I could care less about. I loved the chapter.
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: July 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Fun chapter. I loved Jasper's response to smelling and seeing Bella for the first time. I can't wait to read the next update.
Summary: 
This Story is based 23 years after the End of
Breaking Dawn. The family are now living in Canada and are back at High School. Who is the new girl and what is with her strange eyes?
This story contains violence and Rape (only in the early chapters though). Anyone sensitive to these should not read this story.
This is at its heart a romance story. But it will take a while to get there and there will be a lot of action and obstacles along the way.
It is a mostly canon story but there is a major character death in the early chapters so some relationships will change.
My banner was created by FrozenSoldier. She is amazing and i love her!!!!
THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HOLD TEMPORARILY, IT HAS NOT BEEN ABANDONED.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Marcus, Nessie, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 32675
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2010 Updated: August 10, 2010
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: July 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Thrilling engaging chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Summary:
Aggression; a common behavior when finding a mate. Possession; a common desire when claiming a mate. Imprinting... well this one's a little new to Jacob Black. But he'll experience them all when he imprints on a taken she-wolf...
Cambria and her pack come from California, on the run from their old Alpha and trying to make a new beginning, but that's difficult when you have no money and nowhere to stay. After making their own judgments, and speaking with the elders, the packs in La Push welcome the Californians, providing them with food and shelter in exchange for covering patrols. Xander is the beta of the stray pack, and has been Cambria’s comfort through their journey, helping her cope after the ordeal back in Santa Carla. But the sudden interest Jacob Black has in her leaves him itching with jealousy and full of unreleased tension.
Meanwhile, Leah seems to have a new skip in her step as she connects with Sloan, a quiet, mysterious wolf who may turn out to be just what she needed to get over Sam Uley.
But a forthcoming danger will stop at nothing to meddle with the lives of all these shifters, the trustworthy Cullens possibly being the only alliance the wolves will have when the battle comes...
JacobOC & LeahOC
Categories: AU, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Brady, Carlisle, Collin, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Other Character, Paul, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 10638
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2010 Updated: September 02, 2010
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: July 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter II
Engaging chapter. You have a nice writing style. I'm so glad all the wolf packs met. I can't wait to read the next update.
Summary: 
A look at the time SM skipped over in between New Moon and Eclipse. How did Bella get back to her pre-zombie normal?
Bella tells Edward how much he hurt her; the only problem is she tells him this in her sleep. What will Edward do to regain her trust and make this right? How did they overcome the hurt and pain he caused? What effect does this have on the Cullen family? This is a strong Bella, who does eventually get angry with Edward and put him in his place.
A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 34210
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: December 10, 2010
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: August 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Truth
I suck at writing reviews, so I try to keep them simple. I thought this chapter was well written and flowed nicely. It makes sense that Bella is working through her anger and pain in sleep. As she heals, time will come for her to acknowledge her feelings to Edward in-person.
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: August 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Fatherly Advice
I loved it especially this part:
"I was hurt by that, not because she was doing something reckless, which it was, but because she remembered me being stern and overprotective, not loving. I need to change that; I just worry what it might drive her to do.”
Engaging chapter. I hope some confidence comes back to Edward and does not stay all wussy. Nice blend of writing Carlisle flashback with his conversation w/ Edward. Author's Response: OMG BEST REVIEW!!!! U ARE ONE OF MY FAVORITE PPL TODAY!!!!! :) LOL
Ok since you were SO nice here is the un-beta'd teaser it's Edward's POV "
“Oh, look Jaz, he’s alive!” Emmett screamed like Dr. Frankenstein, it’s one of his favorite movies—he thinks it is hilarious.
Shit I thought, why did Jasper and Emmett have to play chess in the living room today of all days. They could have been in Jasper’s study, or…elsewhere.
I started to walk by without acknowledging them, I knew it was rude but I just could not face them…not yet.
“Emmett did you forget he doesn’t talk to us. He only acknowledges that we exist Bella is around,” Jasper stage whispered to Emmett.
“Yeah, because he doesn’t want her to see what depressed-emo-jackass he is,” they bantered back and forth."
I hope you liked the teaser and thank-you for your kind encouragement .
Please keep reading and reviewing
~E
Summary: 
Bella Swan has a frightening past, and a secret that's haunted her for years. She meets a young man who oozes horror, but she isn't afraid. He's got the answers she's been seeking, and she won't relent. She has no idea what she's getting into....
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 61191
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2010 Updated: September 12, 2010
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: July 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Engaging chapter. Fascinating development concerning J/A. I'm glad Edward does not have his existence. I can't wait to read the next update. Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the story, and the J/A twist. I thought through that for so long, and wanted to get it right. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and I hope to see you on the next chapter!!
Summary: What if Emmett, not Edward was the single vamp out? Edward and Bella met while she was human, they married, had Nessie and Bella was changed; all while Emmett remained single. No Rosalie. Now ten years after Nessie is born the Cullens move to Hanover, New Hampshire to start college and come across an exotic young beauty that captures Emmett's heart. Who is Gabrielle and why does Emmett feel so drawn to her? Can Edward and Bella help him understand these strange new feelings, and will his story have a happy ending?
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 44552
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2010 Updated: March 14, 2012
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: July 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Time for Change
fun chapter Author's Response: Thanks forthe review. I hope you keep reading!
Reviewer: comeundone Signed
Date: July 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Moving In
Awesome chapter. I also love some John Cena. Author's Response: Lol! I'm just glad someone got that reference. He's what I always pictured Emmett as in my head when I read the books.
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