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Penname: MinaBR [Contact]
Real name: Mina
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Member Since: February 03, 2010
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"One of God's own prototypes. A high-powered mutant of some kind never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live and too rare to die." - Raoul Duke.


 


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Summary:

 

 

 One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

 

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic. Follow Cullen’s and Co to see what it means to be Beautiful, Dirty and Rich.

 

Warning: This story has mature themes from my smutty subconscious. If you don’t like words that rhyme with ‘duck’ and ‘grunt’ please look elsewhere. You have been warned.

 

PTB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 138439
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2010


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Local God

Oh, dear... Where is the rest of it? In your previous host there  were so many more chapters!!! I was dying to see EPOV on the night with Bella... u r killing me!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi- I know- they are all in the q- my beta here is really fast so it will be up soon.

 
The Window by cullen-gal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

Bella sees a strange figure outside her bedroom window late one night. Edward is on the hunt. What happens when they meet? AU, OOC, lemons in later chapters with a rather delicious Darkward!

WARNING! This story contains content, such as extreme mature language and rape themes, or abusive sexual activity that some readers may find offensive.  Please do not read if any of this subject matter bothers you. Thank you.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 26106
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's the best fic ever! Please update!

 
Summary:

 

  

The lovely blinkie thanks to Jaime Arkin


 

Banner made for @kas90- Family Ties and Guarding Hearts enjoy :D

What do you protect, your family, your career, your heart?

 

Edward Cullen and Bella Swan were never more than simple acquaintances in high school. Besides some common classes, the same lunch period, and walking on the same stage during graduation, Edward and Bella never crossed each other’s paths.

How deeply rooted are the demons from their past? Will loving each other be enough to bring them out of the suffocation? It all starts with a reunion…

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129592
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2009 Updated: March 05, 2011


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Behind the Green Eyes

I'm ANGRIER with Edward!!!! And if I was Bella I would not invest in a man whose heart would always be on some other woman. Even worse, a dead woman!!! How can someone compete with that? Dead people are always perfect and flawless in their pedestal. Bella, turn around and run for your life!!!

 
Made to Live Alone by JustTry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1411]
Summary:

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All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: November 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Friday, July 16th

Okay... I really like your writting, but I have to say that Bella is a bit too neurotic. And Edward? Why does he put up with all Bella's freak outs? I mean day know each other for 6 days and they are already discussing the relationship? What's up with Edward's super hero complex? Why does he want to save Bella so badly? What are his issues?

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Friday, July 9th

Dear Lord, every single chapter of this fic I cry my eyes out... You really can do drama/angst.



Author's Response:

I don't know if that's a good thing or not ;) The story will get lighter soon, I promise. But just an FYI, there will be a long journey until Bella feels 'right'

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Saturday, July 17th

Ok, isn't it weird that Edward has the keys for Bella's house but Bella has never seen Edward's house? What's up with that?

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Thursday, July 22nd

WTF! I was almost liking Bella. It's about time she pushes the head out of her ass. Come on, why would anyone stick around someone so fucking lame

 
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1967]
Summary:

 

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Is Edward really interested in Bella or is he just lonely?



Author's Response:

{That is a very good question; one that Bella herself will ponder upon at some point. Buit, since we're omniscient, the answer is yes. He really does like her.}

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

 
Summary:

Bella comes to Forks as the overweight, excessively pale, book worm. No guy wants anything to do with her. Edward Cullen is the popular, smart, athletic, honor student who all the girls swoon over, despite the fact that he's never expressed interest in any of them.

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What if Bella really had a reason to have self-esteem issues? What if Edward had a secret that no one else knew?

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Oh," Jacob hesitates. "I just figured the way he acted around you the other night and how you were going to his party that maybe you guys were..." He trails off.

"Well, no." I clarify. "We are only biology partners."

"OH! I get," he nearly shouts. "Like benefriends."

"WHAT?!" I yell, "NO!" I pull the phone away from my ear and press the TALK button to end the call.

The phone rings again.

"No Jacob! That is NOT what is going on between Edward and I, AT ALL, you perv!"

"Bella?" Edward's voice asks.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 128763
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2010 Updated: March 22, 2011


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Fight

Being a fat woman myself, I've never really been into 'fat Bella' stories. Until now... There is so much heart and truth in your words that I can't help smilining, crying, feeling... It's actually refreshing and sweet without dismissing all the problems and discrimination that fat people endure. Congratulations you touched my heart and for that I can only thank you.

Keep up the awesome work, kisses.

 

 

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Caught

Isabella CULLEN? faux pas or has it a deeper meaning?

 
Parable of the Proxy by 10ESON Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Vendetta.

Jasper lost Alice when she tried to save Edward from the Volturi alone. Now Bella will be proxy for his revenge. Changing her: easy. Using her: simple.

Resisting his lust for her: impossible.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3512
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2010 Updated: November 30, 2010


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Homeostatis

Wow, really great plot, keep it coming!

 
Summary:

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. After years apart Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or Set her free?

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 234348
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2010 Updated: December 27, 2012


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: You've Made Your Bed...

Why is Bella so fucking pathetic?

And why is Edward such a self righteous prick?

And why people think it`s ok to condone such shit behaviour just because the guy is named Edward?

Just... WTF?

 
Summary:

If you faced losing everything…

Would you trade your mortality to keep just a part of what you have? Count the cost before you decide.

One year after BD and all is not well. Bella's newborn year was way too easy. The newest Cullens are much harder to handle-both of them. Jasper has a tough year ahead dealing with these two! Flashes of human memories add to the tension and mystery.   

