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Penname: Sunfeathers [Contact]
Real name: Dawn
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Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7576]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Play and Pray

I followed a rec by Kassiah over at Edwardville and I'm so glad I did! What a fabulous story! I read almost exclusively AH stories but I am completely hooked your premise and your fantastic writing. Looking forward to more!

 
Here We Go Again by xrxdanixrx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 629]
Summary:

*INDEFINITE HIATUS*

 

 

All through high school, Bella was in love with her best friend who was in love with her, too.  Both never expressing their feelings and never knowing how the other felt.  In the end, Edward decided to go across the other side of the country leaving Bella with only one memory of him: his journal. Heart-broken and confused by it’s content, she casted it aside. Years later, Edward moves back home, but Bella wants to move on with her life.  Can they really stay away from each other, or will history repeat itself?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 118790
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: October 23, 2010


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Goodbye Kitty

Well this was some good progress - Bella seems to be warming up to Edward. Jake's a nuisance - I won't be sorry to see him go, but I do like it when Jealousward makes an appearance. :)



Author's Response:

Jealousward is the best! There needs to be an entire fic about Jealousward.  And.. don't worry about Jake.  That's all I'll say.

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Some Life In Me by Pixiechick Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 530]
Summary:

He was a happy, successful family man, until a single instant changed everything and he lost everything he held dear. Unable to deal with his loss, he walked away from everything else.  She was the average small town girl, and in a staggering instant her life changed. Fate threw them together.

Banner by Belindella

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 146963
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2010 Updated: February 24, 2011


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Homecoming

I think this is my first review, but I am enjoying your story so much. I really, really like your Edward and Bella ... and I am so glad things are moving in a romantic direction for them. I was hoping they would. :)

But poor Bella ... I hope Edward is able to convince her there was more to that kiss than him feeling lonely ...

 
Hate Me by xrxdanixrx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 744]
Summary:

*NOW COMPLETE*

 

 

Awkward Bella had only ever had a crush on one guy,
the one guy known for stringing girls along.  When Bella's
advances were rejected, her world was flipped inside out. 
Several years later, she's now the female version of the catalyst
that changed her life and now it's her turn for payback.

 

A Fanmade banner and blinkie by iDrinkBloodshake! Thanks so much!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 168369
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2010 Updated: October 29, 2010


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Genesis

Ok, I'm hooked. :) 



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear it... or see it.  lol. ;-D

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Temptation

Hahaha - wouldn't it be *great* if she didn't come back? Just left him hanging? ;)

Can't wait to see how she plays her game - I hope she always stays one step ahead of him - I like her much more than I like him. 

Would love to think that back in the day he rejected Bella because he actually liked her and he wasn't about to give in to something like that. I LOVE it that he is totally smitten with her now ...

 



Author's Response:

AHAH! That would definitely be great.  That would also mean the end of my story. lmao.  I can have it be a 3 chapter story.  The end.  :-)

It's funny because both are sort of the same, Yet, Bella is more likeable in this.  Maybe I guess because Bella has a bit more backstory right now as to why she's doing these things.  One step ahead -- she will be.


 
Of Mustangs & Men by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 694]
Summary:

A perfect life is never what it seems.  A broken Mustang, a small town, a failing farm, expensive clothes, and one cheating husband. Will Edward help Bella discover who she really is or will she leave him heartbroken?

Many thanks to the multi-talented xrxdanixrx for the fantastic banner & to RobManiPorn for the Manip.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 127940
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2011


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: October 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great revelations in this chapter! I'm glad Bella is speaking to a lawyer before she talks to Edward ... this - combined with the news about Mike and Tanya - will help him see how her marriage truly is and has been over. I just hope he's not upset she kept it from him this long. 

Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Oh - lots happening to change Bella's life in such a short period of time!

Lots more of the Stang on the way.

XO

Les and Mandy

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh jeez! What a clusterf*ck of misunderstanding! Because I'm certain Edward was trying to tell Tanya no - you could hear him telling her to stop - but the hussy was pushing herself on him - and in walks insecure Bella and it all goes to hell in a handbasket. I'm glad at least Edward realized what she saw and how it looked. Now he can run after her and *hopefully* speak to her before she ends up with Jake. Cuz I get the feeling she's looking for more than just a "drink" from Jake at the moment.

Great cliffie - dying for the next update now!



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ah-misunderstandings... they happen at the worst times!

Lots more of the Stang on the way.

XO

Les and Mandy

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: October 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ahhhh ... I was going to kill him when he was contemplating f*cking Tanya just for kicks! Thank goodness the skank actually turned him off and he realized what (and who) he really wanted. I hope that's the last we see of the T-bag ...

As for the way the chapter ended ... well, I'm glad they reconnected, only I wonder how much Bella will remember? I really hope she finds the courage to be honest with Edward. I think he'll be understanding if he hears the truth about her marriage sooner rather than later. And from *her* - not somebody else.

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi hun,

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Oh, these two! She's overwhelmed-trying to deal with her emotions and figuring out what she really wants in her life.

That much alcohol---yeah, ouch!

Lots more of the Stang on the way.

XO

Mandy and Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well, I'm very glad Bella has a plan *and* that she let Edward know what Mike said about his family and the farm. I hope Edward can have patience and faith in Bella - I have a feeling after all these years she'll be the one with the upper hand, not Mike.

Looking forward to more! :)



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Patience... yes, that is a good word for these two!

