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Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
awsomeness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
Enjoyed your first chapter. Scene suggestion - The kissing incident on their way to the baseball game in Twilight
Author's Response: Ooh, good idea! Thank you so much for the lovely review, and I'm glad you liked the chapter.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow love it, just like I had imagine it would be, actually even better ..... my faves are the Eclipse scenes in his new bed so would like to see what you make of them!! Also would love to hear your versions of what happened in Italy after she saved him from sunlight, in the little room in Volterra before Felix & Demetri get to them
Author's Response: Good ideas! Thank you so much for the lovely review and the feedback. There's much more to come! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh i can't wait to see what you are gona do next that was really good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There's much more to come. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
lemony, lemony, lemons!! loved it!
Author's Response: Yep! Lemons are awesome. Glad you liked it!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! Just ....wow! I don't know what else to say. This was probably one of the best chapters I've read in a while. Can't wait to see what you do next. ....or rather what Edward and Bella do next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! I can't wait to hear what you think of the other chapters. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love your idea. This first one was really great. This explains a little of his facination with watching her sleep, lol. I have a couple of ideas for some others I would like to see.
Twilight - maybe some after the prom fun
New Moon - I agree that there has to be something after the whole Italy trip. This is a must have !!!!!
Eclipse - I would like to see a version where Edward gives in when Bella throws herself at Edward.
Keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next chapter !!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the awesome suggestions! I'll definitely keep them in mind...SM missed sooo many opportunities. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reviewing! I can't wait to hear what you think of later chapters.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
that would explain some of my dreams!!! (I hope!) I hope you do the leg hitch/what is wrong with this bed scene next!
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry...that scene is definitely on my list. *grins* Thank you for reviewing and rating, and I can't wait to hear what you think of later chapters. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Gotta love vamp on human lemons! Below are my lemon suggestions...SM missed so many opportunities.
Twilight-- When he drives her home after blood typing. When he takes her to meet the family and the house tour ends in his room. In the shiny Volvo after he saves her in Port Angeles.
New Moon-- The most glaringly obvious missed lemon. After the Volturi. They had survived an almost certain death, all was forgiven, they love each other, and they had been apart for months...the next step hot monkey sex. First put an ocean between themselves and the Italians and then find the first available place to "come" together.
Eclipse-- Edward is always more prepared than any boy scout I've ever heard of. What a bonehead move knowing how the weather was going to turn. Let's pretend he remembered the camping heater and Jacob stayed out of the tent where he belonged. Edward probably would have enjoyed marking his territory with Jacob so close by.
Author's Response: I love your suggestions! I had some on my list already, and a few I hadn't thought of. Thank you so much for the feedback and the lovely review! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG!! That was really hot..can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: scottishmoon (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Brilliant...more! :) x
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's more on the way.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: asja (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Excellent- please continue- I'd love to have an opportunity to read a different version of the Twilight Saga- where they acted like two horny teenagers :D
Author's Response: Me, too, bb, me, too! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for reviewing.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: jodie1 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
AWSOME, keep it up im gla im not the only one who wished the twilight series had morelemons. Amanda.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's a lot more to come.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well, that was pretty fucking hot. Lol. Loved it, girly!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, bb! Thanks so much for reviewing. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
ok sweetie you have my undivided attention....
Author's Response: I'm glad I caught your attention. Thanks for your review, and I can't wait to hear what you think of future chapters. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: bumpuscat (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
There are so many E/B scenes from the books that I thought could have turned into more, but unfortunately I have no writing skills so thank you so much for writing this!
Can't believe Bella didn't wake up though. *sigh* Oh well, maybe next time :) Looking forward to reading more. Please continue.
Author's Response: Hear, hear! There were so many places where we could have used a little something extra, but that's why we have fanfic, right? I'm so glad you liked the chapter. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
hey chica your finally here!!!
I think there needs to be some tree top action
Author's Response: Trees, you say? Perhaps, perhaps... :-) The banner looks amazing. Thanks again!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMFG SCORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO DAMN HOTT!!!!! THAT IS HOW TWILIGHT SHOULD HAVE BEEN WRITTEN. Damn!!!! I would have enjoyed it so much more if we had some extra scenes like that in the books, but hell this is why we have fan fiction right? I loved this and you did very well with it. Looking forward to the next installment.
Penny
Author's Response: Wow, Penny, that was enthusiastic! I'm so happy you liked the chapter, and thank you for your review. And you're totally right...that's exactly why we have fan fiction, to fill in those lovely gaps in the story. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this chapter - look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: topaztemptress (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
AMAZING!
Wow! Can't wait for next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: jrh927 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow...just...wow! GREAT WORK!
I'd love to see you expand on the Edward almost giving in to Bella at the end of Eclipse - when she stopped him (stupid Bella!) That could have been some hot and heavy stuff there.
Or, the infamous "leg hitch" in Eclipse, as well.
Author's Response: Ooh, fantastic idea! The giving-in scene...hmm. I'll have to give that some serious thought. The leg-hitch is definitely a planned chapter. Thanks for the feedback and the lovely review!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: grlanachronsm (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Holy hell. That was hot.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Honestly, I'd like to see Chapter 13 of the first book to be turned into something a little more... passionate. Iit's one of my favorites.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll definitely consider something from 13...I'm sure there's something I can do with the meadow *snickers* :-D
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Lamiko (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was very intersting plz continue =)
Author's Response: Don't worry, I will! There are definitely more chapters floating around in my head. Thank you for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: stef_ (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
nice!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
xoxo Sarah
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