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Just an  English teacher who writes in spare time.


 


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The Elite by Fate_of_Gabriel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 509]
Summary:

"Doing what rich people do is easy."

Same old story, Twilight twist. St. Olaf's is a prestigious boarding school, dripping with money, sex, and social hierarchy. But there's really only one question you have to ask yourself: are you one of Them or one of The Elite?

Thanks to Patsy for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 149923
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: May 24, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Rough and Tumble

Awesome chapter -- I am really liking Alice and Emmett together, but I figure you will probably end up putting her with Jasper eventually.

Maren

 
Summary:

A Breaking Dawn alternative story.  Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon.  Complications interrupt and they return to Forks.  Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly.  This story is an A/U from BD.  There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle.  It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.

Canon Pairings.  Lots of romantic lemons.  AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: May 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Beautiful story with reat ending.  Thanks for writing it.  Sorry that jacob died, but really it made more sense than the baby love plot.

Look forward to more writing from you,
Maren



Author's Response:

Hi Maren!

Thanks so much!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!  I'll be back very soon with more!

Julie

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 70: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I was looking for Jake/Bella stories -- love this pairing, so that's how I found your tale YSar.

Its great and I really enjoy it.

maren



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Summary:

It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?

 

 New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Gotta Be Somebody

Please please update soon -- I can't wait!!

Great storyline -- Edward was a prick!

Maren

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: March 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - You and Me

awesome chapter!!! Loving it

 

If edward comes back now, I will be pissed.

 

maren

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Thank God you had Bella and Ilene tell Edward off.  He has always been a little too controlling and self-flagellaing for my taste.  Bella is better off with Emmett.

Keep writing please --Im loving it.

Maren

 
Summary:

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Thanx to the beautiful Anne Cullen for the banner!

 

Picking up from Edward's leave in New Moon, Bella never rescued Edward, Edward never came back, but somebody did ... 

 This story is set five years after that sad day Edward left Bella in the woods.

For years Bella searches for Edward, eager to tell him her new found secret.  As Bella gives in to her fears, that Edward really is gone, she runs into her past in the least likely place.  Only to find out, her past has a secret to tell as well.

 

"The smell of the worn book had distracted me from the wonderful aroma that had engulfed the room.  It had subdued my venom, had forced me back into a human-like state, my inner monster slowly crawling back into his darkened hole.  I swallowed one last time, and decided to glance at this glorious teacher.  Obviously he was a man of impeccable taste.  I might actually enjoy Senior Literature this year.  

I glanced up quickly from under my eyelids, my amber eyes focusing on a lanky form in front of me.  I froze.  

… Oh shit. "

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 31919
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: New Decorations

Enjoyed reading this so far -- I can't wait to find out how Edward became human again.  guess his blood was singing to Bella, just like hers did to him.

Keep writing!

Maren

 
Another Day Dawns by Panda1499 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 864]
Summary:

Seventy-five years is a long time if you're human.  For an immortal its a drop in the bucket!

It is seventy-five years after Renesmee was born, and the Cullen family is moving back to Forks.  How do they react to being "home"?  And what do they do when yet another once in a lifetime (or rather existence) event occurs?  And how do the Volturi take to this development?

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Marcus, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 75236
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Gross

Enjoying this story very much - keep the story going!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you are liking it. Thanks for the review!

<3 Manda

 
Summary:

After a week apart, our five couples are re-united with the ones they love. Fluff, Alice and Jasper POV


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 920
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: January 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Back Home

Enjoyed the story.

 
Second Chances by aerialla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 221]
Summary:

 After trying to attack Bella on her birthday and the farewell of his family can Jasper get a second chance. Can he live on his own and resist the urge for human blood. *Sequel to my one shot story titled One Drop which should be read for better clarity*

Story is so far in Jasper's POV and goes AU immediately following Bella's birthday party.

SecondChances

 The beautiful banner image was made by the incredible Emerald_Rosalie.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 50423
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: July 08, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Confidence

Glad Jasper ignored the blood -- please get rid of Janine soon.  Maren

 
Summary:

America's Next Top Model- THE competition for all aspiring models.  Naturally, once Rosalie decides to move on, she will want to compete.  But before she even arrives at the house, Alice's vision is blocked by some unseen obstacles.  Rosalie has to remember her past and learn to move on even further than before.

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, Crossover Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 7665
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Starting Over

I LOOOVE Top Model and I think Rosalie's character will be up to her neck in trouble there with all the other girls who think they are "all that" as well.

