I read this as a part of Smut Mondays this week, and I'm glad you posted it here too--I'm not sure how to "review" for an author when they're posted in something like Smut Mondays.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this particular scene.  I think you captured the mood perfectly, and it was really sweet.  I can't wait to see what you do next!

Author's Response:

That's okay!  You can review for Smut Mondays, but because we're not technically "authors" for it, I can't respond to the reviews even though I can read them.  

I'm glad you liked Sweetward and the scene.  Thank you for such a lovely review! :-)

xoxo Sarah

This chapter was very emotional & loving!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  This was such a bittersweet scene in the books, and I tried to keep that tone.  I also wanted to have Edward confess to Bella before any lemonade happened...I have a hard time writing lemons without any feeling behind them.  I'm glad you liked it. :-)

xoxo Sarah

That is how it should have been loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks are you bring the baby into this because if you don't I would be OK with that thanks for sharing...

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story!  No, I'm not doing anything from Breaking Dawn.  There are so many good "missing moments" and "alternate" stories for BD out there that are really well-done that I didn't want to touch it.  Just Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, and Midnight Sun. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Just found this today, and I am loving it!  Yes, a bit OOC as you said, but therein lies the fun!  =D  Looking forward to seeing what scene you go with next.

Author's Response:

Exactly!  We all have four large books to read if we want them to be completely in character, haha.  It's fun to make them do things that are a bit OOC.  I'm glad you're enjoying this, and there's a lot more to come.  

xoxo Sarah

This chapter was perfection.

Author's Response:

That's a really nice compliment!  Thank you so much.

xoxo Sarah

Wow!  You never disappoint!  Hot tamales, I need new underwear now...

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  I hear Victoria's Secret is having a sale, lol!  Thank you for your lovely review.

xoxo Sarah

I was so happy when I read the first line and realized it was the tv scene!  It's one of my favorites  :)

Author's Response:

It's among my top five scenes that I wanted "lemonized" too, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you so much!

xoxo Sarah

i really like this one is was Sweet and Naughty lol .. love it cant wait for more

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I do love a healthy dose of Sweetward.  He makes me very happy too.  

xoxo Sarah

I too could never understand fully the reaction that E had in this scene.  I'm glad someone else figured it out.  Really appropriate!

 

Linda

Author's Response:

Thank you, Linda!  I thought so too...I couldn't wrap my head around where Edward's was, either.  Oh well, that's what we have fan fiction for. :-)

xoxo Sarah

HOT!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

xoxo Sarah

I didn't know you had a poll! But now I do! and I'm going to vote.

I wanted this scene so much! This is the way it should have been, I bet that if that happened, there would be no dog to screw things up.

TEAM EDWARD!

Author's Response:

Lol!  Thank you so much.  The poll was for which scene I would write for Smut Mondays, and this chapter was the winner.  I'm glad you liked it.  Thank you for reviewing and rating!

xoxo Sarah

Good job! That was a great lemon! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I have a lot more planned, so stay tuned! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Ahhh the sweet, sweet satisfaction.  Wonderful.  That was perfect and so creative.  I love the imaginative twist of Edward tying Bella up.  So Hot.  Bravo!

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked him tying Bella up.  I figured it would keep her "grabbiness" under control, lol.  That way, Edward could be more in control.  Thank you for all your wonderful reviews!  I really value the feedback. 

xoxo Sarah