Once the venom courses through your veins it’s too late to change your mind.

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Carlisle Cullen considers himself a doctor first and a vampire second. His focus is to protect life. What he finds at a fatal crash seen causes him to break the treaty his family has honored for over 80 years. The entire Cullen family will face the consequences of his last minute decision. Now the wolves are pissed and the Volturi are getting nervous.

Scott and Diane started out on a family vacation they would never finish.  After losing their lives and children through the fires of transformation, can they still hang on to each other?  Diane's human memories, once thought lost, are slowly breaking through in the strangest of ways.  Why does she recognize the vampire in one of Esme's treasured albums?  By the time the Cullens figure out what's going on, all they can do is prepare for the inevitable.

This is a story of love, loss, and picking up the pieces. Even for immortals time only moves forward. There really is no way back.

Award

 Aug. 2011 Nominated in the best Angst/Drama Category

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 162730
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2011 Updated: February 08, 2012


Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: 29-Choices

OMG, how did I miss this story? I'm so glad we found each other on facebook, otherwise, I'm ashamed to confess that I would never have read your story. And that would have been a pity... It's beautifully written and I truly admire an author who writes the characters as they need to be written. Thank you for sharing this with us.



Author's Response:

Mina,

Thank you so very much for all of the reviews! I am glad we found each other, too. My stuff isn't what most of the fandom like to read and that's okay.

The biggest completement you can give me is to read the sequel, Spinal Cord, and to tell your freinds about my work. ;)

Thank you again.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: 19-Answers in the Desert

Okay, I haven't reviewed in a awhile... but that's your own fault! This story simply has me hooked! I can't stop reading. 

The previous chapters were just... waw, It's already 01:13 and I'm pretty sure I won't be able to stop reading.



Author's Response:

LOL. Knowing I've kept you glued to my tale is a greater compliment than a review for each chapter.

Thank you.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: 24-Danger has a Name

Will you be too annoyed if I say that I hate Aro? Damn, his mind games...



Author's Response:

I don't like Aro either. This is what I think canon Aro really would have done. When I originally read Breaking Dawn I was shocked when Aro walked away. I kept reading, excpeting him to come out of the shadows or let us know he was coming in another book. When I read "The End" I actually shouted "What? No way would Aro leave them alone!" Yeah, I talk to myself...out loud...a lot. My children think it's funny.

Thank again!

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: 11-Lessons to Learn

Who is Yani? My poor fingernails won't survive this story, lol.

The banter between Dianne and Scott... is simply brilliant.



Author's Response:

Since you finished reading my story all in one shot, (do you ever sleep?) you already know the answer. ;)

Thank you for completementing my banter. That was a lot of fun to write.

Thanks again,

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: 10-Wolves

I'm still biting my fingernails... By the way I loved the meeting, specially this: Carlisle tensed but kept his voice even. "What would you have done in my place?" Sam made no reply. "We told you about it as soon as we could. You have to realize we did so in good faith. We could have simply hidden our actions from you and disappeared. Jacob, did Sam tell you the reasons I had for changing them?

"



Author's Response:

Ah, Carlisle, always riding the line between diplomat and vampire leader.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: 9-The Meeting

I'm biting my fingernails... I want to know!



Author's Response:

As you can see, suspense/mystery is my thing. Glad you liked it.

Thank you again for another review.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: 7-Family Ties

This was a beautiful chapter. Edward is being... well, himself - as always I love him.



Author's Response:

I really wanted to get Edward right as SM wrote him. I'm not interested in changing him. I am glad you are enjoying my story.

Thank you.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: 8-Actions Speak Louder Than Words

I didn't really get Rosalie on this chapter... I mean, I thought her main objection to a girl becoming a vampire was never being able to have any kids... Diane already has them... So, what's the problem?



Author's Response:

Rosalie doesn't only miss not having children. She misses being human...all the way to the "growing old and grey surrounded by grandchildren" part of life. She said in Eclipse something like "If our stories had happy endings, we'd be under grave stones now." She wants what she cannot have.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: 5-Bonded

That was such a sweet gift to share... It would surely make things a lot easier for most couples, lol.



Author's Response:

Coming up with an unique vampire gift is not that easy. Not that Scott and Diane's is completely original. However, as of the time I wrote it, I hadn't come across it in the fandom. The extra connection just made sense for them.

Thank you.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: 6-Restriction

Just like most women... Diane knows more than she tells. What is she hiding?

The Carlisle talk, lol... just lol.



Author's Response:

I tried to keep Carlisle true to canon. I could see him telling Esme what happened later while laughing.

Thanks again for your reviews.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: 4-Caring For The Children

Finally, some typical newborn reaction, at least from Diane. I love the way Carlisle has organized things so that the children are well taken care of. The ltters to each children... well, that was touching.



Author's Response:

I wanted to explore the newborn reaction thing, but not to the point where it would be the focus. That has been done, a lot.

Ah, the letters...I cried when I wrote that.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: 3-Hunting Is Not Just A Guy Thing

I'm so glad this story is complete. Otherwise, I would be really pissed at this cliffie. Great job describing their first hunting experience.



Author's Response:

As you can see, I like to leave the chapters in a cliffe. Some are big, some small. ;) They're just so fun to write.

Thank you for another review.

~MA

 
Reviewer: MinaBR Signed
Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: 2-Awakening

Two newborns... And they haven't attacked each other.... That's remarkable! Perhaps they will be Bella like in regards to self-control. I'm wondering about the kids though.

Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Scott and Diane recognize each other because I didn't want the story being about them fighting their mates. Hmmm, that would make a good fic though.

Thanks again.

~MA

 




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