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Penname: forbidden_fruit [ Contact]
Real name: Rachel
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Member Since: January 19, 2009
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Newly uncloseted fanfiction writer living in the Southeastern United States. Unnaturally obsessed with the United Kingdom and take steps every day to accomplish my goal of permanent relocation to my favorite part of the world. I.love.it.
I swear a lot, but underneath the potty mouth is a very humble, nice, sweet person with a tender heart and soul. I hike, I clean, I cook, I write, I travel, and I spend way too much time with my cat and watching films. Oh, and I spend way too much money on music.
I can't see anyone else as Edward besides the man himself, Robert Pattinson, but I try to not lose my shit over him. He's just a guy...that farts.
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Summary: Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed 
Date: January 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I love this story. I love the spin on Edward and Bella's relationship. They way you write, too, is great, because it seems so believable. So real. You seem to understand Edward's emotions and it's just how I would imagine Edward to feel after seeing Bella again after so many years. So...great job! I'm hooked!
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: February 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I love this. I can't wait for more.
Summary: Alice brings Bella home for Thanksgiving break to forget about her ex. After some drunken clubbing with the fam, Edward and Bella have a one night stand. Hilarity and drama ensue. AU, AH. Rated NC-17 for language and sexual themes.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 47715
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: July 17, 2009
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Starting Over
Thank you for introducing me to the Harry Potter Puppet Pals...I didn't think I could become even more obsessed with fictional characters, but now I know I can. Author's Response: Hahaha, no problem!
Summary: 
A Breaking Dawn alternative story. Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon. Complications interrupt and they return to Forks. Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly. This story is an A/U from BD. There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle. It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.
Canon Pairings. Lots of romantic lemons. AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: February 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Keeps Gettin' Better
This kind of stuff is definitely more my speed and what I envisioned for Breaking Dawn. Good job at giving Breaking Dawn another shot...I know that nothing should compare to Stephenie Meyer, but I was so thoroughly disappointed with Breaking Dawn and I just absolutely love your story. It has me hooked like the first three books did. So good job, good job! Author's Response: Oh wow! That is an amazing compliment! Thank you! *blush* I'm so glad that you like it. I always say that I have to thank Stephenie Meyer for writing Breaking Dawn because if I had not been so disappointed in it, I never would have taken writing back up, and never would have met so many wonderful people! Thanks so much! Really!
Summary: It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.
Banner by allycubed
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: January 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Love it! Keep it coming! Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the chapter!
jess
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: January 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I hope it's not what I think it is that's wrong with Edward! Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for reading and reviewing. What you think is happening, might be happening. I hope you like it!
Jess
Summary: Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC
Rated for situations and lemons later on...
©2009 kyla713. All rights reserved worldwide.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: February 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - You Haven't Fooled Me
Okay, so I just got into this story. I was supposed to clean my house all day today, but not a chance with this story in my brain now. This chapter made me cry. I love it! Can't wait to read the rest. Going there now...
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: February 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Awakenings
I.need.more.
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: February 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Baby
Yes! I've been waiting for this. Why didn't I lose my virginity to Edward? I've been jipped. Jipped, I say! I can't wait to read Edward's point of view on this.
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: February 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Decisions
Ack! I don't want Edward to join the Army. Being an Army wife sucks. Buuuuttt...I have to admit that he would look quite sexy in uniform.
Summary:  One night changed everything; They met by chance, shared a night of passion, and now have to learn that being friends is harder than it seems. Like they say, fate has a cruel sense of humor. E/B--ALL HUMAN. (No religion)
"Forgive me Father, for I have sinned. And I plan on doing again very, very soon. Oh, the games that we will play...Let them begin."
"We are compelled to do what is forbidden."
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 82751
[Report This] Published: January 19, 2009 Updated: September 09, 2009
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: February 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
The lyrics for Kings of Leon are a little off - they're "consumed with what's to transpire." Sorry - I'm a Kings of Leon NUT - they're my Nashville boys. :-) Other than that - GREAT chapter. Can't wait for Bella to get her stuff together!
Summary:
Amazing new banner by SoapyMayhem!!!! Thank you so much sweetie! You're fantastic!
Summary:
Robert has two more days in London before he has to return to his hectic life in LA. He has no intention of letting himself anywhere near emotional attachment. Despite this, he finds himself unable to resist the brave invite of a beautiful girl at a nightclub in Soho, thinking it would be a one night thing only.
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Categories: Other Characters: Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: Taking Chances - Stories and outtakes
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 289305
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: May 05, 2011
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Seducing Robert Pattinson?
I do like...this Rob takes a little getting used to, though. It has promise, though. And I like the setting in London, where he seems more comfortable. Plus, I have London with all my heart, so a story set there makes my heart cry out in happiness. This story has definite promise. Can't wait to see where this goes. Author's Response: I'm glad you're giving it a chance! This won't be as fluffy as other Rob-stories tend to be though ;)
Summary: When her marriage began to fall apart, she ran into a beautiful stranger on the streets of London. Can he show her how love should be and help her move on?
A HUGE thank you to Falconcranelove for the amazing banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Garrett, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 154680
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: August 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Kiss and Say Goodbye
I've been reading this all day, and I just have to say "GO EDWARD!" Quite frankly, I am a little sick of "woe is me" Bella. I know why she has to do it, or feels like she has to do it, but that doesn't make me like it. Just had to say it. Now...back to reading.
Oh, and thanks for writing a story that's so well written that it makes me curse at my computer screen in frustration, and for basing it in London, a city I miss so much that it also makes me curse at my screen in frustration.
Summary: 
For par amour, I loved her first ere thou. -Chaucer; What if Myspace's Artist/Artist interview with Rob Pattinson & Hayley Williams was not the first time they met? What if there was much more? A love story for the ages. Rated M for LEMONS.
Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 125940
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2011
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Good chapter. It's a little strange to read about Hayley, though. I'm from Nashville, so Paramore is like...our band. It's so nice to see them become something so big, but I still remember watching them for free before anyone knew who they were. And I've met her quite a few times, so not quite sure how I'll feel about the future lemons, but I'll keep reading to see how I fare. :) Thanks for the story. Great writing. Author's Response: Wow! You've met Hayley! How awesome. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I am glad you liked it. Remember this is just fiction and it is all for fun. I will tell you that their relationship has a natural development and my story is a sweet story. There will be lemons in future chapters, they will be steamy...just stick with me and keep reading. I have a thread on twilighted though I am not quite sure how to link it here (i am technically challenged..hehe), but you can search it on the forums. Come and play with us over there, it is just getting started so I would love to have some new company! Again, thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope you continue reading!
Summary: What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?
Thanks to Leslie (red delicious) for the awesome banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112144
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2010
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit Signed
Date: July 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Didn't think I'd like Bella and Carlisle together. But it's growing on me. And just a word of grammar advice - be careful with the comma splices. There are several and it really affects the flow of certain sentences. Makes you stop mid-sentence where you shouldn't be stopping. So just be careful there. Otherwise, keep it up!
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