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Penname: Sunfeathers [Contact]
Real name: Dawn
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Member Since: January 20, 2009

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Full Summary: "Forever is not a word... rather a place where two lovers go when true love takes them there."- Unknown. It has often been said that one never forgets their first love. What happens when the memory of that love haunts you? Bella and Edward have spent years apart, each living a semi-contented life. When fate unexpectedly brings them together once more can they find a way to heal the wound's they've inflicted on each other and find a way to be happy again?


AU/AH Story.


Thanks to the incredible MrsC for the faboulous banner!! 

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 67563
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: July 09, 2009

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I absolutely love this story and am so glad you updated! I like your flashbacks very much, but am so eager for the present story to progress. I hope Bella and Edward have more time to figure out where they stand ...

Author's Response:

they will figure it out.. it won't happen over night.. They need to fix things before jumping back in love.. but I just wanted to show how much they loved each other and that a love like that can't be easily erased! :D

thank you so much for reviewing!!:D

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Well Good Luck on finals first of all!

It pains me to think Edward is with Tanya because she made him smile after Bella. I hope his lack of love for T makes him open up to a possible future with B.

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Goodness, but I've missed this story! What a great chapter, lots of important information.

I wonder when Bella will find out Edward is engaged? More importantly, I wonder what Edward's feeling are now that Bella could be back in his life? I hope Alice fills him in on all she's just learned ...

Awesome update - can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

We'll have some Edward in the next chapter.. .he was actually supposed to be a lot more active on this one.. BUT, he wasn't cooperating- hence the writers block... and then out of nowhere Alice popped into my head and demanded some Bella time. Since Alice can be very scary when messed with I decided -for my mental stability- to give her what she wanted... so this chapter is all about B/A friendship.

and it helped a purpose, because Alice was finallya ble to make Bella see Edward's perspective of how he wants to take care of her.

Next chapter will feature some Edward- I promise that. But for now Tanya is a silent reminder that will hold B/E from happening. That doesn't mean that they can't be friends.

Thank you so  much for reviewing! makes me very very happy.

Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2150]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Lasagna

Beautiful chapter, Jfly. My heart is absolutely pounding now, I was so wrapped up in the scene - the smells, the sounds, the sweat, the touches, the staring. I feel things are about to change with these two.


AU/Human, EPOV


While trying to run away from his future, Edward gets into a car accident.  He is bruised, broken, and covered in bandages from head to toe.  His disdain for the hospital staff extends to the woman who saved his life; a new nurse he won't even talk to, let alone look at.   

Though when Edward finally does meet his savior, he feels an inexplicable pull towards her.  Without the aid of his good looks, can he charm her?  Is he sure he wants to charm her?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 40103
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2009

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Bandages

Awesome story, I'm completely hooked! I remember when you posted the first chapter, I thought it sounded so promising. So glad you've updated! 

I hope Bella comes back into the picture soon!

Author's Response:

thanks so much. glad you are enjoyingthe story

bella can't stay away for long.  she feels the need to do good and be the best she can be.

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: My Name Is

I've been enjoying this story but I think this is the first time I've reviewed. I love it! I am so eager for those bandages to come off - will he look different than he used to? (Not that Bella would know the difference ...) It would be a major blow to his confidence.

And I'm SO surprised that she has a boyfriend - and JAKE no less! This should make things even more interesting!

Well,it goes without saying I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :) Thanks for the update!

Out of Her Head by Blue25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2754]

Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.




Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 (k)

This is a beautiful story, I'm enjoying it very much. :)

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 (k)

Yikes - what a cliffie!

Might they be going to hear Edward's band? (And might he have a special song composed just for our lovely heroine?)

I just want to say I really love your story. I love the way you have written Bella - that she is intrigued by Edward, but cautious. I like it when she slowly develops feelings for him. I hope he does learn about Jacob so he can understand what she was going through.

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 (k)

Oh, this story just keeps getting better and better!

