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Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 19 Spanish Surprises

I'm betting that Elly hears another heartbeat other than Bella's. 

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 19 Spanish Surprises

Ok I have no idea. It is either he hears something outside or he can hear something in Bella. You are doing a wonderful job on this sotry. And thank you nikkipattinson for helping you get updates out quick. I can't wait for more. You know how my complete attation, but you have had it through out.

Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

Wow! totally didn't expect the blood thing, kinda gross :P Not gross enough for me to not laugh my butt off though lol. Why hasn't Carlisle told Bella what he thinks 'might' be happening to her. It's a little obvious now isn't it?

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

Her tatse of her blood suprised me! Definitly a great twist! Ahh, to be on the Effiel Tower at night!

Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

Poor Alice!  I bet sometimes she feels that her visions are more of a curse than a blessing. 

Bella sleeping so much, now craving, desiring, tasting, and enjoying blood, sounds like she's pregnant to me.  However, if she is, and Jasper notice the change in her scent before they left, how far along would she be?  And does she not have her montly cycles at all?  She hasn't mentioned it being that time in quite a while, that I can remember.

I hope whatever is brewing with Caius, Alice "sees" before things get too out of hand. 

I'm totally loving your story.  I can't to see what's next to come, besides Bella and Carlise, of course!!!

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

Have them figure out the pregnancy already.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

Nice.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 15: Going Greek

Greece sounds nice.  Sweet Chapter.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

hehe poor Alice

 

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

i reckon if she turning slowly, then its gonna take a whole load of sex with carlisle...which i'm all for, but it will take forever, but i still think that she might be pregnant..not necessarily crazy hybrid babies but her body thinks its pregnant but maybe hybrid babies??? 

Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

Either she is preggo and going the natural nine month flow, or you changing her slowly.  Either way.....their libido is hot as hell!

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

Well that tells me she is either pregant are she is slowly turning into a vampire. And I do feel sorry for Alice and her visions. If that had happen to me I would have had to find a way to wipe my memory. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: edward1991 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 18 - I See France

That was good.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 17 Coming Together

oh boy... real trouble from Caius it seems... maybe Aro's not going to be the big baddie to be worried about this time around? :P

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 16: Viva La Italia

hmm it's Italy, so I'm thinking it has to be the Volturi watching in some way... but we'll see :)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: Going Greek

ohh Carlisle's got some great lines there, might have to write a few of those down hehe :)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment

I'm thinking Carlisle's going to want that nurse's outfit kept on hand for a while hehe

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday

hmm yeah... Bella seems pretty fine ;)

Reviewer: edward1991 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 17 Coming Together

I think Caius is freaking crazy but that just my opinions. He want to kill Carlisle because he believes that it is possible to live among humans without killing them and i agree with Carlisle. But I see where you are going with this story. It is great and good so far. I can't wait for more because I know something bad is about to happen that would mean a war between the Cullens and Caius and his crazy, evil plan.

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 17 Coming Together

Hmmmmm What could Caius be up to???

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 17 Coming Together

Caius has a big master plan rolling here, but I have confidence in Carlise and Aro. When is the pregnancy going to be discovered?

Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 17 Coming Together

Caius needs small peices of him ripped off an burned bit by bit. He's an evil monster! You write an awesome villan! update soon!

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment

woof

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 17 Coming Together

Dang! What a devious henious evil vampire Caius and Chelsea and Afton are! It was good to get some of their POV, makes it more well rounded!

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 Coming Together

He is a wicked shit head. That being said I hope his plan don't happen LOL. And I can't wait for the next chapter. This keeps getting better and better.

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