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Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment
that was hot...yummy! can i have a go with dr cullen please??
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment
wow! What a great way to relax at work!
Reviewer: jrbirdy (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment
:D
Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment
OoooLaLa!
Love it!!
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment
WOW...hot hot hot! Nice job.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment
ok 1st things is to tell gr8k8 if you don't like how she is writing this story stop reading it. I am sorry to have to say that but you have been very rude to her. Ok with that out of the way I loved it. You are doing shuch a good job on this story. I can't wait for the vacation. And I really think Bella is pregeant. I can't wait for more. I have been with you through all of this and I for one want it to keep on and on and on.
Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment
YES, VERY ENJOYABLE. HOW LONG SINCE THE WEDDING. WHEN ARE WE GETTING DOWN TO "BRASS TACKS"? I WAS SO EXCITED TO SEE AN UPDATE AND YET HERE WE ARE, STILL TREADING WATER.
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
Wow! I think I have an idea of what is wrong with bella, but not sure. LOVED Caius's POV!
Reviewer: blusaphyer (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: La Bella Luce
Yeah, I read that chapter right after. Thank you!
Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
Thats an amazing birthday!! what's causing bella to smell so much like carlisle??? glowing did i hear charlie say???
Reviewer: blusaphyer (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 12 Revalations
::jumps up and down:: Yay!! I know you had written this chapter way before I read the previous ones, but still thank you!
Reviewer: blusaphyer (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 11: Girl Talk
Is there ever going to be anything other than fluff in this story? The first three chapters I skimmed, and the past eight I don't even read anymore. I just scroll all the way to the bottom to discover that I didn't miss anything. I read the first story and it wasn't bad. Unfortunately, fluffy romance stories with no actual plot other than "I love him! Let's have sex!" and "I love her! Let's have sex and be young and carefree with no worries!" aren't really my style. I'm not intending to be cruel, but I don't want to waste your numbers with my reading if I don't enjoy it when there are so many other people that read it and do.
Author's Response: There is admittedly a lot of fluff in this story, because I wanted Carlisle and Bella to enjoy their married life for a bit before the drama began. But if you read the Caius chapter, you should be able to assume that there's big things coming.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
Ok i know i done reviewed, but I could not keep my mouth shut. gr8k8 I want to say to you get a real life and let her be not everyone can be at thier computer 24/7. I am a mother of 3 myself and my kids and hubby comes 1st. There are other stories out there you can read till she post a new part. And I want to say I am glad you are getting better from you car wreck mrsalreyami. And I am just happy that you love to write casue you are so good at it. So please don't let what the other people that don't have a real life ever stop you from doing what you love and are very good at. I stand up and applaude you for all you hard work.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
I loved it. And I am glad that Bella now sees that her mom and dad are happy. It will make the change alot easier for her when it happens. I am wondering if there is more to what Jas said then was in this chapter. Can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
I SURE HOPE YOU MEAN "REAL SOON". I LOVE THIS STORY BUT I HATE HOW LONG IT TAKES TO GET EACH NEW CHAPTER UP.
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
Awww so sweet
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
OMC! Is she pregnant?!?! Please write more.. um.. faster? Haha! This is an awesome story!
Reviewer: shailienieves (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 12 Revalations
whoa!! totally caught off guard!!! if i was bella and carlisle and fount that out...god only knows what would have happened...and you of course:)
Reviewer: Alice983 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 12 Revalations
wow all i can say. wow.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 12 Revalations
oohh boy! Caius seems more than a little pissed... and I wonder how long before his connection to the Newborn Army and Esme & Edward's deaths come out - maybe just in time for an eventually-vamp'd Bella to smack him down? :)
Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 12 Revalations
Cool an immortal with a Napoleon complex...and more than a touch of paranoia. This ought to be good.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 12 Revalations
WOw that was good but did catch me off guard. Can't wait to see how this works out. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 12 Revalations
oh dear...although I have a feeling that bella will step up to the mark wonderfully!! :D awesome as ever!
Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 12 Revalations
Interesting twist - bravo!
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