I read this chapter very slowly so it wouldn't be over, lol. I just love your writing, and I really love your Bella. She is so sweet and unassuming. I am so eager for her to be over Jacob once and for all. (Why won't he stop calling her?!) And of course I can't wait for something more to happen with Edward. I'll bet that "new" piece he played was Bella's song. :)

Now I'm off to check out your thread at the Forums!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ooh, my heart was in my throat the whole time I read this chapter, and I'm not sure why! I think it's because I am so invested in these characters. I am really pulling for Bella and Edward -  that they can heal and then find their way to each other. Your writing is really wonderful and I thank you for this story!

Btw, I see the need for Bella to date others first - but I have to say, I'm glad none of them worked out! :)

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

This was a very sweet chapter! Bella and Edward are making wonderful progress (with each other and on their own). I am holding my breath for something to go wrong, though, lol! 

And fwiw, I really enjoyed those "date" outtakes. :) 

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 (K)

This continues to be one of my most favorite stories. :) I loved this chapter - especially the family dinner. I really hope Edward keeps his cool in the next chapter and is able to answer Bella's question. And I wonder when she'll fess up about Jacob? Or perhaps Jacob might show up???

You're doing such a great job with this story - I can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I LOVED that you did this one in JPOV. It was perfect. I love it that he now realizes what he lost out on. I can only hope Edward realizes what HE might lose if he keeps up his recent behavior. I hope Bella does not make it easy for him. I hope he understands how hurtful he's been.

I cannot WAIT for your next chapter!!


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Well, I'm crying into my coffee here!! What a sad turn of events! 

What the heck got into Edward? It's got to be something more than the stress from the band. I don't get that he wanted to stay together yet he didn't even come to see her off and has maintained virtually no contact with her the past few weeks.

I can't believe I'm saying this but I actually hope something happens with Jacob during her visit. I realllllly want Edward to realize what he has put in jeopardy with his behavior.

Well I guess it goes without saying that I CANNOT WAIT for your next update! You have me on the edge of my seat!!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Oh Blue, my heart is so broken for Bella right now. This poor girl. I can't understand how the Cullens could treat her so coldly. They are practically (and soon to be) family! They couldn't even give her a chance to defend herself? And Edward has me so confused with his harsh reactions. If I were Bella I would be so nervous to trust him with my heart. I know he has trust issues from being hurt in the past but Bella is not some infatuated student - she's the woman he loves and was about to propose to! 

I hope this all turns out to be something different than it appears. I just don't know how Bella moves on from this.

Needless to say, I am on pins and needles waiting for your next update!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Beautiful ending to an absolutely beautiful story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us, Blue. I cannot wait to follow along with your new story. :)


Bella is secretly infatuated with her best friend's older brother, Edward. This infatuation continues unnoticed by all--even Bella--for 5 years before anything happens between them. Their immaturity and inexperience drive them away from each other until their paths again cross one fateful night. Will Bella still be open to allow Edward back in?

Story takes place over a 7 year span, beginning when Bella and Alice are 16.

Slightly OOC, Rated for citrus-ness and language

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 37276
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Three Weeks

I have to agree with Melsie's review ... I am Team Edward all the way, but I REALLY like Jake right now! I hope he and Bella make it work (for a while anyway) and I REALLY hope Edward suffers over it! He's such an idiot, and I think he knows it, but SEEING Bella with someone else would do him a world of good.

I missed this story and was so happy for your update! Looking forward to your next chapter - will Edward return?

Author's Response:

hmmmm that is must have ESP or psychic abilities!! ;-D

Thanks for the review, I'm glad my little story is being read and enjoyed!  I should have the next chapter up by the end of the week at the latest! Thank you so much once again! :)


Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate.  His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet.  When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.

This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.

A little lemony, but not too graphic.  Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters. 

 Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!

Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2009 Updated: May 22, 2009

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare

I am enjoying this story SO much! It is so sweet! You blend just the right combination of innocence and sexiness. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sunfeathers.  Try my other 4 stories if you like this one--you'll probably like those too. 

