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Reviewer: Jadedude (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2012 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Please make a sequel I love this story it's awesome
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 04:53 PM · On: Epilogue
OMG.
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: ShadowPast (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 08:22 PM · On: Epilogue
I love this. If you haven't started the sequel, please do.
Reviewer: sickandtired212000 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Epilogue
loved the story
Reviewer: Jayme11223 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Epilogue
OMG please do a sequal!!! I hope that things workout between them and i want to see jake found out hes a dad.
Reviewer: 82c10 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Epilogue
LOVED this story!! It was hot, the heat, passion and love..just great. I am really really hoping for some kind of sequel!!!!!
Reviewer: ArcadiaGreene (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Epilogue
Sequel PLEASE!!! Great Story. I have been reading Twilight stories through Fanfiction, Live Journal, and Twilighted for awhile and this is the best Jacob non-canon story yet. Very mature writing with zeal.Good charcter structure and progression of the story itself. You should really think of a sequel with her leaving Forks to have Jacob's baby, coming back, and the continuation of the baby's story itself. I hope it's a boy!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Epilogue
Poor kid!
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Epilogue
Wow, hard choices there. The pregnancy took me by surprise and makes me wonder about a little Jacob out there somewhere in years to come. Imagine the sequels! :-D
Thanks so much for writing this story and especially for sharing it with us! I really enjoyed it. The lemons were great, but the story itself always seemed important to me in terms of Jacob's life before Nessie grows.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Epilogue
Oh this is not good at all...however I do feel that I saw it coming
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Epilogue
This will be interesting. Edward was very understanding. How old is Nessie in this story? Is she close to being an adult? How are you going to resolve this? you definatly have to write a sequel If this story doesn't resolve the kid issue. We are vested in these two and want some kind of resolution.
How many more chapters in this story?
Dixie
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Epilogue
I do hope you're not being just a tease and throwing out the 'sequel' word... You know we all would love that! :) I think it was funny how the wolf was silent... probably b/c he got what he wanted all along, hummm...
I love your Claire and I would love to read more about her. Thank you for following this through and ending it plesantly, although it was a bit bittersweet.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Epilogue
oh fuck no, oh hell no, oh my gosh. oh i don't even know. oh Jake has every right to know and this can't end like this. I hope edward stops by that diner for i don't even know why but i hope he does, i hope he smells her and recognizes the scent, i hope he reads her thoughts and i hope jake has to be responsible. oh hell no this can't end this way. oh my gosh no.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Epilogue
I'm not so sure if I like this or not.
Reviewer: ambellisha (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 5
jacob you maniac...god he is, well i guess maybe i would see him being like this...yes this makes him so much more hot!!!!!!!! what team did i say i was on? edward, hey wait thats before i thought of him as more than a hormornal teenager....oh yeah definitely hot
Reviewer: ambellisha (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
wow
Reviewer: BeyondStarsAndBoulevards (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 01:11 AM · On: Epilogue
I really, sincerely hope there is a sequel in the future. Or at least another epilogue, just to know what happens...
Please?
:)
Reviewer: ambellisha (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
holy shit this better not be rosalie........wow what a scene...you go girl!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Epilogue
awesome...can't wait to see what happens when the kid grows up and possibly morphes into a wolf!!!
Reviewer: tegan_n_me (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Epilogue
omg! saw it coming but still amazING!!!!!!
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 14
Whew! I was going to flip out (slightly of course) with the end. It was a perfectly find end though, btw.
I will miss dear Claire and Jake, a lot *sniff* This has been a great little jaunt into smexing and love. I am looking forward to the epilogue and anything else you write in the future!
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 14
Aww, it was so sweet and your last few paragraphs capture it all beautifully. Jacob deserved to have something he chose for himself, even if it was only for a little while.
Thanks for sharing Jake's little tryst with us! Now it'll always be a part of us, as well. :-)
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 14
I hope your epilogue deals with Edward reading his thoughts about the week.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a sweet goodbye. Claires right they will always have very wonderful memories. If you think about it everyone have a special romance that is bitter-sweet that you look back on and smile :)
I can't wait for the epilogue! You did a wonderful job with this story, I really enjoyed it!
Dixie
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 14
oh you better have a epilogue. holy cow i was like really thats it? heheheeee
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