I liked this. It was really nice. 

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Thank you. :)

As always your writing is great. I love Jasper... no one writes about him enough. Thank you

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Thanks again!  I love Jasper too.  He's one of my favourite characters to write about. :)

I can never get enough of Alice & Jasper and I love how you have captured them.  I will definitely read this again and as always you leave me wanting more and more.  Looking forward to more stories from you!!

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Thank you so much for the lovely review.  I'm glad you liked my Alice and Jasper! :)

I enjoyed these moments very much. I love reading about Jasper and Alice's connection, and you portrayed it beautifully. :)

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Thank you for the review and rating.  I'm glad you think I did Jasper's thoughts justice. :)

This was beautiful! I love Alice and Jasper, and it's always nice getting inside Jasper's head a bit. :) Great job!

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Thank you!  I love Alice and Jasper too.  They are such a perfect team together. :)

 

Beautiful, emotional, informative. I love Jasper.. thank you so much for these missing moments. I love how you saw the day he met Alice, it revealed so much more about his character and it was a sweet scene. Loved the little moment when he thought "the vampire woman" might attack.

I like your take on the scene with Jasper and Edward talking about their slips. I always want to think of them as being good friends because their talents are somewhat similar.

I was hoping to see Edward's first meeting with them. As Rosalie said "

I can't wait to see his expression when he meets the two of you"

Most enjoyable, thank you.

　

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Thank you so much for the review and rating.  I'm glad you liked these scenes.  Jasper is one of my favourite characters to write.  I only stopped myself from writing Edward's first meeting with them because I'd love to write that scene, but in a speperate, EPOV story. :)

Thanks again!

Nice-  My favorite part was #1.  I've always wished there was more written about it in the books.  Thanks for writing it!

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Thank you!  Number 1 was my favourite part to write, too.  Glad you enjoyed it. x

Very nice. Rather sweet, even with the fourth part. It was interesting that Edward commiserating with Jasper on his slip, but of course it makes sense. But Edward's 'slip' was deliberate—in a way Emmett might have been a better choice as his slips with his 'singers' were true slips, not conscious choices. But I digress.

I think you've handled the characterisations quite well. One thing, you said that Rosalie and Carlisle hadn't tasted human blood (and you're not the only one to say that about Carlisle). Rosalie hadn't before Breaking Dawn, that's canon. But how did Carlisle change Edward, Esme, Rosalie, and Emmett without tasting human blood? Performing the change involves biting, no? Wouldn't that mean he'd tasted human blood, he just hasn't fed from a human.

Minor point. This is still a wonderful story! Thank you!

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Thanks for the review!  I've always felt that even though the rest of them had also slipped, it was that much worse for Edward and Jasper, because they could both feel or hear their victim's deaths in a way that someone like Emmett couldn't.  Even though Edward's choice was a deliberate one, it's still the same as Jasper's.

 

I'm glad you liked the way they were characterised too.  I'm not sure that Carlisle would necessarily have tasted blood - the venom comes from their teeth, so surely they wouldn't have to taste the blood - just sink their teeth into the skin?  But it's something I've never thought of before, and a very good point.  That could prove useful for character studies of Carlisle later on...