That's the way I see Edward.  For pete's sake, he's a 104 year-old virgin who has heard everyone's sexual fantasies.  It's about time he got to act on some of his own.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Seventeen

Really, really sweet chapter. Edward is so cute and funny. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my Edward.  I do too.  Chapter 6 is already validated.  I'm beyond thrilled that things are going so quickly.  But I think I'll submit another chapter on another story before doing one for this one--if I can get one done that I am happy with.  Thanks for reading, Sunfeathers.


Based loosely on the movie Return to Me.  Bella received an organ transplant and a chance at life she never thought she'd have.  Edward's world ended when the love of his life died, but he's finally ready to try and live again when he meets the strange and amusing waitress at his new favorite restaurant. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 114468
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2009

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Resigned

Oh, this is SO sad! I really wasn't expecting a breakup after all that. How are they going to get past it? Don't they love each other enough? Can't he explain WHY he said "Sarah" that time?

I'm sensing some future Jacob involvement ... after that friendly dance to their song. Just please don't let this split go on too long. Edward has to figure out he needs to fight for Bella, and she needs to grow some confidence!!

LOVE this story. I can't wait for your next udpate (and your teaser)!


Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Conflicted

Well the whole "friends" thing isn't working so well for them, is it? (Great plot twist though!) What will happen if one of them starts to date someone else? I can't imagine Stalkward dealing well with that. Will Jacob make a move on Bella? 

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Destined

Thank you for the update - and another great chapter! I really hope Edward just lays it on the line for her now. He needs to totally convince her of his love. She needs to have NO doubts. And of course, I hope Bella responds appropriately. :)

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter!


Edward does something that makes Bella question their relationship.
What does Edward do to make Bella's fears go away?
Does Bella decide that the lies she's been telling and the secrets she's been hiding are worth staying in a relationship with Edward?

(a teacher/student story) A/H

[[this story is rated because of a lemon]] Oh, and also, I'm not SM and I own nothing. [[though, I wish more that anything that there was a human Edward out there for me to own]]

Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 12111
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2009

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful, endearing story! This was really so sweet!

I would be interested to hear more about Bella and Edward in the beginning, when they first meet and as they fall in love ...

And yes, Edward's POV is *always* a good thing. :)

Author's Response: I know - Edward has the nicest mind, doesn't he? I definitely want to interweave other one-shots in this collection with stuff about how Edward and Bella started. I wasn't planning on doing one set earlier than this one was, but IDK for sure - I might change my mind.


Bella Swan always thought she hated Edward Cullen, until she spends an afternoon with him that changes her mind. After that fateful outing their relationship blooms and she falls for him. When they spend a night together and he leaves without a word, can Bella ever mend her broken heart and prove to Edward that she doesn't need him? 


Warning! slightly OOC, It's a B/E story-usual pairings but there is some B/OC too, and rated NC-17 for crude language, underage drinking/smoking and smut in later chapters.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 28027
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2009

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: January 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected

Very intriguing story so far!

This sleepover should be pretty interesting. I hope Bella holds her own against Tanya (who by rights has no business showing her face there). 

I really hope Edward has deep feelings for Bella (it seems like it) ... maybe he's ready to turn over a new leaf for her??


Author's Response:

mmmm...I can't really say anything I'll give too much away.

Bright Like the Sun by Dryler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 974]

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*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*


When Bella goes to live with her father in Forks, things go much better than she expected. At least until a slick parking lot, a careening van, a broken arm, and her weird lab partner from biology get in the way...

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 112401
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2011

Reviewer: Sunfeathers Signed
Date: February 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: New Bella

Ok, this is a very interesting story! I really like your Bella - all snarky but well-meaning. :)

Curious as to whether Jake is feeling more than friendly towards her (I'm thinking he is) and even more curious to know what Edward's up to ...

Looking forward to more!


Author's Response:

Thank you :)

He's got a bit of a thing for her yeah, and Edward... well, more will be explained once he's really in the story.



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