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Penname: oplok71 [Contact]
Real name: Lizette Castro
Status: Member
Member Since: January 20, 2010
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30 something, mother, wife.  I love to read, cook, bake, and eat.


 


I was at the library in May 2009 when I saw the Twilight book.  It was on the “Fortunate Finds” section which allows a 2 week period.  When I started reading I couldn’t stop.  The following day, I went to Costco and got the whole set.  I finished all four books in 3 days and have read them several times.  I usually read the book again before watching the movie.  I have my own vision of Edward and Bella.


 


I do not write, instead I enjoy reading stories here on Twilighted and Fan Fiction by other authors.


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Reviews by oplok71
 
Afterglow by jacklynnight Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 346]
Summary:

When my mother found me, fate seemed to link us together. Not only was I the daughter she never dreamed she'd have, I was unusually unappetizing for a human. However, being raised by vampires does not come with out conflict. This is my tale about growing up Cullen and finding love in the most unexpected place.

The world's largest coven is about to get a whole lot larger!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 67140
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2011


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Becoming Cullen

a distraction to get Esme out of the house so someone can get to the girls.



Author's Response:

shhh...:)

 
Summary:

AU Human fic. Bella is a freshman in college, trying to muddle her way through, when she meets some special people. (Edward/Bella)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, Mike
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 103480
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: January 12, 2011


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: January 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I would be totally interested in the playlist.  Please email me if you have time oplok71@yahoo.com.

Thanks. Liz

 
Summary:

Edward is running from home, tired and lost he saves a beautiful hitchhiker from a terrible fate. They decide to travel the road together. Unknown to them there is a trail of brutal murders left in their wake.  The killer is closer to them than they think.  Lemons in future chapters

 Banner by the talented dazzlemebetch

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 89315
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2008 Updated: August 01, 2010


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: End Game Part One

OMG!  He is one sick MF!!!

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: End Game Part One

OMG!  He is one sick MF!!!

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: End Game Part One

OMG!  He is one sick MF!!!

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: End Game Part One

OMG!  He is one sick MF!!!

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: End Game Part One

OMG!  He is one sick MF!!!

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: End Game Part One

OMG!  He is one sick MF!!!

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Home

i like that she's pregnant!

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Doing Vegas

OMG!!!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan changed her life and ideals for a guy . . . who then dumped her in the middle of a mall. Even if she's happier now and her life is back on track, she still needs to realize that the past is the past.

Enter Edward Cullen, devastatingly handsome and hopelessly in love with Bella after knowing her for only a short time. Can he prove to Bella that she's not the type who should be loved and left? Can he help her get over her past and put her self doubts behind her?

 Rated M for later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95381
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: September 18, 2010 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

can't wait for valentines day. just found your story on the au human page. i like it very much. i've read a lot of stories but don't remember reading about a bella that has lots of experience. looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking the story, and that I've been able to provide a facet that you haven't seen before. Thanks for reading & revieiwng! :)

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: April 06, 2011 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

hope you update soon!

 
Change of Heart by LuvCullens Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 855]
Summary:

Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?

Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

What a wonderful story!  Thank you for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

I am sorry I am so late on responding to your review. I don't check these things as often since I completed the story. I am glad you enjoyed it and thank for taking the time to let me know you liked it.

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: November 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

i read back through the chapters looking for when Edward proposed to Bella.  Did I miss that somehow?  Please point me to the right directions! Thanks. Liz

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play

can't wait for the next one!

 
Work In Progress by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1514]
Summary:

WiPBannerByFamouslySo

 

Edward, Bella and the gang are adults living in Seattle.  Edward and Bella meet due to a klutzy accident in the restaurant where she works.  Bella's ovaries love Edward and they voice their opinions quite often.  There's an instant attraction between them, but Bella notices there's something that's troubling Edward. 

 

Lovely banner made by famouslyso...because she rocks.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 240878
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2010


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 :Dyslexic Heart

bwahahahahahaha...Tanya the cat!  I love it!

 
Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2245]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

banner

Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity

very sweet

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: November 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity

Holy Cliffhanger!  I started reading your story two days ago....there were times when I stopped 'cause it was too intense for me.  I love it!  I can't wait for the next update....

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - A Center Ice Finale (V)

Loved it!  It was a really perfect Happy Ending!!!!!!  Looking forward to the epilogue.

 
Off Limits by lexiecullen17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3311]
Summary:

Womanizing Edward is in a cover band with his brother and best friend, who are pissed that Edward has managed to send their last three lead singers heading for the hills with his tendency to fool around carelessly.  Emmett and Jasper decide to create a "no intra-band dating" rule. 

But what happens when a gorgeous, talented brunette walks into the audition?  Will Edward adhere to his bandmates' new rule, or will he pursue what's now off limits?  OOC Edward/Bella.  Rated for DIRTY HUMOR and lots of future LEMONY GOODNESS. Canon pairings.

(thanks to Evilangel6714 for the banner!!!)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 171702
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh crap!  you are going to get them in trouble with emmett and jasper

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwww...that was the sweetest thing ever!

 
Summary:

Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down.  Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.

ESS

Thanks to katmom for the great banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you so much for writing this story!

 
Practicality by silentnc Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary:

 

Thanks to Kellyjaxn for the rocking banner!

Bella moves to Seattle to start college when she meets Edward, a guy she is drawn to but who is unattainable, and James, a nice guy that she decides she might settle for. But does she really know James, who is becoming very possessive? ExB AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 88965
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2009 Updated: May 29, 2011


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

stalker much!!!

 
Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 vjgm

Wow!  James is indeed creepy.  I hope no one dies in this fic escept for James.  LOL!!!  Looking forward to the next chapter.

 
Pretending by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 505]
Summary:

Edward and Bella have known each other since birth. After one moment at a party just months before their college graduation, Edward sends them on a journey that begins with a little pretending. Where it ends? No one knows. NC-17 for language and sexual content. AH/AU/OCC

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 52003
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010


Reviewer: oplok71 Signed
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The First Twenty-four Hours

So did Rose and Bella have a thing too?

 




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