Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 44: The Battle
woohoo! Battles are always soooo hard to write; make it clear what's happening but keeping it the chaos that war is....quite well done...i really like how you portrayed Aro in this...yeah, he's got his idiocincracies...but he understands what it is to be a true leader.
Reviewer: Lavender Haze (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 44: The Battle
I love this story so much! You are actually the author that turned me on to Bella/Carlise stories! So since i love this story so much I made a banner for it....hope you like it...if you do I could make one for this story.
Michelle
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 44: The Battle
holy crap! SOOOOOOOOOO much better than Breaking Dawn. THIS is what I wanted in that book! Please make Bella okay!!! Update soon!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
that was an evil place to stop..i need more!!!!
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
AHHH!!!!
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
WHAT THE HELL?!?!?! Okay THAT was so NOT expected with Aro and Caius! Oh wow! LOVE this chapter! What a cliffhanger you gave us! Can't wait for more! (which sucks because it'll be a month beore I can check this again! But, something good to look forward to!)
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
MORE MORE MORE!!!
Reviewer: SewinthePast (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
WOW....did not see that end coming!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
Hell yes I am ready for more. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keeping my fingers crossed that nothing happens to the Cullens or the pack.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
omg! I know that Aro was committed to stopping Caius however possible, but I really didn't expect the body-pull into the flames! I'm guessing Bella has to deal with Chelsea now from what Aro's last word is... her shield would protect her from Chelsea's manipulations?
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
holy crap! Hurry with an update!
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
Awesome! Here I was wondering how Bella was going to come up with this special power Jacob said she had in order to save the day and Aro lunges at Caius! That wasn't necessarily a great surprise, given everything that happened leading up to this point, but the fact that they were both headed for the fire certainly was... :-)
Thanks for sharing your talent!
p.s. I still think Chelsea could be a major problem, though.
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
oh-oh !!!! ready for more ~!!!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 43: Negotiations
Oh.
My.
God.
update soon! I need to know if Aro lives (wow, can't believe i actually said that)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 42: The Night Before
things are really building up... relieved to see Aro's so firm for his own path, and Charlie's survived his encounter with Bella :)
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 42: The Night Before
caius is in big trouble!
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 42: The Night Before
I like Aro in this...I think all the sub plots are going to make for a rather interesting battle scene! Love how you 'fixed' the almost accident with Charlie...I didn't think you could kill him off like that!
Can't wait for the next!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 42: The Night Before
I liked it and I might be wrong but I am feeling better and better about the fight. I mean if Aro and his loyal vampiers know that Cauis is up to then maybe if it is a fight the wolves, Cullens and Aro may get out alive. And I will ask again please don't let nothing happen to any of the good ones. Thank you for updateing as soon as you did. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 42: The Night Before
Girl, you had me freakin with the charlie cliffy. UGH! I knew you wouldn't do anything to him, but still!
Can't wait for the battle!
Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 42: The Night Before
Firstly, thanks for updating so quickly.
I am sure that at least some of the Cullens, if not all of them, must survive the battle. But that doesn't prevent me worrying how poor Charlie and Sue would cope with the babies! lol
A nice build up, can't wait to see how it goes.
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 42: The Night Before
That should come with a tissue warning *sniffle*
Reviewer: She Who Must Be Obeyed (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 42: The Night Before
*sob*
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 41: The Return to Forks
AAAHHHH!!!! Why do you always do that?!?!?!
Reviewer: kt187 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 41: The Return to Forks
What do I think of the cliffy? MEAN! lol! Keep up the awesome writing!
Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 41: The Return to Forks
A great chapter, the twins are so sweet. Lovely to think of Charlie meeting his grandchildren! I was more concerned about Oliver biting Charlie or Sue than Bella. As I'm an eternal optimist (when it comes to stories anyway), I'm sure Charlie will survive somehow, but I can't wait to find out how.
Looking forward to the next installment!!
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