Oh.My.God! I think I just spontaneously orgasmed! Criticially, I really liked your unique approach of including introductions to each chapter with SM's original verbiage to seamlessly blend in your own lemony-good smut. I think I liked chapter 7 best, but each one was quite delicious! (I'd like to taste Edward and a little sompin' else too).  

 

Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.  I'm glad you have a favorite chapter...I have my favorites as well, and there are more to be written! :-)

xoxo Sarah

These are so much fun to read!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so happy you're enjoying the story.  I love your reviews! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Hey! I am talking about when Edward pulls bella on top of him, he's ready to go for it and she pushed him away. *whatever, Bella*

That scene was omitted from the movie, and it would be great to read it really happening!

Maria

Author's Response:

Oh!  In Eclipse!  For some reason I was thinking you meant a prom scene.  Thanks for the suggestion!  I'll check to see if I have it marked already, and what I can do with it.  It may show up as a chapter sooner or later. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Wow

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :-)

xoxo Sarah

wow, now each time a see a volvo i will remember this chapter damn, this was so hooooot.please send me an e mail when your next chapter is ready , i'll be waiting ,,

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  The Volvo chapter was fun to write.  If you add the story to your favorites, you will get an email from Twilighted when I update.  There's no way I can do it individually; there are over 1000 people who have favorited this story, lol! :-)

xoxo Sarah

ooh god ohh god, i'm just spent  lol  this was hooooot , and lovely thank you so much

Author's Response:

Haha, you're welcome!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Toingggggggg....damn that was soooooo....... mmmmmmi remember i used to  do that youknow ???? ejaculated with my husbend,,  long time agohe died 5 years ago , i don't have sex since 2002 lol i'm a virgin again i think lol , damn .but the way you explain the motions and the feelings  fuccckkkk ... thank you so much  i bow  to you ...

Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks, sweets!  I can make myself do it, but I hope to teach hubby sometime. ;-)  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and are liking the story.  

I'm very sorry you lost your husband, and my thoughts go out to you.  I do know that when you have sex again, you'll know exactly what to do...don't worry about that!   :-)  

Thank you so much for such a lovely review.

xoxo Sarah

There are so many scenes of Bella's bedroom, but this one is awsome i just loved it....how about the first time she's awake mmm .

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it.  I have a lot of different scenes here, so check them out!  I'd love to hear what you think. :-)

xoxo Sarah

sister you have a wonderfully twisted mind.....please keep this stuff coming!!!!!!! ok so now I can say that I am sad and want more!!!!!!!!!! update soon

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your awesome reviews and the beautiful stars!  I will try to update soon, but my main priority is my story The Disillusioned, which takes up more brain space, haha.  This one is so much fun to write too, though, and I promise updates! 

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your awesome reviews and the beautiful stars!  I will try to update soon, but my main priority is my story The Disillusioned, which takes up more brain space, haha.  This one is so much fun to write too, though, and I promise updates! 

xoxo Sarah

Bathroom sex...public places...it doesn't get any better than this especially with Edward!!!!!!!!!!! What dirty dirty boy!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Dirty Edward strikes again!  This chapter was soooo much fun to write.  I love taking him outside of his comfort zone.

xoxo Sarah

ok that was very.........ok I don't have the words for that one!!!!!!!!! but now I am sad because I have to wait for more!!!!!!!!! up date soon!!!!!!

Author's Response:

This is chapter 8....there are some more chapters here...I think I've posted up to 12 chapters.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!

xoxo Sarah

ummm..... the 17 year old male in Edward strikes again!!!!!!!! and a sassy, foreword Bella.....this is definitely an OOC/AU.... but i think i like it!!!!!!!!! and i do believe Edward did mention having fantasies since the first day is biology...then with further thought it started to sound better that he might tell her about those fantasies in a dirty talking Edward style as a distraction when he had to save Bella the first time...... what do you think!!!!!!!!!??????

Author's Response:

Haha, yes, this is definitely an OOC AU story.  If we wanted to read some long novels where there was no sexin', I have four sitting on my bookshelf. ;-)

And yes, I think it's completely canon for Edward to have sexual urges, and he mentions to Bella several times through the series that he may be a vampire but he has human urges, and is a man.  I do love a dirty talking Edward!

xoxo Sarah

yes that was VERY interesting....more please!!!!!!!! ok you have asked for ideas and I don't even know if it has been done yet!!!!!! how about the underlying sexuall reaction Edward would have to Bella during their first meeting in biology as apposed to the need to kill her!!!!!!!! maybe more of an Edward fantasy!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hmm, interesting idea!  I'll see if I can explore that further.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and I can't wait to hear what you think of the other chapters! 

xoxo Sarah