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I love Twilight! I have a couple of issues with the messages sent in the canon, but I still love the universe!
I've always enjoyed storytelling. Even as a child I'd create snippets of stories out of shows and books that fired my imagination. Now, I write my own stories as well as those same snippets.
I'm also an artist and sometime computer guru. The last more lucrative, by far, than the other.
Just a few observations, opinions, and facts:
I'll not shill for reviews. It's cheap. Surely the big white box at the bottom is reminder enough, and asking for reviews just betrays a lack of confidence as a writer, imo. Getting reviews is great! Asking for them ahead of time, not so great.
Just because a piece clears a spell checker doesn't necessarily mean everything is actually spelled correctly. Fan fiction is rife with really amusing sentences, all unintentionally written because the author relied on the spell checker just a tad too much and ended up using an incorrect word anyway.
Bridal style? Really? Surely, as word smiths we can do better than that. Using this short-hand is like fingernails on a blackboard to me. You've never heard of him cradling her in his arms as he sweeps her off her feet? One story combined the previous point and this and called it bridle style. Which made me briefly think of a s and m trip rather than a romantic gesture. Given the context of this particular mistake, I laughed quite hard. Obviously, our hero was about to make gentle, slow love to the fair damsel (in a bridle, apparently).
A moot point is often pointless, but never mute.
I'm wary that you'll weary of these little tidbits, so I'll stop here.
Can you find the words often confused in those last few sentences? Oh yes, one other note... Prompting for reader reactions in end notes is just... tacky. And reminds me of school texts. Yikes!
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Summary: 
When Edward takes Bella into the forest after her disastrous birthday party in New Moon, Bella's reaction is nothing like he expected. Will this be the end of their love or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based but very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 147651
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2012 Updated: May 23, 2013
Summary:
Bella Swan is dead *figuratively*...Izzy Black is an emancipated bad girl. Edward Cullen is the vampire that threatens to bring it all down in an inner battle between darkness and light.
WINNER OF THE DARKELLA'S DARKEST TEMPTATIONS CONTEST ON FF.NET.
*Being continued into a full length story.
Rated NC-17 References to drugs, drug use, cutting, foul language and *LEMONS*
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 187017
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: May 23, 2013
Summary:  
San Francisco lawyer, Bella Swan, struggles to cope with the loss of her long-term boyfriend, Riley. Lonely and grief-stricken, she loses herself in a string of one-night stands, convinced she'll never find love again. Museum curator, Edward Cullen, may be the man to change Bella's mind. Could he be her second chance for love?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Word count: 176591
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2012 Updated: May 23, 2013
Summary: 
Big adoring thanks to Lisa254 who surprised me with this little beauty:)
Bella's parents die and suddenly her world is upside down. A beautiful, clearly insane man claims she's a wealthy heiress and he's her personal, very efficient butler and that she's his world. What's a girl to do? Inspired a bit by Mei-Chan No Shitsuji
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 31605
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2012 Updated: May 22, 2013
Summary: 
Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland. After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship. Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Word count: 164045
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2012 Updated: May 21, 2013
Summary: Bella and Alice were best friends, which made Bella the only girl off limits to Alice's brother Edward. When a party the summer after graduation gets out of control, Bella's world is turned upside down. "He doesn't know. I don't want him to."
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Riley, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Word count: 354450
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2011 Updated: May 19, 2013
Summary: 
Bella, a struggling student at Arizona State, returns to her dorm room one afternoon to find her boyfriend in bed with her roommate. Unable to look at either of them, she moves out of her dorm, seeking refuge at her parents' place until she can find another room to move to.
Since it’s halfway through the semester, there are no other rooms available, so she takes to the classifieds. Just how good is the view being advertised?
AH - Bella/Edward
Romance/Humor
Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and later, lemons . . . because this is fanfiction after all.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 220617
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2012 Updated: May 19, 2013
Summary:   Beautiful Banner By CrimsonIceGoddess
Holly McNamera is twenty-three years old, and finally ready to begin her life. She and her brother, Josh, grew up and spent their childhood in the small town of Forks, WA. When Holly was just thirteen, their mother was killed in a horrific car accident and fate put the siblings on two very different paths.
