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Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 12

i would love to find out Rose, Em and Jasper's reactions when they get in the car...lol

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 12

Smokin Hot!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, sweets!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 12

panties?



Author's Response:

I used up all my extras writing these.  I'd wait til Victoria's Secret has a sale to stock up, lol! *MWAH!*

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 12

Another incredibly steamy installment.  I kind of wish we could hear Emmett's reaction that afternoon ;-)



Author's Response:

Haha, I'm sure Emmett had a LOT to say about the smell in the car.  I'll bet Rosalie did too, but I'm thinking she probably gave Edward a mental beat-down.  So glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you for reviewing and rating! 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: EternallyCullen (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 12

As always... That was hwat. Seriously think they should make x rated versions of twilight just for us pervy fanfiction readers and writers and deprived twi-mums (that be me!)

I'm feeling rather envious of Bella right now. Shiny silver Volvo action would be fun...

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the Volvo sexin'!  That's exactly the reason I started this story...I wished the books had some smut in them.  But that's why we have fan fiction!  :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 12

That...was hot! And....truly one of the best!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Tracey!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 12

It's not fair!  I never had a moment like that in a shiny volvo when I was in school.  Wow!!!  Hmmmm, maybe I can get my hubby to have a little fun in the backseat of the Ford.  LOL.  Yummy lemons in this chapter. Can't wait for the next.



Author's Response:

Haha, me either.  Use it as inspiration for taking hubby out for a ride, lol!  I'm glad you liked it! 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 12

WOW I'm in awe! lol that was hott. I loved every moment of it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

You're very welcome!  I'm so glad you liked the chapter. 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

DAng. Did you hear that bang? It was me falling from the bed. Oh my...



Author's Response:

Haha, don't hurt yourself.  I am not responsible for any injuries inflicted while reading my stories... ;-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 12

hot sweet volvo action!  awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, bb!  Glad you liked it.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 12

OMG! car sex! yes! lol. and I like naughtyward- bring him around again, please!

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the Volvo sexin'!  Thank you so much for another great review. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 12

Jesus mary and joseph....that was unbelievably HOT.  I have always dreamed of Volvo sex with the intensity and intimacy of that vehicle.  LMFAO, Edward is positively gloating about the raw sex smell in the car.....would love to see Rosalie's reaction to that!! lol  Thanks for writing this, really great job.



Author's Response:

All caught up!  Please favorite the story if you haven't already...that way you'll get an email when I update here.  

I'm glad you liked the Volvo sexin'!  Edward has this territorial thing about his car, and it seemed natural that he'd be a bit excited about it smelling like Bella, or him and Bella together.  I'm sure at the very least that Emmett would have something to say, though I'll bet Rose would give Edward quite a mental earful. ;-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: RiceReader (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 12

Very much AU, but very good too.



Author's Response:

Haha, yes, it is definitely AU.  I'm glad you're enjoying it!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 12

I believe it could have happened!!! Great story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 12

For the love of the Sexy Beast that is Carlisle Cullen! That was amazing *bow and throws flower petals* Shiny silver Volvo! Thank SO MUCH!!

Nominate? Sure, I will nominate you! Every chapter of this!

And I saw the pictures.. I couldn't stop looking! :D

Like every chapter: 10! 10! 10! And it's not enough!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you for such a sweet review!  It would be an honor to be nominated. *blushes*

I'm sending Naughtyward over to you now, so meet him at your car in a few minutes. ;-)

I'm so happy you liked this chapter!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

If only the meadow scene really transpired this way....GAW!!  Love how Edward let Bella take the lead until he knew he could keep control.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The meadow scene begged for a lemon, and I'm glad I pulled it off.  :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow, I'll take some bathroom sex over the mushroom ravioli anytime!!  That was very sexy, very hot.  Loved how Edward got his souvenir of their first time, something to start his collection.  Well done again.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Yeah, I agree...bathroom sex FAR outdoes mushroom ravioli. 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 9

That was so hot and sweet, all at the same time.  Loved Edward's surprise at Bella's admission of being a virgin.  Loved this scene in the book, loved yours also.



Author's Response:

I think Edward would be both excited and relieved that Bella was/is a virgin.  The "man" part of him would love to be the one she gives it to, and the old-fashioned part of him would be touched.  :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 12

Fruit salad Peen in the Volvo!!!  **Bowing in Awe**  Loved Alice having her "input" too. ;0) Fantastic...as always!  -Your Fic sister in law



Author's Response:

Bwahahaha!  Thanks, Jen!  For such a sweet review, I'll send Naughtyward right on over. ;-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 12

Why can't I be Bella!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, get in line!  I'd love to trade places with her, too.  I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thank you for reviewing and rating. :-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 8

This was so much better than him flying out the window with her to hang around in trees.  Thanks for writing this.



Author's Response:

Ah, yes.  Edward should have known that you don't take a girl up to your room on a "house tour" unless you're trying to get some.  ;-)

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

....but this time I was full of Edward.  GAW!!  I think I just expired.



Author's Response:

Oh please don't die on me!  I can't handle any more reader deaths due to Edward overload...seven is enough, haha.  

Seriously, though...I'm so thrilled at each and every one of your reviews, and I'm happy you're enjoying the story so much!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Horizon77 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 12

Another chapter of FtCRF...what a perfect birthday present! :) Yes, this chapter in particular wouldn't actually, technically have happened in books but honestly.......who the hell cares?!?! I'll take Edward and his sweetness anyway I can get him! ;)

Really enjoying this collection of scenes from the saga all spiced up. Any hints as to which book the next one is from? Come on - it is my birthday after all!



Author's Response:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!  Your present is arriving soon...I've sent Naughtyward over to your house, and he wants to meet you in the back seat of your car in a few minutes.  Enjoy! ;-)

I actually have no idea which one I'm going to be doing next, but I have an overabundance of Eclipse scenes I haven't written yet that ware on my list, so quite possibly one of those.  

I'm so happy you're enjoying the story!!!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

This chapter is hot....but tender and sweet as well. Edward's devotion to Bella is clearly defined by his need to pleasure her.  It only hints at hopefully more to come between these two.  Great job with this, thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  *MWAH!*

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 12

Well...I think that Edward will come to Bella's rescue more often now if she thanks him like that, lol.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Oh my, yes!  Edward had better be on the lookout for things he can do to help Bella. ;-)

xoxo Sarah

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