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Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Concrete Angel
more.... more... more... you never disappoint!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Concrete Angel
That's an interesting look into Bella's head while in a coma. I'm glad she's not suffering, like in pain or freaking out or whatever. That's good to know.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: fandjio (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Faith and Trust
Good job. I like Tanya in this chapter (a "good girl"). In most of the stories i read, she is a jealous and superficial, which is OCC (i think) for a leader of a coven
thank you for updating
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Faith and Trust
great job again
Nice change to have a nice Tanya
Good story
Author's Response: Yes, unfortunetly evil man eater Tanya has become something of a Twilight cliche. Doesn't anyone remember she helped stand for the Cullens? Poor girl!
Reviewer: dqstacy (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Faith and Trust
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: dqstacy (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Comatose
Wonderful! Love the direction you're going in. I never thought of Bella not being ment to grow old.
Author's Response: I didn't until I was proof reading the chapter to submit to Twilight to be honest! I was trying to think of a plausible excuse for Edward to be more comfortable with it...cue Alice!
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Faith and Trust
Thank you for not making Tanya annoying and bitchy, I don't think anyone understands her and I have immense fondness for her.
Author's Response: I can only imagine people make her out to be evil because of her fondness for Edward from Midnight Sun, but she really proved her dedication to family in breaking Dawn. That's the Tanya I like to write =)
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Faith and Trust
gesh girl you definatley have talent, you write VERY well. more please
Author's Response: Thank you! More is in que right now!
Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Faith and Trust
Greath chapter! Although, while I think Charlie's permission would be nice to have, it is really unnecessary (they can just take her). Although, if they do that it will really blow their cover, I suppose, and the Volturi might notice? But like Edward said, he will if he has to.
Author's Response: I definetly wanted Charlie to be in the loop somewhat, like Edward said though...nothing was going to come between him and saving Bella. Let's see how Charlie's blood pressure is... haha.
Reviewer: twilighter022 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Comatose
FUTURE CHAPTERS!!!!!! i LOVE the sound of that!!! ;D
this story is so wonderful, and alice's theory is totally right, bella was doomed (what ever you want to call it) the day edward saved her from tylers van (idk about the whole edward wanting to drink bella think ill ponder that later)
YAY!!! i love where the story is going :D
please update soon ;D
-twi
Reviewer: Kitty Curtis (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Dying
This is a good start- I really like the Esme connections...
Reviewer: fandjio (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Comatose
I'm looking forward to reading how they give Charlie an alternative to keep his daughter.
Author's Response: It took me awhile to figure out how to approach it...I hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Comatose
Love it. Maybe Edward FINALLY gets it. It's about time. Can't wait for the next chapter. This is a wonderful story. I would love to see maybe something from Esme's POV.
Author's Response: Edward's a slow learner, haha. much too valient for his own good!
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Comatose
Do you wonder, then, that maybe it was never in Bella’s future to grow old, to live a normal life
Stephenie Meyer WISHES she had put those two and two together. You are very intelligent and your writing truly reflects that. I love that you are getting into the theories- her brain, her sheild, the van incident, Edward being the deciding factor. It's all so brilliant and I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I needed something different that would make Edward a believer in his own fate, and how truly Bella depended on him. He just has to suck it up and accept it now!
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Aftermath
Wow, Rosalie. Shocker. I think I'll like how you furthur her character!
Author's Response: I have a secret love for Rosalie, not going to lie!
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Dying
I've alwasy thought part of her wanted to die, wouldn't be sad if the waves took her- maybe she thought she should already be dead. I can't wait to see how you answer the questions!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Comatose
LOVE THIS
ALICE, THE VOICE OF REASON
Author's Response: Alice is definetly a favorite of mine. Besides, who dares argue with her?
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Comatose
The suspence is going to kill me. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: zmom (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Comatose
I like your story. The similarities between Esme and Bella are spot on. Please update soon!
Author's Response: I think Esme was not given enough time in the spotlight in the books, here's my ode to Esme!
Reviewer: sapphire_light (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Comatose
cool beans, interesting start. can't wait to see what happens...
Author's Response: Me either, haha ;)
Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Comatose
Really great chapter!! Not at all what I thought would happen - I thought Victoria would change her. This is much better. Really interesting with Edward seeing her mind. I wish they would just take her now and change her! Better hope Jacob doesn't find out!!
Author's Response: Victoria always gets to her in the New Moon AU's, I had to do something a little different ;)
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:25 AM · On: Comatose
wow seriously hun you've got some mad writing skills, the flow is just so natural, well done, more please....
Author's Response: Thank you! More is in que now!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Comatose
hmmmmm very interesting... I wonder if venom could fix brain dead.. I suppose so... would be a waste to change her to have a comatosed vamp.. lol.. i like this story so far.. and why would they need to call tanya?? bella wont be happy to wake up to that :)
Author's Response: Bella's going to be the first vegitable vampire ever... just kidding =) Don't worry about Tanya, she's a good guy!
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Comatose
Hmm...I really really like your theory of Bella not being destined to live for very long - hence, Edward would actually be saving her by changing her. It's brilliant!
This story has such a sad beginning...but I can't wait to see where it goes :)
Author's Response: I believe in fate, what can I say? =) that theory actually came to me while rewriting, but I think it throws in a nice twist, and hopefull ymakes Edward feel a teeny tiny bit better!
Reviewer: shosho_911 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Comatose
I love this story
please keep updating
Author's Response: Thank you! I will!
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