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Summary:

Set during New Moon.  Bella didn't jump.  But a vision from Alice sends the Cullens running back to Forks.  What if Bella wasn't the only one who fell apart when she lost the love of her life?  What if Edward couldn't handle being apart?  What if he fell?  How far could he fall?  Who committed the murders at the Swan residence and what happened to Charlie?  Just how bad can it get? 

Read and find out!

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Thanks to the amazingly talented Anne Cullen for the Banner.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Kim, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 77631
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2010


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Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Blackness


 
Primary Colors by Jaxidy Alpha Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 266]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a fire-fighter who has run away from a haunting past in the city of Chicago. Bella Swan is a blossoming artist who is trying to rebuild her life after a tragic event leaves her with a broken heart.  Their paths cross when the once simple town of Forks becomes the backdrop for a series of mysterious arsons.  Is it just a coincidence? Or has someone's past come back to haunt them? 

 

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NEW BANNER!!! by Megs at ADF (adifferentforest) Thank you!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 60967
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: September 02, 2010


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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Charcoal

Poor Eric *sniff* Great chapter

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Work of Art II

The campfire to remember Jake is a lovley idea! Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Watercolor

I really didn't see the James-not-being-part-coming! Amazing plot!

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Brushes

Great start to the story :)

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Blank Canvas

Wow. Very sad chapter. I teared up once or twice!

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Grayscale

Amazing chapter! Loved seeing the Edward-Charlie transaction :)

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Still Life

And they finally meet! Lovley chapter.

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Easel

Awsome chapter! I loved all the different P.O.V.s!

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Pigment

Great to see Bella in her element. And Alice...of course Alice.

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pallette Knife

'My Town'- I don't know why but I really loved it when Charlie said that. Great chapter.

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Blending

Awh shit! Poor Edward. Fantastic chapter

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Background

That may have just made me hate Jess and Lauren more than i already do. Wow that's an accomplishment :)

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sketch

Amazing chapter :) Really well written.

 
Summary:

 

The Volturi took over the government 15 years ago. It's time to take back what's rightfully theirs. It's time to stop the injustices of cruel old men. It's time for revenge - there will be blood.    

 

Charlie's red eyes rose to meet mine. "I want them dead; every last one of them. When I'm through, there should be no Volturi left on this godforsaken earth. I don't care what it takes, I just want them dead."


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 43169
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2011


Reviewer: LostHalo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bella

Great first chapter!

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Charlie

Loved Charlies POV!

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Bella

Nice chapter. Bless poor Charlie, he's so clueless!

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Edward

Amazing chapter! Loved hearing Edwards point of view.

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Rosalie

Really clever spin of what really happened in the book :)

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Jasper

Loved Jasper and Alice!

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Alice

Great chapter! Even though they might just all die....

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Rosalie

Loved the Emmet and Rose interaction...too funny!

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Edward

Well shit...don't mess with Edward I guess.

 
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Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella

Crazy as a bed bug! Love it!

 
Reviewer: LostHalo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella

Crazy as a bed bug! Love it!

 




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