More of the Stang on the way.

XO

Les & Mandy

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh my goodness, I literally cried through that chapter! (From the Heidi encounter onwards ...) Thank you, sincerely, for giving us the conversation afterwards - at least we know he figured out what she saw and went to her ... hopefully she'll listen to reason and *hopefully* he will say those 3 little words! 

Sad to see this story end - I've enjoyed it so much! :)



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading & reviewing.

Ekkk--the 3 words! A massive step for the Stang... Stay tuned for more on the way.

XO

Mandy & Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm so relieved the truth is finally out! And Edward didn't push her away! I can't wait to see how they handle things now that their feelings are out in the open. 

Wet tire change, you say? Oh, the possibilities ... ;D



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Hmmm Wet tire change...um...er..._________________

Yeah-more of that and the Stang coming up

XO

Mandy & Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, I can tell this is going to be so good ... can't wait for chapter 2! :)



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Lots more on the way with the 'Stang! Chapter 2 will be up on the weekend.

XO

Mandy and Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter, gals! I can't wait to see what all goes down at this roast. I hope Edward doesn't continue his thoughts on Tanya (trying it out after all) but rather, is able to keep himself open to Bella. I hope he's understanding when she tells him about Mike - and I hope Bella gets the chance to tell him! I can see something getting in their way - whether Tanya pulls something or he hears about it in another way.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

So glad you are loving the Stang. Oh, you are right, these two need to talk, and we'll get to that!

Much more on the way.

Mandy and Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved it! And I hope her answer is YES!! (Somehow I don't think it will be that easy though ...)

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Thanks so much for sharing your writing! :)



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing and Happy Holidays to you!

Hmmmm---you don't think it will be that easy eh?

Have to wait and see!

XO

Mandy & Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

:(

I hope they're not apart for long ... I hope Bella figures out a way to divorce Mike without bringing any sh*t down on the farm ... and I hope Edward stays hopeful *and* faithful while Bella is gone.

Happy New Year ...

*sniff*



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Oh! No sniffing!!

Not to worry... there is a plan. *evil laugh*

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

XO

Mandy and Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Go Bella! I love seeing her take charge of her life. I feel bad for Edward, but he's just got to hang in there. No more drinking and defending himself from slutty women! Lol.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

 
By the Numbers by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary:

 

Five people take a trip to Alaska.

One hike to a hot spring and everything changes.

Two people find something they never expected.

Sometimes spontaneous is a good thing.

 

Many thanks to the incredible xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner! Thanks so much hun! XO

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 130205
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2011 Updated: July 25, 2012


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh this is going to be GOOD!! Looking forward to following along! :D



Author's Response:

Hi there hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Lots more on the way for our Edward.

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am loving this Edward! He's so sweet and sincere ... I hope Bella feels similarly smitten by him. (How can she not?) :D



Author's Response:

Hi hun,

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

:) So glad you are enjoying.

More on the way.

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is just so sweet! And yeah, I've totally got that song stuck in my head now, lol. 

Looking forward to more! :D



Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

So glad you are enjoying these two... and yeah, the songs been in my head for weeks now! LOL.

More on the way.

XO

Les

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen lives in a world with no complications, and he likes it that way.

 

An undeniable attraction, a motorcycle, a blog, and a complication. What is really going on down at the Lone Star?

 

Down at the Lone Star Banner

 

Blinkie by the wonderful melmelee


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 43921
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2011 Updated: July 19, 2012


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

YES! We definitely like a forward, bossy Edward! And I was *so* hoping he'd take her home with him! (Or at least offer - I have a feeling she won't acquiesce, lol.) 

Another great chapter, ladies! I'm so glad Edward is taking such a sincere interest in Bella (even if he's berating himself for it at every turn). She's in such need of support and confidence and I think ultimately, this job, these friends - and this man - will bring her both of those things.

Looking forward to more! :D

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: July 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh boy, looks like "Sparky" needs someplace to stay. Hmm ... Edward? Any suggestions on that? ;D

Great chapter, ladies. I am so thrilled that Edward is being so affected by Bella. I wonder how long he can hold out and what will push him (or her for that matter) over the edge of keeping things "professinoal/platonic?"

Thanks for the update ... looking forward to next time!

 
Wild Card by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 349]
Summary:

Edward Cullen's life revolved around his casino. He thought he had it all. She would prove him wrong.

Wild Card

Banner by the amazing xrxdanixrx!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 38379
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2011 Updated: May 05, 2012


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: June 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, I'm really glad he's feeling alone and disgusted with himself! At least he's made that first step ... realizing how f*cked up his life is. Excellent chapter - I was dying to know what Edward made of Bella since at first he seemed completely unimpressed with her inside and out. But now he's clearly intrigued and attracted against his better judgement. How will this all play out? I can't wait to see ... :)

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: June 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh boy, the night just got even more interesting! I love the way Bella is handling herself, and I have to wonder if Edward's been watching her on the cameras. Can't wait to see how the rest of the night goes!

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, how I'd love to know what Edward was thinking during this encounter! I know at the end of the first chapter he was handed her file and shown a surveillance film of her at work. I'd love to think he was intrigued/attracted/impressed. ;)

He wasn't too much of a jerk here, but he was arrogant and intimidating. I like that Bella held her own even if she was nervous. I wonder if he knows about Charlie, and how hard Bella works to keep her life afloat?

Looking forward to more!

 




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