Josh went off to college later that same year and never looked back. Holly stayed behind to take care of her self-abusive father for the next ten years of her life, until he put himself into an early grave.
All alone, and on her own, Holly is restless for change. She journeys to Seattle to find Josh and settle the rift that has been between them for more than a decade. She stumbles into the refined world of the Cullens, where Josh is a partner at Cullen McNamera, the most prestigious law firm in Seattle. The icy reception she receives from her brother is hard on Holly, but her budding relationship with Edward has her throwing caution to the wind. When the firm puts away three of the biggest white-collar criminals in the city's history, Holly will soon find that her very presence in a world she does not belong to, may be her, and her new found family's, undoing.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 107770
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2012 Updated: May 16, 2013
Summary: 
Bella is an executive on her way home from an overseas business trip. Edward is a popular actor on his way to meet a director about his next movie. When the two of them are literally thrown together, their lives change forever, and they realize that what they had before is not what’s in store for the future. Love, loss and lotsa lemons!
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: No
Word count: 192636
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2012 Updated: May 13, 2013
Summary:  .
Thanks to the amazing maimu[velvetkitten] for this awesome banner.
Can two broken people help each other mend? Maybe with the help of friends and family they can be just what the other needs. The horrific back stories of Mara and Emmett have left them hurt and afraid to open up to others, Will the instant attraction lead to happiness again?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Emmett
Challenges: Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 85513
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2010 Updated: May 08, 2013
Summary: 
“Bella, I’m going to give you some privacy. I won’t go far, but I won’t listen either. I know you don’t want an audience, no matter which way you decide to go.”
Three years after his mysterious disappearance, Edward’s final words to Bella still haunt her every waking moment. For her parents, Bella tries to put the past behind her and start a new life but one phone call shatters her fragile new world. Bella must then choose between her new life and the potential heartache of her past.
All canon pairings. NO CHARACTER DEATH. This is an Edward and Bella story.
I'd like to thank ms_ambrosia for the awesome banner!
Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No
Word count: 161635
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2010 Updated: May 06, 2013
Summary: This is not made for TV. This is the raw, brutal underground of no-holds-barred combat. Inside the cage there is nothing but me and the pain I inflict on those who dare enter. In the cage, I never had to worry about anyone but myself. When she started standing outside of it, everything changed. I was no longer fighting for the money or the glory – I had to fight for her. UFCWard! E/B NC-17 – LVS
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 80971
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2012 Updated: May 06, 2013
Summary: 
Having lost his sister, his family, his newfound friends, and his home, Jason is on the run from the Volturi, hoping to hide himself so at least Fiona and Dermot will be safe.
However, unexpectedly, he encounters other vampires in the Pacific Northwest, the Cullens, a true family, one who invites him in.
With a new lease on life, Jason finds there are many quirks, many wonders that this family has in store but perhaps most importantly, among their allies, Jason finds love.
However on discovering this seemingly unnatural union, the Volturi force their way back into Jason's life to once again take that which he loves. The question is, this time, can he stop them?
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Liam, Maggie, Marcus, Paul, Quil, Renata, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Tanya
Challenges: Series: The Jason Culhane Saga
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 107577
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2012 Updated: May 06, 2013
Summary: Bella Swan has a destiny. A hunter of the dark, she was always meant for the world they tried to rip away from her. When her past refuses to stay past she finds herself in the fight for her life. Seven years after Edward left her broken in the forest. Things have changed.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 118230
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2011 Updated: May 01, 2013
Summary: 
Thank you Mist for the beautiful banner.
