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Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 11

TOTALLY LOVED IT! THAT WAS AWESOME! I WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WAITING FOR THIS ONE! DAMN, I NEED A COLD SHOWER! NOW! I think it will remind me of edward a bit...... uh-oh! HOT SHOWER!! NOW!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Go re-read it and then take a cold shower...you'll thank me later. ;-)

I'm so happy the chapter lived up to your expectations! 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

Daaaamn.. I need a cigarette and I dont even smoke.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked the leg-hitch scene!  I thought it made sense that he should tie her up...less chance of her getting "handsy," lol! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

hell yeah. n tell me more about responding just from touching nipples.. lol



Author's Response:

LOL!  It can definitely happen...It just takes some time and some, uh, attention. ;-)  

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

@ first I was like.. whaa?? But I was enjoying it so much I was like fck it..  haha keeping it a dream made sense good move.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I tried to make it just a regular scene, but I couldn't make it work because it was such a sad part of the book.  But dream Edward is better than nothing! 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

yeah baby yeah...



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! I love it when Edward takes charge. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

*runs around the room screaming*

IT'S THE MEADOW! IT'S THE MEADOW!! What SM wanted to write but she wanted to torture us and made us wait until the 4th book. FOR A BLANK SPACE!

Edward... it is so much easier when he just gives in, isn't it?



Author's Response:

LOL!  You're too funny!  Seriously.  And I really wanted to finish this chapter...I would have had Edward take Bella back to the Cullen house and bite her to change her while Em and Rose torched her truck out in the middle of nowhere.  Happily ever after! :-)

And yes, if only Edward would have actually listened...it's much easier than he would have thought it would be.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 11

I like Purrward (and his sparkly peen)



Author's Response:

I'm with you, bb...purring and sparkle peen = major win!  Thank you for another awesome review and the beautiful stars! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my....yeah.  Wow.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I take it you liked the chapter, lol!  :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh shiiit ...  ahaha  i was giggling the whole way through.  It was nice and lemony though.    I like in your summary...  lemon drops along the way..  I have some catching up to do.. dido on the leg hitching in Eclipse.. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found the story!  I can't wait to hear what you thought of the other chapters! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: ekib09 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 11

Okay, this is my new favorite version of Bella and Edward in the meadow.  Thank you for writing this!



Author's Response:

I'm honored!  Thank you so much for reviewing, and I'm so happy you liked the scene. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 11

i love purrward lol - love your sexy twilight cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked Purrward!  Thank you so much for rating and reviewing. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 11

Sparkling Meadow Sex!!!! Love it!!! :0) 

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  Jen loves the sparkle peen as much as I do!  Yay!  :-)  Thanks, bb!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 11

Are you ready for ECLIPSE????? I am so eager for that movie, I can barely stand it! I have seen a lot of pics and clips, and it looks like it will be totally amazing! I wish I could buy the DVD the day after I see it! I need to buy an on-line ticket TODAY!!!! I hope I can find it around here in IMAX....

Even that passage from Twilight was Hot but not lemony. GOOD CHOICE!

I loved the lemon you added! Once Edward realized that he COULD be around Bella, I loved how he acted. So calm and caring, although I doube he felt calm at all!!! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

I'm very excited for it, but I probably won't be going opening weekend...I think I'm too young for hearing loss, lol!  I agree that it looks amazing...especially the fight sequences.  And I'm looking forward to seeing Jasper in his Civil War flashback.  Yum!  

I'm so happy you liked the lemon, and thank you for reviewing!  I'm sure Edward wasn't calm at all, lol, but I wanted to make it easier for them to be together, and keep the same romantic tone as the original scene.  Though I really wanted to finish the chapter...I would have gone on to write how Edward ran to the Cullen house with Bella, and he bit her and changed her right there so they could have forever together while Em and Rose torched her truck somewhere out in the middle of nowhere.  Happily ever after! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: MayaCullen20 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hi!

First of all - GREAT CHAPTER (although I would've liked it better if he had taken control instead of Bella, sorry).

You had one hell of an idea with the whole story (this is something I have ALWAYS wanted to read or/and write)  and I would be really disappointed if you ended it now, I'm hoping for at least ten more chapters (if you need ideas, I'd be happy to suggest, there are plenty more spots that could be lemonized XD).