Can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

there will be plenty of drama, don't worry.  i just submitted the second chapter so it should be up in a week or so

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Having Some Fun

Great chapter -- interesting to see Rose compromise.

Loving it,

Maren



Author's Response:

there was no way i would let rose get a haircut.  it jsut wasn't going to happen.  and i sort of wanted to bring edward in.

 
Unexpected Changes by twitina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

 

Alyssa Brooks is enjoying a night by the lake with her boyfriend when they are attacked.  She wakes up to find that she has been changed into a vampire.  This story coincides with the newborn attack on the Cullen family in Eclipse - and will go beyond that time.

She meets the Volturi - and Demetri.  And she falls hard for him.  Visit Italy with her and learn more about the Volturi!!

Aro and Sulpicia's backstories are here...along with some of the other minor characters.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Afton, Alec, Alice, Alistair, Amun, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Benjamin, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charles, Charlotte, Chelsea, Collin, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Kachiri, Kate, Kebi, Leah, Liam, Maggie, Makenna, Marcus, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Randall, Renata, Rosalie, Sam, Santiago, Seth, Siobhan, Stefan, Sulpicia, Tanya, Tia, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 79207
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Unexpected

More more more!!!!

Loving Alyssa's story.

Maren



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

There's more coming!!  I still have 2 chapters ready to go...I'll be sending one tomorrow to my beta!

I'm so glad you've continued to follow along - and that you are enjoying Alyssa's story!!

Mmmm - Demetri, is all I have to say.  lol

 

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Judgment Day

A siren - how interesting --ALyssa and Demetri need to run nw and go to the cullens and fake their deaths .

 

I know its not reralistic, but your characterization is really good and I find myself rooting for them.

Maren



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!

I'm so glad you like them!  I have some big plans for Alyssa and Demetri...hope you'll follow along!

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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All canon couples!


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oMG --this was good. Please tell me that they are gonna hook up.

Maren



Author's Response:

Sorry as much as I love EmxBel, this is all canon pairings. But that doesn't mean I can't have fun with them...I am soo wicked!

Thanks for your review.

 
Summary:

What if someone was watching when Edward left? What if they found sympathy for Bella to replace thier anger? This story explores that possibility and throws in the fact that Bella blocks out her year in Forks completely from her memory too.

The rating is for future chapters, in case you were wondering.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 25549
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Tori

do more with this -- tori is such a sympathetic character wit your writing --i actually liked her

maren

 
Summary:

 

When the dawn breakings the day has to come to an end and that is when darkness descends on our world.

 

Prologue

    The truest and simplest fact of life is that nothing last forever. It doesn’t matter if you are human or otherwise; someone out there holds your life in their hands. But things don’t always happen the way you expect them to. Sometimes an individual comes along and intervenes; effectively postponing the evitable. For the Cullen clan and their friends, that intervention was me. They were living in what was a seemingly perfect existence, but each and every one of them had a sickening feeling in the pits of their stomachs. There was a threat overshadowing them that desired nothing more than to destroy their serenity.
    I could say that I choose to get involved because it was the right thing to do, but that would just sound cliché. The true is that I did it for vengeance. I did it out of anger, hatred and resentment. I did it for regret, guilt and to atone for the lives I had destroyed. I did it for a moral belief in justice and that all have the right to live their lives without fear that someday someone will come along and destroy everything they hold dearest. I did it for the family I had lost and the one I had to gain. And I did it for love. I could have just as easily walked away and never looked back, but had I done that, I wouldn’t have been me.
    My name is Taven Curry and I am a vampire. It sound strange, but believe me, there are far stranger things in this world than just vampires. I am not what you would call your typical vampire; in more ways that one. For example, my moral compass points true north. I have a very clear understanding of what is right and what is wrong. However, just because I know when something is wrong doesn’t mean I always follow in suit. I am far from a saint. I have loyally and willingly served a trio of tyrants who stood for everything I hated and threatened to destroy the last person alive who remember who I once was before I became the monster. I have also hunted, killed; feed and I would be lying if I said I didn’t enjoy it. A moment of true satisfaction for an eternity of regret. A burden of guilt that I am happy to bare. It acts as a constant reminder that some part of me is still human. A tool I use to keep my demons at bay. It is a constant struggle and I welcome any help I can get. With the things I am capable of, I fear for the world and all its inhabitance should the day come when the darkness consumes me completely.
    There is one thing that all vampires have in common; we were not always. I was human once, normal…well as normal as any seventeen year old pubescent male can be. I had a family once and friends. And I had one best friend that I care about more than anyone in the entire world and she changed mine more than once. A very larger part of who I was, who I became and who I am is because of her influence. Life has a twisted sense of humor and a way of altering a person permanently in the most unexplainable ways. She had changed my life when I was human, but neither in my wildest dream nor my darkest nightmares did I ever expect her to do it again in my life as vampire. Though time and circumstances had separated Bella and me for years, another circumstance had brought us back together and in the end she was my saving grace.
    My name is Taven Curry, I am a vampire and this is the story of what happens after happily ever after ends.

