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Penname: Maggied86 [ Contact]
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Summary:
Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more. As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow. Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted. Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse. J/B at first, but eventually E/B.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
It is 4:30 a.m. and I just finished your last chapter. I found your story today and couldn't stop reading. I am new to this world of twilight fan fiction, and I must say you got me hooked. I just registered on this web site, thanks to you. I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Hypocrisy
Welcome back! I LOVED IT. Although many may think it creepy that Edward watches her even though she doesn't see him, I can't help but find it romantic. He is so kind to give her space. I'm glad Bella is slowly realizing that she can't fight her feelings for Edward much longer. I'm so glad this story is back :) Author's Response: Thanks; I feel great having finally posted again. The Edward watching Bella thing is tricky: he needs to give her space but a part of me is kind of like "aw, but he does care!" So, yeah, I'm kind of with you on that. ;)
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Sixty Seconds
What a wonderful surprise in my email. I just couldn't wait until the next chapter was posted to read this, but now I wish I did because I am hungry for more. Although, I do like the idea that another update is coming soon. Great chapter. Well worth the wait. I cannot wait to see what Jacob wrote and Bella's reaction.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Tightrope
About freaking time :-p You had me scared with this chapter with talks about a cliffhanger. I thought something bad would happen but this was BETTER. Just to point out some things I loved:
1) I choked on my drink when Bella told Edward he had that kitten in the rain look.
2) Jacob-dude is obssessed. Did he really write I'm sorry a hundred times? *shudder*
3)Edward lurking in the shadows is so sweet.
4) Last but not least, Bella kissed him when she was unconscious!!?? I feel like I have to go back and read that chapter. I'm wondering if I overlooked it or you just didn't mention it. Either way, I loved that she did that.
I love your Edward. His personality is so close to that of Twilight and not many authors can pull it off so well. I hope you update soon, but even if I have to wait a year, I will, lmao.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Kissed
I love how awkward B&E were being. It just seems more real especially with Bella's personality. I can't wait for Bella to meet the rest of the Cullens! By the way when I saw this in my inbox I screamed!
Summary: Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: February 29, 2008
Hello,
You have a new fan. I heard about your story from Oxymoronic8. I'm really enjoying it and plan to be a loyal reader..
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008
how dare you cut that lemon short, lmao. I'm sooo glad you updated. What a nice surprise in my inbox. Anyway, it looks like the walls are coming down for Edward and Bella. Feelings are growing and things are getting more intense. I'm so worried about Bella and I have a bad feeling that the Volturi already know she isn't dead. I hope to read more soon.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: June 14 - June 20, 2008
wow, that was a sweet ending to the chapter. This Jason dude has me worried, though. Author's Response: thank you :)
Summary: Stranded in a strange town by stormy weather, Bella is befriended by Edward, a gorgeous man with a mysterious past. While she’s immediately attracted to him, she quickly discovers that the rest of the town doesn’t share her affections for the bronze-haired one, so she sets out to prove to them, and to Edward, that he’s anything but a monster.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108250
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2008
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Second Thing
lol, I love Bella's thoughts. On another note, poor Edward. Im so glad he explained everything to Bella before someone else did.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Just Friends
lol, you took the words right out of my mouth. She is an idiot.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Kiss?
omg at that little kissing speech *swoon* I really wished Bella mentioned that suspicious van to Edward. On to the next chpt. You are a great writer.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The Date
I am so glad that Carlisle is his uncle. I was a little upset thinking he was Edward's dead father.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Carried Away
Bella's "woe is me" attitude is so unattractive. I almost wish Edward would run for the hills.The girl needs some selfesteem. I actually like nice Jacob. What he did was sweet.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Arrested Development
woohoo, we get a lemon! I would have been so disappointed if there wasn't one :-p
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Epilogue
Great story. I finally finished and its almost 3:30 am. My laptop decided to freeze twice on the last chapter. I thought the ending was sweet, but I can't believe stalker James is about to be released from the crazy house. The sex scene was hilarious and a bit goofy. (I would have preferred more smut, I'm not a freak, I swear ). I find it hard to believe Bella is that naive but I laughed hard nonetheless. I thought it was sweet that you focused the last chapter on Emmett and Rose's relationship. Everyone lives happily ever after. Now I can finally get started on my 10-pg report due in less than 24 hrs. Also, I notice you have another story. I'll make sure to check it out when I have the time. Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the reviews... the honeymoon was yes- goofy. I would probably tone it down a bit if I had to do it all again, but I actually asked several people for stories of awkward virgin honeymoon sex and that is what I came up with :)
Good luck on your report!
Summary: Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes
Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: March 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Torture 101
I always passed over this story but today I decided to give it a chance. I'm so glad I did. It's such a fun read and the witty banter between E&B is hilarious. By the way, I can't get the song "Womaizer" out of my head now.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: March 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Temptress Tuesday Part II
omg, Bella talking to Daniel was hilarious.
Summary: The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars. Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them. Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: March 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I'm intrigued!
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: April 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Accomplice
ok, that was hot!
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: April 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Consequences
lmao at Jasper finding the panties first. I was like, OH NO. I guess there are great benefits to being an empath.
Summary: Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 (K)
I love this story even though I'm just at the beginning. It seems Jacob really misses Bella but he's covering it up by being nonchalant. Well, that's too bad. I'm rooting for Edward even though he doesn't seem particularly friendly right now. I'm so glad I have the day off. You may be hearing from me a lot.
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 (K)
I thought this line was very creative,"Their lives would have meshed seamlessly, like a zipper." Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 (k)
Hmm, are they going to see Edward play with his band? You said obvious, Edward is a pretty obvious guy, lol
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: February 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
So I've spent the whole day reading your story because it was just that wonderful. Now that I'm caught up, I know I have to wait for updates. Talk about bittersweet. I'm so glad Edward and Bella are having such great chemistry. I can't believe how mundane Bella's sex life is. I feel so bad for her not experiencing the big "O." lmao. I can't believe she is that naive. I hope Edward can show her what she's been missing. poor girl. Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! And I'm glad you've been enjoying the story.
Summary:  Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs. Canon pairings, AH/AU
This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes. It is intended for a mature audience.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: Maggied86 Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Alice
I'm definitely interested in seeing where you take this story.
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