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Bright Like the Sun by Dryler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 974]
Summary:

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*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

 

When Bella goes to live with her father in Forks, things go much better than she expected. At least until a slick parking lot, a careening van, a broken arm, and her weird lab partner from biology get in the way...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 112401
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2011


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Stare Down at La Bella Italia

Great chapter! Bella is awesome in this story. I love it when she's not all head-over-heels right away. And I like how you made her circle of friends less annoying and more appealing. Cute banter!

Very curious to find our what is up with Edward - especially his thoughts on Bella.

Hope you can update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Bright like the Sun

Oh, wow, I loved this chapter! 

OK, so now I'm thinking that Edward IS human, but is sun allergy his only issue? Carlisle was so nervous and Rosalie was so angry. What is up with this family?

At least now that he's talking he seems very normal. Cute and sexy even. :) I like it that Bella is mostly unaffected so far. It will be fun to watch her fall for him. He seems to be somewhat taken with her - maybe? - or is that just wishful thinking?

Looking forward to the next update!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Carlisle is confused, because he doesn't understand why Edward was paying attention to her when he ignores most people. Rosalie was angry, because Edward put himself in danger for someone he doesn't really know.

He's paying a bit more attention then he was at the start, yes.

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan is a student at Dartmouth, with a self esteem less secure than a kid riding seatbeltless in her '53 Chevy. Fresh from an impromptu year off, she begins her junior year as an art student with a less-than-enthusiastic outlook on her hold on life. What happens when just as she thinks she's in control of her student career, the one person she thinks is gone for good begins to play an even bigger role in her life than she'd ever imagined?

Edward is a bit OOC, but I love him the way he is.

...i anticipate some later chapters that will earn the rating, but i hope to keep it classy through and through...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5632
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2009 Updated: February 24, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I like it, I LIKE it! I can only guess who this mystery professor might be ... ;)

Looking forward to chapter 2!

 

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 1. Music for an Alice Dance

LOVED it! I really like what's unfolding here. :)

I would love to read some flashbacks from Bella and Prof. Cullen's past. His POV would be awesome, too. I have a feeling he "hated" her because he was so distracted by how much he wanted her. Maybe he felt it was forbidden b/c of the student-teacher thing?

Great reveal by Alice that Edward was waiting for Bella at the bus stop. This gives me reason to hope ...

Looking forward to your next chapter!!

 

 
Summary:

After her father dies, Bella Swan is thrown back into the arms of the family she believed she never really left. Sometimes the worst events become the best opportunties for change. AU-Human, BxE. Rated for language.

Nominated, Winter 2010 Eddies: Mid-Length Fiction. A million and a half thank yous!

Banner by nastey. Thank you!

All the Places that Matter


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40066
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This was a great chapter, getting more of a feel for the relationships and where everybody stands. I love the chemistry between Bella and Edward, but I'm a little confused as to their status. Are they "together" now - or once were?

Very much looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, the E/B 'ship is just as muddled as everyone else's, though you should get more of a feel for their backstory in the next chapter. :) They're the first ones to come clean! At this point, all we know is that they live across the country from one another and have no scruples about sleeping in the same bed. :P Thank you VERY much for reading!

 
Want You by dreamsatnight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary:

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Summary:  Bella and Edward were the best of friends.  Then they crossed into the more than friends category and things got complicated.  Edward is desperate to keep things uncomplicated, but that just makes matters even worse.  What do you do when you think you have everything you could possibly want, but realize that you don't really have anything at all???

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8124
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2009 Updated: February 23, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The New Kid

I really like your story! It's so refreshing that Bella is not completely smitten with Edward as usual. Especially when, as in this story, he is so hung up on Tanya. It's interesting that all he really knows about Tanya is her looks - and that's what he's basing his crush on. I hope he develops a little crush on Bella too before long. :)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Grand Gesture

But WHAT was Tanya going to say?? 

Great chapter! I love that Bella and Edward obviously have an attraction going on but they're both dense about it right now.

And where's Tyler been hiding? I have a bad feeling about that ...

Can't wait for your next update!



Author's Response:

We'll find out more about Tanya and Tyler soon.  :)

 
Psycho by kfm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary:

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Being a teenage pariah is never easy, but for Edward Cullen it's especially difficult. Then again, anyone would find being a mind-reader at the age of seventeen a little more than challenging.

Once a simple high school burn-out, Edward had given up on love after a painful break up. He attempts to drown his pain in extensive drug use which eventually triggers his ability to hear the thoughts of others. Once Carlisle is made aware of Edward's hidden talent, he sends his son to a psyche ward where he is diagnosed with type 2 Bipolar disorder. During his stay, he befriends Alice Brandon and finds himself oddly drawn to her best friend Bella (who has a damaging secret of her own).

AU-Human/OOC/Canon Couples

Rated NC-17 for underage drinking, drug use, explicit language and sexual content.


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 56548
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Love, Lust, and Short Goodbyes

Hmmm, I'm really liking this story! I'm usually put off by a mean Darkward - especially when he's all smitten with Tanya - but yours is growing on me. I'm sure that has to do with his softening feelings towards Bella. :)

Great update - looking forward to the next!

