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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

As hot as that was, it was very unEdward like!

It was perfectas a dream! many of us had

that dream while reading that book! :)



Author's Response:

Oh, definitely!  It's such a sad part of the book, that the only way for me to make it work was to make it a dream.  But, dream Edward is better than nothing...Poor Bella.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

AWESOME! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 4

loved it very much can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There's a lot more coming, so stay tuned! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Tigerlily74 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

Whoa!! Now that would have made school really worth going to! Great job.



Author's Response:

Haha, definitely.  I wish my bio classes went like that...though I may have paid even less attention if Edward were in my class!  Thank you so much for the wonderful review. 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

i bet he tastes delicious!  thanks for the update - i wish my biology classes had been that much fun, i may have paid attention...er...watched movies in class instead of slept, well, you know what i mean, haha.



Author's Response:

Oh my, yes.  I definitely wish my bio classes were THAT interesting, lol.  I might actually have learned something.  Or not.  

What I love about Vampward is that he can taste like whatever you want him to...he's not human.  My Edward tastes either like fresh fruit, light and sweet, or like creme brulee.  Yum.  ;-)

Thanks for your lovely review and the beautiful stars!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMFG!!!

Holy Hot Nipple Fuck, Batman!!!! *wipes drool*

Girl, that was seriously fuckhawt. I just... can't even... guh!!!!



Author's Response:

HAHAHA!  I take it you liked it?  That's how I wished that biology class went...."electric charge only" my ass...

Sorry I reduced you to brain mush, but only a little. *smirk*

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 4

i love these and i hope there will be many of them!

would love to read an E/B scenario where jake and/or tanya find out and are green with envy.

with everything edward has to put up with in eclipse and early breaking dawn i think he should get to "mark his territory"



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have a bunch of chapters planned already, so these two have a lot more coming.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far.  :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Blue Indigo999 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loveed it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, bb!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loved it.....talk about a science lesson!

Author's Response:

Haha, yes...that was certainly a good lesson in anatomy.  If only my bio classes were THAT interesting.... :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

SUCH A GREAT JOB

JUST LOVE THIS



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.  The stars are wonderful, too!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

My god that was hot!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

Whoa, that was hot! I believe every word you wrote! Edward could do that to anyone!

These "sideshots" are great! I am glad you are doing this! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  These two have a LOT more coming up for them, so stay tuned.  I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: stephieleigh (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 4

Yummy!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 4

love it cant wait for more already have you on my favs =)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the awesome review and the pretty stars, bb!   :-)  

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

Once I got over how icky it would be to lick your hand while in high school, heh...

I very much loved this!  It was perfect, and you made it plausible!  I so would have enjoyed being naughty in bio class with Edward Cullen!  And it is totally beliveable that Bella could get off from nip touching alone... espically with all of the hype and not touching that was going on.  Hey Bella, want to trade lab partners for day 2 of the movie?! Darn... Thanks for updating!  I'm excited for the Disillusioned!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter!

If I were Bella, I would say Biology would be my favorite class just for Edward and well....=) hehe.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: Sparkels45 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!



Author's Response:

Haha, don't worry, there's more coming.  I've been hard at work on more chapters, and on my new story which I hope to start posting around the end of the month.  :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 3

WOW - IT WAS A DREAM! THATS AWSOME



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 2

WOW - THATS THE WAY IT SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED!



Author's Response:

I'm with you on that one.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

HOLY WOW HOT!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I hope you enjoy the other chapters.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Lisa D (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

That was one hell of a good wet dream! Your Bella character has quite an imagination, and the way she seen her and Edward makeing love was definetly wild for a first time thing! I don't think I'd even be gutsy enough for that. Picturing Rob as Edward would still make me try different things if he wanted though. I have my own fantasies too! Keep up the creativity your doing great.



Author's Response:

Thank you for another lovely review!  This was such a sad scene in NM that the only way I could make it work was to make it a dream.  But, sexy-Edward dreams are better than nothing, poor Bella.  Don't worry...they'll be getting more action in other chapters. :-)  I agree...I definitely picture Robward for my Edward as well. 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Lisa D (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

I couldn't stop grinning reading this! I liked how you made Bella reasure Edward by her taking him in her mouth. I know from the last chapter that he was wanting her to do that anyway! Now if they only had more time before the fight, I would have liked to see him be able to eat her out as well. Just for reasurance you know lol! Nice tent scene, I liked yours better then Stephanie's good job.



Author's Response:

Yea!  Thanks so much for your lovely reviews.  My goal was to write short scenes that fit in (reasonably, lol) well with the scenes from the books.  Some will be plausible, others, not quite so much, haha, but it's all in good fun.  I'm so happy that you like the story.  Stay tuned for more! 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Lisa D (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

This definetly kept my attention! I can also picture Rob and Kristen doing this in a rated X type of movie. You have a wicked imagination but I like it! I've also read a BD type of story somewhat like thi,s and all I can picture now are dirty things with the characters and Rob with Kristen playing them out! The Twilight series is my favourite story, the movies are even better. With me being an adult I just wish the romance and kissing scenes could go further! I think it would be more intertaining that's all! Good job with the bedroom scene Edward fingering Bella was a good idea.



Author's Response:

I hear you on that...the series definitely needed more smut, but that's what fanfic is for.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story (and my pervy imagination) so far!  :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

very very nice, lol. i kind of like it more as a dream. its a bit more plausible.  



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's such a sad part of the book, that the only way I could make it work for this scene was to do it as a dream.  But don't worry...they'll really be doing it in other chapters.  I have a lot more in store for these two, so stay tuned!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: twiadict (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 3

I really thought it was a stretch...a hot stretch, but a stretch...until you got me at the end.  Brava, Brava!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I surprised you with the dream.  I love surprising my readers.  Don't worry, they'll really be doing it in other chapters, but this scene was such a sad one from NM, that the only way to make it work was to do it as a dream.  Not  to say some of the other chapters won't stretch reality a bit, either, lol!  

Thank you so much for your lovely reviews, and I can't wait to hear what you think if future chapters.  Don't forget to favorite the story so you get an email when I update! 

xoxo Sarah

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