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Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Dying
Oh, interesting! I wonder who will save her???
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! "Save" is going to be a relative term ;) Who do you think?
Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Dying
Really deep... I want more!! ;D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! More is coming soon!
Reviewer: twilighter022 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Dying
i love this!!! you captured bella's personality beautifuly
is this a oneshot? u probally already said, but sometimes i dont pay alot of attention (sry!)
and if its not a oneshot (lets hope not!) please update soon ;D
-twi
Reviewer: twilighter022 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Dying
i love this!!! you captured bella's personality beautifuly
is this a oneshot? u probally already said, but sometimes i dont pay alot of attention (sry!)
and if its not a oneshot (lets hope not!) please update soon ;D
-twi
Author's Response: Thanks! It was originally going to be a one shot when I began it, but who likes a sad ending? Not me =) The next chapter should be up within the week!
Reviewer: bellafreak (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Dying
I really love it! You really express Bella's feelings. Not like: I am Bella and I love Edward and so I am going to jump of this cliff.
You can really see you thought about the story.
Don't wait too long with updating! I want to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really tried to keep the puppylove angst out of the picture because I think that Edward and Bella's relationship is like air for the both of them...or blood for him and air for her. haha. The next chapter is in que to be validated as we speak!
Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Dying
yeah - i think that she was trying to end it so this is a great story-line - would like to see a 2nd chapter with what Esme thinks - does she realize that this was an attempt to end her life or does she buy the story of thrill seeking? I know that I've read a couple of other things where the cullens ponder this but i really enjoyed your writing so much more - your details etc - thanks for something different to read! Regards, Debbi
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful feedback! Most things get explained in the upcoming chapters. It is que to be validated and should be up within the week.
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