 

Thanks to my banner makers for this one. I'm still looking for someone with talent, time and know how to make a new one for this story. Whatever you want. If it fits the story I will post it.

Big Thanks to my readers and reviews and especially my beta, qjmom. Constantly rocking my world one post at a time.

NOTICE TO ALL Dated 04/21/11. Okay, so my life a changed alot since I started writing this. I've lost my desire to continue. I had intended on adding a few more chapters of Leah's POV, which is why I didn't continue. But since I'm unable to, I am just going to post the last remaining chapters I have had written. So I'm going to type them and try to post one a week until it is done. Sorry it has taken so long. Life goes on unfortuantly and we can stay 19 forever

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Afton, Alec, Alice, Alistair, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Marcus, Other Character, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 157708
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: April 14, 2010


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Killing Time

So far this is a really great setup for a continuation of BD.  Love the name Taven.  I am wondering if Leah and Taven get together just by your intro.

Can't wait to read more.

Maren

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Bella Is Going to Kill Me

keep writing this is good

maren

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Decisions

great so far -- liked Rosalie's wuestion --seems llike she would need to know where she fis in -- really digging Leah and Taven

Maren

 
Summary:

It only took death for him to realize how much he loved her.

For anyone who ever wondered "what-if" for Leah and Jacob. "What-if" Jacob had never broken away? "What-if" he hadn't imprinted? "What-if" life was completely different? NC-17 for extremely crude language.

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-Thanks to JaneJoke for the banner. I had to play around forever to get this up!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 206365
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Life isn't perfect, especially if you're me

No no no --she cannot die or be a vamp.  you have to figure a way out of this.

Maren



Author's Response:

Turning Leah into a vampire is out of the question (at least for me). She is very self-loathing now. I couldn't imagine how much she'd hate herself if she was a vampire. She'd go straight to Italy and beg for Aro to take her out.

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Stupid Love Hate Relationships

oh yeah baby -- you had better update soon -- this is just getting too good!!!!

maren



Author's Response:

I've got my fingers crossed that you'll continue to enjoy it!!

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Dogs aren't the only ones who play poker

happy ever after -- pretty please!!!

great story --its #1 on my must reads when I check in

maren



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you. I've never been number 1 at something before. It's kinda cool.

 
Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: The heart wants what it wants

awwwwwww  so sweet and mushy

sam still needs to get his ass kicked though



Author's Response:

One of the outtakes I've written has an interesting conversation between Sue and Sam.

 
Summary:

A Murmur of Fire in the Vein

One stormy Seattle night, the last person Bella expects to see appears without warning at her door. How will history - hers and his - impact their unexpected and growing friendship?

FitV art by Touchstone.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 97977
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: In Which Jasper Did Laundry

I like it --keep writing this story.

Maren

 
Like Night and Day by EllaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1272]
Summary:

“Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth.”

Alice’s werewolf blindness never allowed her to see Bella’s cliff diving at La Push, so she and the rest of the Cullens continued to stay away from Forks.

Bella struggles with her changing feelings for Jacob, her pain from Edward’s rejection, and her lingering feelings of love for the vampire who broke her heart and disappeared. Will Jacob and Bella find their way to each other and get their chance at happiness? And when a miserable and heartbroken Edward returns to beg Bella for forgiveness, what will she do?

As relationships change, Victoria continues her vendetta.

** Nominated for a Bellie Award for "Best 'Edward Who?' Fic!" **

** Nominated for two Indie Twific Awards for "Best Love Triangle" and "Best New Moon Story!" **

** Like Night and Day placed second in The Wolfpack Awards for "Favorite Jacob" **

Thanks you to catonspeed and the ladies of Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs for the new banner and your general awesomeness!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 127337
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010


Reviewer: Maren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate

wow -- enjjoying this and I just happened on it -- keep writing chapters!!

maren

 




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