You're one of the few authors whose name in my inbox makes me squeal every time, so please, please, please don't leave me waiting, I'm already expecting another chapter.

xoxo

Maya

P.S. I'm sorry if I'm being a pain in the a*s or sound like Alice on sales, that wasn't my intention at all when I started writing this, half an hour ago... I just have no idea what to say, and I like letting YOU know how much I enjoy and appreciate your story.

 

 



Author's Response:

Aww, I'm so happy you liked it, Maya!  I do have a few "Domward" chapters in here where he takes the lead, so I hope you'll check those out.  

I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story!  This concept nagged at me for a long time, and I finally got around to writing it.  I'm just happy you lovely readers like it, too.  There are probably around 10 more ideas on my list, but feel free to PM me and suggest some!  They may be some I have on the list already, but I appreciate the suggestions.  I try to keep the chapters more or less secret so the readers don't know which one is coming next. :-)

Thank you for such a lovely review and the honest feedback.  I'm blushing over how much you're enjoying it, and I appreciate hearing it!  *MWAH!*

p.s. if you're interested in having me write you a one-shot, keep the auctions in mind!  They start very soon! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 11

*Clapping my hands enthusiastically* Finally! The meadow scene. And it was fantastic. You managed to make it sexy as hell without destroying the romantic feeling. Just awesome. Thank you, thank you so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!  I'm very glad you liked the chapter.  I tried hard to keep the romantic tone of the original meadow scene, and I'm excited that it came across. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Laine Quinn (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oooh girl... I just love take charge Bella.



Author's Response:

Me too!  I figured it was about time Edward let her have some fun too. ;-)  Thank you for reviewing!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

HOTHOLY HELL!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I take it you liked the chapter!  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story...let me know!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

loved it very much thanks for sharing update when you can.....



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked it!  Thank you for reviewing and rating.  There's more on the way!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 11

That was really beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh, I loved this chapter. It really could have been how it happened. Stephanie's books would have all be SO different if she had managed to write a scene like this! LOL!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, though I'm sorry you felt it was only worth a 6/10.  I hope I can do better next time.  

The meadow scene was one I really wanted to do, though I wanted to finish the chapter: I would have gone on to write how Edward ran to the Cullen house with Bella, and he bit her and changed her right there so they could have forever together while Em and Rose torched her truck somewhere out in the middle of nowhere.  Happily ever after! :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Alice Jasper 4ever (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow. I think I like purrward too. Lol. That was an amazing chapter. Hope you update soon. =D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked Purrward. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Missy96 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

sexy



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 11

This was great!

I can bet that Edward and Bella will never forget that day in the meadow...And go there for many repeats. =)

Looking forward to your next update!

(You saw those pictures with Hammock Rob? I loved those pictures...)



Author's Response:

I'm willing to bet that you're totally right!  I seriously wanted to finish the chapter....I would have gone on to write how Edward ran to the Cullen house with Bella, and he bit her and changed her right there so they could have forever together while Em and Rose torched her truck somewhere out in the middle of nowhere.  Happily ever after! :-)

And Hammock Rob?  Guh...

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 11

First i have to say I am in agreement about Hammock Rob...omg that pic. I could NOT stop staring at it when my friend (who is a Robsten fanatic) posted it on her facebook hehe! i love it! *swoons*

now my review. I am not at all surprised you could fit one in here. It was very easy to make that into a lemon if you REALLLLY think about it :D hehe i'm glad we got to see some meadow action. The purring...ohhh purrward. I LOVE it when writers put it Edward purring. I have no idea but him using his "basic instincts" is just so damn hot in my mind. Thank you thank you! Visual Wetward and Hockeyward is my fave. personality Domward is my fave. mix it in with purring and dirty talking edward and you have my fantasy come true lol.

 

can't wiat to see what you come up with next!! hehe 4 more days. Sorry :D i am so excited. i work in a theater so i get to watch it monday night *squeals happily* i promise not to say anything till after the midnight :-)



Author's Response:

Hammock Rob....yum....  Sorry, zoned out a little there. :-)

I'm so happy you liked the chapter!  This was definitely one of the scenes I had on my early list.  I love it when Edward lets lose a bit.  I'm in love with all kinds of Edwards (not familiar with Hockeyward, but TMoBS is on my "to read" list) but I am a HUGE fan of any Blissward or Domward.  

I'm looking forward to Eclipse too, but I don't think I'm going opening weekend...I'm too young to have hearing loss, lol! 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Stardust (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 11

i want more purring....please



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm a big fan of Purrward myself.  I'm so glad you liked him!

xoxo Sarah

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