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Reviewer: twilightlovergirl (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 6
<3 it x
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow that was a great chapter. Good jobl
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: irunwithvampires (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
Nice, very, very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 6
LOL Ahhh, yes. Jane Austen. Edward Ferrars ... Edward Cullen... Close indeed. *grin*
Nice blanket action! Ah the possibilities, eh? LOL It must be fun for you to look through the books and see where you can insert these moments. :)
Author's Response: A little too close for comfort for Bella, it seems. It is very fun to go through and corrupt these lovely young adult novels. I have to say, I'm enjoying myself, probably too much, haha! If you have any scenes that you'd like to see, feel free to suggest, bb! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 6
Yes, it´s definitely worth a review. ;)
Very sexy chapter. Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Blue Indigo999 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
Ohh boy!!! Me likey some oral action ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think Bella liked it too ;-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
Awesome work!
This story has some of the best smut I've ever read :)
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! What a lovely compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying the chapters, bb! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: msashlyjudd8 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
That was freaking hot. What girl wouldn't think Edward coming out of the woods to please her wouldn't be hot? lol Great job.
Author's Response: Lol! Exactly. Send him right over...I have a blanket ready!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 6
Excellent early lemon!!
Author's Response: Thanks, sweets! I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the stars too!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
Woohoo!!! Hot daytime blanket bingo! With Edward!
This was so erotic. I loved it! I kept waiting for him to wake up, lol! (thank God he actually just did it!)
Can't wait til Monday!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Blanketward, bb! Now THAT'S a good way to spend a nice afternoon in Forks...no Austen novels necessary. Edward does grow some balls occasionally, haha.
I think you'll love the Lemonshot. I can't wait to see what you think! :-D
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
I have not read "Midnight Sun". I still will not be reading that draft. But here I am getting hints of what I am missing and it's killing me! I can't give up your clips but I don't want to know what's in Midnight Sun.... What's a girl to do?
Nice chapter. Very smutty. :)
Author's Response: Oh crap! I'm sorry. :-( I honestly didn't ever think that I might be ruining it for someone. I'm glad you're enjoying my chapters, though, and I guess you can take comfort in knowing that what happens here doesn't happen in MS, lol! I only use little bits, I promise!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
good job! Blanketward is A-OK by me! (Wish he were by me....)
I look forward to your next update to see what will happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Blanketward is a favorite of mine as well.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: njdevil30718 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
whew! i think she'll be sitting outside more ofter...lol safe to say he'll definatel be making nightly visits
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, I think everyone should buy blankets and spend more time outside in case Edward makes a detour. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
loved it thanks for sharing update when you can thanks...
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you for a lovely review and the stars!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter!
Well, that's a good way to spend your afternoon, in your backyard, reading. I bet Bella will go out there more often now, lol.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, yes. I need to buy more blankets in hopes Edward will make a detour. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
Hey Bella's Dom! ;0) (Yes, she told me)
I loved this. That is one of my favorite scenes from Midnight Sun. I love it better with the "box munching" Hee Hee! That was cute! At least you didn't forget Bella's "O". (LYP still can't believe she did that- I look foward to reading it on Monday!!!)
Great chapter! .....You earn your Edward cookies!
Jen :0)
Author's Response: LOL! Hey, Jen! Yes, I am now Bella's Dom. I think you'll love her chapter, if you haven't seen it already. Especially now with th "O" firmly in place. :-D
I'm glad you liked the "box munching." I had a good time picking out phrases that Emmett would use to pester Edward. Please Fed-Ex the cookies...it's the only way to get them here before Sunday.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 6
woohoo, almost caught, lol
Author's Response: Haha, yes. Charlie has terrible timing. Or maybe Edward has good timing. Good thing Bella got into the house when she did. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: cullenstyle (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 6
*stands up and claps*
AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING!!!
Us team Edward, we are less and less now (Eww, wolves? No Thanks) but stories like this prove Edward is the best.
What other scenes do you have in mind? Birthday? Meadow? after the proposal?
Please more chapters!!
Author's Response: Lol! Thank you so much! *takea a bow*
I have a lot more chapters planned, and most definitely a meadow scene. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: cin4lotr (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 4
***fans self furiously** DAMN i don't know what else to say
Author's Response: That's okay...I enjoy inspiring speechlessness, lol! I'm so happy that you're enjoying the story.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: cin4lotr (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 3
my goodness that was intense :) another great chapter !! *dashes off to read more**
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: cin4lotr (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW!!!! very visual :) not to mention, VERY HOT!!! can't wait to read more
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: beldenuit (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 5
that's very good
x)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 5
**sigh**pant**speachless**cold shower!**
Author's Response: Hahaha! I'm glad you liked it. No cold shower...go find hubby again!
If you haven't already, put the story on alert so you'll get an email when I update. Thank you for all your amazing reviews, and I can't wait to hear what you think of future chapters! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
When Edward are touching, pinching and playing with your nipples and you are jacking him off - of course you cum!!!
Author's Response: Hear, hear! That's exactly what I was going for. I would have learned a lot more about bio if Edward had been in my class...or maybe not. *smirks*
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Fuck! It was only a dream! Make sense though, nice spin on things.
Mile Highward - mmmmm
Who am I kidding? I love every kind of sexward!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, any kind of Edward is a good thing. I tried to figure out a way to make it happen for real, but this is such a sad part of the book that the only thing that would work was if I did it as a dream. :-)
xoxo Sarah
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