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Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crimson and Black Leather

Jasper is Awesome!!!!

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crimson and Black Leather

Jasper has always been on of my favorite cullens...I'm glad that he was included in this chapter and not trying to kill bella.....great work

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home

I love how in all your chapters and stories you catch a wonderful enjoying themselves.  You really know how to inter layer the story... i love it

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crimson and Black Leather

awesome.

Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crimson and Black Leather

omfg, jasper was EPIC!that was soooo not nothing, omg he was awesome, thank you soo darn much for that. sexy times are really fun. great story!

Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crimson and Black Leather

I am so excited about this fic.  Thank you for sharing.  I love love Jasper here.  the relationship he shares with Bella is exactly how it should be.

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crimson and Black Leather

I really loved the part with Jasper. You have made him grow so much and I am relly glad you did. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home

Ugh...I need you to post the next chapter.  Here are my thoughts on your two stories.  First, Bravo for being so brave and killing off Edward.  And then Esme, talk about balls!  What is so great is that you did it in a way that kept the reader interested in Bella's life after both of her obvious love interests were killed off.  Normally this would deter me from reading.  I thought it was also a great plot to pair Bella and Carlisle.  Carlisle has been the father figure so it was a weird transition at first, but you pulled it off beautifully.  I love this story and you have converted me to Team Carlisle! 

PS-I love Dirty Carlisle.  I love that Bella can pull him out of his shell, to make him act his age.

PPS-how 'bout that nurses uniform making an appearence???

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home

hahah loved Bella's tackling of the whole family!! I almost expected her to say one more direct thing in response to Alice's question at the end... like "sexed him into the 21st Century" or something... but "hurry up" worked just as well :)

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home

Yes I really did Love it i almost feel out of my chair laughing. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home

awesome

Reviewer: mizbiz (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home

I did enjoy that family time

Reviewer: ntfbuchanan (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home

Oh that was AWESOME!

Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home

JASPER/BELLA TIME. . . OKAY, BUT I SERIOUSLY EXPECT BELLA TO BE PREGNANT.  WHAT SAY YOU?

Reviewer: meggiekate (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 7: Descriptions

Gah...  need update, I am going into withdrawl!!! :-)

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Descriptions

I love the way you ended the honeymoon. That was beautiful and hot all at the same time.

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 7: Descriptions

Very good, but What could lay in store for them at home??

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 7: Descriptions

real life....

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: A Pit Stop

poor jasper....

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 5 One Last Day

i hate to se their time on the island end....

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 Hot Springs

i love the cullens and their surprises...this should be good.

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 3 Fantasy Isle

poor carlisle...

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Descriptions

I am wondering that my self. Will Bella have a baby? Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sailing in a Sea of Love

wow...that was amazing.....(lits up a cig even if i don't smoke)

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: La Bella Luce

what a perrrrrfect idea...

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