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Contingency

Great chapter! I'm really enjoying your story. To answer a few of your questions:

I think Edward's dream meant that he is replacing Tanya with Bella as the object of his dreams (both literal and figurative) and eventual affections. I'm not sure about the symbolism of the water. Haven't had enough coffee yet to figure out that one!

I'm not sure why exactly Edward decided to kiss Bella so suddenly - I was thinking it was just an impulse. But maybe he wanted to see if there was something there between them and decided to test it with a kiss?

I think the "Ja-" is either Jacob or James ... and there's a story there (obviously).

Jasper and Alice ... hmmm. It might just be that they declared themselves to each other, but I'm betting there was some physical stuff, too. 

Don't belong to Myspace, sorry ... would have loved that sneak peek ... but here I am reviewing this excellent story!

Thanks for the update - looking forward to the next!

 

 

 
Act of Consecration by AJRimmer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

 

It only takes a moment for something to become an obsession.
Nothing should come between soulmates, and Edward is prepared to do anything to prove it.

An AH, dark romance. Canon pairings. Loosely follows canon.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 19234
[Report This] Published: February 08, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Follow The Push And Pull

Absolutely wonderful chapter! I really love Edward and Alice's relationship. And I LOVE how he was so taken with Bella. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, Alice and Edward's relationship is really important to the story. Yes, he is completely smitten. :) The next chapter will show more of that.

 
Summary:

 

 

The Cullens and the Hales are rival families in Forks High School, and everyone knows it. Every student to pass through the doors has known to pick a family to side with, and stay loyal to that family. That is, until Isabella Swan arrives, and her decision becomes increasingly more important.

 

 

Huge thanks to m81170 for the awesome banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 38173
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I liked this chapter very much, and am still very intrigued by what's unfolding. I am eager to hear Alice and Edward's version at some point. I get the feeling that they are the lesser evil in this situation ...

Looking forward to chapter 3!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I'm happy you mentioned 'what's unfolding', because I still feel like it's just starting (*states the obvious*) and it will take some time/chapters to build up enough steam to carry the real drama. 

Anyway, Edward and Alice are never the most evil. We all just love to hate Rosalie, it's what she's good for! lol, Ok, so that's not all I've got planned for her, but still. 

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

WOW! What a great chapter! I loved the introduction of Bella and Edward - though I was a tad disappointed he wasn't more attracted to her. I love the reveal that Jasper has designs on her - that should play out interestingly. Can't wait to hear Alice's plan!

Please update soon! :)



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. Gah! Edward is so confusing. I would love to explain everything, but I don't think I can without giving things away. I'm not sure I could, anyway. Even though I'm writing him, he still has secrets. 

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Great chapter!

You really have me guessing about Edward's true feelings here. I *think* he is attracted to Bella, even though he keeps saying he doesn't feel that way. I think he's trying to tell himself that, but his reactions to her point otherwise.

This party should be interesting!



Author's Response:

Sweet! I'm so happy you are guessing. Quite frankly, I am a little bit too. It's just one big jumble in my head. 

Yeah, I'm really looking forward to writing the party. I was sitting in Biology earlier (watching the most BORING video in history. genetics= snoozefest) and was thinking how it's going to go. Very productive.

 

Thanks for reviewing.

 
Summary:

Edward Masen has just moved to the rainy town of Forks, thinking that his life is over...that is until he meets the incredible, yet troubled Bella Swan and her friends. A story about finding yourself and the ones you grow to love where you never thought you could. Some OOCness...

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 26805
[Report This] Published: February 16, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just left you a review at FF.net. I really like your story very much! Looking forward to your next chapter. :)

 
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He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Night Marish

Well, I reviewed this chapter over at FF.net but I feel compelled to review again here because it makes me feel marginally better to talk about it. Lol, I'm just obsessed.

After reading other folks' reviews, I have to say I'm also afraid that Edward will think he had sex with Lauren - only imagining it was Bella - since he was so drunk and now he's waking up next to that b*tch.

But whatever he thinks happened, I hope he knows how crushed Bella must be to have walked in on that. They were finally getting on track to really good things - good things that now may have been blown out of the water by stinking Lauren. She must have been listening to them from the bathroom (perv!) and she will only use this to cause more trouble now that she knows what's at stake. I always hate Lauren in fics but I REALLY hate your Lauren, lol.

I'm not pissed at Edward for waking up next to Lauren because I think he honestly passed out and had no idea that that skank crawled into bed with him. I AM pissed though, that he let her take him to his bed in the first place. I don't care how drunk he was, he's always letting little things like that slide (I'm thinking of the kiss on the beach) and it's now coming back to haunt him. He should really set that slut straight. Was he pissed that Bella was texting? Did he realize what it implicated, letting Lauren take him?

I hope when Bella leaves the house she forgets her phone and Edward finds it and sees the texts and realizes who she is and then realizes what an IDIOT he was. On top of all that, I hope Alice informs him that not only did he sleep with Bella, but he took her virginity too. 