Summary: Leah has gotten past the pain of Sam imprinting on her cousin, but she still keeps a wall around her heart. Can she let go of the pain, and let love in? Jacob finally finds love, but can he find the courage to tell her about his wolf. Meanwhile, a new enemy builds strength in the south, threatening to destroy everything and everyone they hold dear.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Brady, Carlisle, Charlie, Collin, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 56188
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2011 Updated: April 28, 2013
Summary: 
Edward comes from wealth and all that that implies. His future is already written by his grandfather as it is for all the Cullen men. He has the right friends, attends the right schools, and he will marry the right woman. He always did what was expected of him and accepted it all without question until he met Bella, a student working her way through school, and everything changed.
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 42784
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2012 Updated: April 28, 2013
Summary: 
Five hundred years. Four past lives. Three lost souls. Two lovers. One last chance.
Bella has spent the last twenty-five years of this life knowing of her soul's past quests and heartache. When passing a familar stranger on a busy New York street has her spiraling into the past, she must push through to insure a future with her soul's counterpart.
To fail would be to die.
Rated for some dirty time in the beginning and probably later on, language, violence. Also a heads up if you're touchy on slight religion about reincarnation.
One more note - There will be some talk of suicide. Nothing too detailed, but there none the less.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 28554
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2011 Updated: April 26, 2013
Summary: 
Jared would never have expected visiting a friend would change his life forever. But that was exactly what happened when he met the eyes of Bella Swan. But can he overcome Jacob's fury and Bella's fears?
Thanks to LJ Summers for this banner. And also for the glowing recommendation on the Fictionators site.
**January 2013: 2nd Place finish in the "Best Romance" category in the Fandom Choice Awards.
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse Characters: Bella, Jared
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 63 Completed: No
Word count: 229809
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2011 Updated: April 23, 2013
Summary: 
Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of The Wedding Photographer, which was originally a one-shot.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 138398
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2011 Updated: April 21, 2013
Summary: 
All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.
***Tissue Warning***
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013
Summary: 
30 year old Bella Swan is the swimming instructor who teaches the Sunday morning daddy and baby classes.
Although he's a forbidden man, her attraction to Edward Cullen, the newest daddy to join the Waterbabes group, is instantaneous.
Can Bella drown her libido and maintain her professionalism?
B x E + H2O = slippery when wet.
All Human. Romance. Humor. Minimal angst.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 88381
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2012 Updated: April 18, 2013
Summary: 
The amazing banner is a gift from JadeZOMBIE.
Just write a list, Alice says, to know what to look for in your ideal man. But I have two lists...
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 85841
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2012 Updated: April 16, 2013
Summary: 
After a girls' night in, and drunken truth or dare, Bella goes on three blind dates. She unwinds after each one at her favorite piano bar, where she pours her heart out to bartender, Eddie. He listens and decides she needs dating lessons. Embarrassment, hilarity, and UST all combine in this Countdown to Combustion!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 37861
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2012 Updated: April 16, 2013
Summary: 
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~The story of how Angela becomes a Cullen.~
Everyone has a secret that they try to hide, some are just better at it than others. For Angela, that secret was being alone. Assigned to work on history project with Emmett Cullen, he becomes troubled by certain things about Angela that make him question her safety. Later, when Angela realizes that the notes and flowers she has been receiving aren’t from Ben and that someone is stalking her and covering their tracks well enough to make her feel like she is loosing her mind, Emmett and Jasper step in, bringing Angela into the protection and care of the Cullen family.
There is a heavier focus on Angela Webber and her interactions with the Cullens than with the Edward/Bella theme. You have been warned.
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“There’s one thing you have to understand about Emmett,” Rosalie told Angela with an almost annoyed sounding sigh. “He has a very severe case of BBS.”
“BBS?” the girl asked with a confused shake of her head.
“Big Brother Syndrome.”
*Special Note: In the books, Angela has younger twin brothers, in this story she does not have any siblings.*
Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Angela
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 64 Completed: No
Word count: 553990
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2012 Updated: April 15, 2013
Summary: 
He’d hurt her and nearly destroyed her. But Edward’s crucial mistake was thinking that Bella wouldn’t fight back. Bella was a lot tougher than she looked and she was damned if she was going to believe for one minute that the last several months of her life had been a lie.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 23395
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2011 Updated: April 11, 2013
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