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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Faith and Trust
Wow, I'm glad the next chapter is up! Sometimes it's good not to find a story till later. ;) I love that Carlisle is going to have Tanya be the proof for his method of treatment. Finally, Tanya is placed in a good light. It's nice to see. Now to find out how that goes! Great writing!
Joan
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Comatose
An intersting twist on the original plot line with Alice's comment that she never saw Bella "older" in her visions!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Comatose
Very Exciting!! I can't wait to see what Charlie thinks about all of this! Great writing!!
Joan
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Esme's Story
Very interesting, but too short! I'm growing attached, can you blame me for wanting more, more, more?!
I like that Esme didn't make the decision to die, that she just ended up on the cliff.
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Esme's Story
i enjoyed this chapter. congrats on your new home, and please hurry back to us! :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Esme's Story
Very sad
Very well written
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Esme's Story
I'm so anxious for the next chapter!
Keep up the great work and please update soon!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Aftermath
awesome!
Reviewer: dqstacy (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Esme's Story
Loved it! Congrats on the new home.
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Dying
Very sad and totally Bella. ;) I wonder if she had planned this a little further in advance that Alice would've shown up to try to stop her? Now I need to see what happens next!! Great writing.
Joan
Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Concrete Angel
Great chapter! I'm excited for the next one!
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Concrete Angel
I'm adoring this story already, and I just started it tonight! Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Concrete Angel
This is an original plot...I like that...I cant wait to see where you go with it
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Concrete Angel
Not sure it was entirely an "I be dead" thing, in the end Bella still wasn't sure what state she was in hehe
Looking forward to the next chapter when you get the chance :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Concrete Angel
I really wish that it didn't take Bella jumping off a cliff and being in a come to bring Edward back...
Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Concrete Angel
Bring it on! I love this!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Concrete Angel
love the writting
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Concrete Angel
Stunning and beautiful! Looking forward to your next chapter with much anticipation...
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Concrete Angel
Wow, what an interesting chapter, interesting view inside Bella's head. I love it!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Faith and Trust
wow, I can feel the tenion building. I'm glad Tanya was nice about things, and simply agrees that Bella will be family soon.
I'm anxious to see what Charlie will think about Carlisles proposition.
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Concrete Angel
Sometimes the best chapters are the short ones. I really enjoyed this insight into Bella's mind. Excellent job. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter and how this all plays out!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Comatose
Oh once I'm caught up here, I think I'll have to go to ff to read on, but I willalways come back and reread anything you post.
I love the perspective Alice put forward. Very well done.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Aftermath
Oh.. so glad I'm behind, I need to keep reading.....
Very well written, loved the insight into esme in this chapter.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Dying
Wow, hell of a beginning! Not sure what I want to happen next... lol
This actually made my throat tighten with unshed tears. You write Bwlla's heartbreak very well.
Reviewer: Fanny-Amanda (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Concrete Angel
Please continue writing!! you are really good!!
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