Boy, I'd hate to be Edward right now. What a pickle.

Cannot WAIT for your next update ...

 

 
Never Again by superstarrh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 508]
Summary:

Bella and Edward are reunited after breaking up five years ago.  Can Bella move beyond the pain he caused her to accept him into her life again or is the past too painful to overcome.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64200
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Going Through the Motions

I really like this story. I can't wait to find out what really happened there. Was James making things up to Bella? (Who, unfortunately, is always too ready to believe she's not good enough?) Was Edward really talking about Bella when he was describing her as "beautiful, smart and focused?" (I can't imagine him talking that way about Tanya.)

Excellent angst here - can't wait for your next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  The next chapter will tell what was going on from Edward's side.  It will answer all of your questions which I can not quite tell you here.  It is already written so hopefully by the end of the weekend it will be up.

Thank you for the review.

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Please Let Me Go

Oooh, that was painful, and so, so sad. I can't believe Edward would be so stupid - it's not like he really loved Tanya. He'd mess all he had with Bella up for that? Serves him right.

I would love to see Bella have someone else in her life this time. Let Edward stew in jealousy for a while. Let Bella feel wanted and special again.

Awesome chapter - I cannot WAIT for your next update!

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: You Can Pretend

Such a sad chapter. I really can't see where they can go from here. She is still so hurt by what he did all those years ago. She's definitely not over it, the pain is still fresh. He really damaged her.

I guess I hope that as they work together they can begin a new relationship and that the love they once shared will start to resurface. (On her part, I can see that Edward still feels that love deeply.)

Great update, looking forward to your next!

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: I Deserve to be Happy

I did like this chapter very much, though I needed a tissue to get through it!

It was necessary though, and I'm glad they had this talk. I hope things can lighten up now. I am still so angry at Edward for the way he betrayed Bella but I do feel badly for him. That said, I feel worse for her. I would love for her to find some happiness - and some validation - with someone else. I want her to heal and become whole again. And, I would love for Edward to have to watch that - and know it's with someone else ...

... of course, it goes without saying I do hope after some time they can find a way to be with each other again. :)

I hope you can update again soon - it makes it so much easier to keep up with a story - and yours is one of my favorites!

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Then What?

Oh goodness, this is just so sad. I can't imagine how they will get past this, because Bella seems to have really moved on. Edward might not be over it, but it appears Bella is.

Where do they go from here? How do they get a romantic spark back between them? Maybe when we skip ahead in time we'll see them rebuilding a relationship - as friends and coworkers - and inevitably the attraction will resurface? (I hope anyway!)

I can't wait to see where you take this next ...

 
Sex in Seattle by Miss Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Rosalie Hale are new to the surgical internship program at Northwest Hospital in Seattle. They soon learn that the past always catches up with you, that finding happiness is never easy, and that everything changes. Things rarely turn out the way you planned. 

 

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Canon couples (eventually! Promise!), many, many lemons.

 

Loosely based on the series Grey's Anatomy.


Categories: AU-Human, Crossover Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Irina, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 79164
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2011


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Broken

Great chapter! I wish Edward had tried to contact Bella to talk to her. It will be interesting to see what happens when they come face to face.



Author's Response:

i guess you``ll just have to wait and see! haha thanks so much

 
Summary:

 

Edward and Bella were always the best of friends, until they were torn apart. Reunited after 5 long years, everything seems right in the world again -- until a tragic accident leaves Edward fighting for Bella's love...

And he's got competition.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 14992
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2009 Updated: March 17, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1 - Catfights and Straightener Burns

I'm so intrigued! I can't wait to find out how Bella and Edward knew each other and what happened between them. Great storyline!

 
The Sweetest Thing by magpye Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary:

Bella is quickly on her way to being a married woman, but what happens when she questions her commitment? AU, AH, OOC.

Nominated for The Indie Twific Awards - Best Alternate Universe Human WIP.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 62947
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Saints & Sinners

Oh my. This is very good.

Loving hipster Edward - and I think Bella is too. But I wonder what he's thinking ... ?

 
Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Stood Up

GAH!

This chapter was oh-so-good! I am loving this story and I am just dying for more B&E interaction. They need to become friends so they have a reason to see each other - and I suspect they've begun. What a cool Edward, and what a sweet, confused Bella. I love listening in to her thoughts, and I very much wish we could listen in on HIS. :)

Looking forward to the next update!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen, graduate student and Biology instructor, has a wild night with a beautiful stranger, and becomes obsessed.  Bella Swan, his student, has a crush on her teacher...  Things aren't always what they seem,and people look different in the light of day.


NC-17 for lemons, mature themes.  Canon pairings ... kinda.


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 75384
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2009


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 La Bella Italia

Yowza!! I love it that they're not just smoothing things over and ending up back in bed (yet). I'm sure Edward's torment will only get worse - and more interesting - as time goes on ...

Can't wait to see how the next class goes. Looking forward to the next chapter!

 




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