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Reviewer: novelidea (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
I really enjoy this story. It's funny, because I don't really feel sorry for Jacob. I just feel bad that they just bought a house! How bad is that!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. And no, I don't think it's funny that you don't feel sorry for Jacob. After all, everyone is entitled to their own opinions. But just hold on because the shit is about to hit the fan really soon.
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
I FREAKING LOVE YOU :D just figured i would throw that out there haha :D you have absolutely no clue how excited i was to see the update thingy :D I love the fact that edward is being so patient with her ill be honest if it were me i definitely wouldnt have been that patient of course there would have been tons more crying too so haha i love ali and jazz you are super fantasmic and your loverly new beta is as well for getting this up :D as always doll can't wait for more :D i will follow Everything you write :D
Author's Response: Just a head's up, the next chapter - all I am going to say is that people aren't going to be as patient.
Reviewer: emi (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
it is a nice story, i really want to continue it
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
oooomy cant wait for next chapter!!!
tiny
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
CRAP! She HAS to tell him , like NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Can't Sleep
Well, you answered all my previous questions!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Seeing a Ghost
It seems to be moving quickly now. Are we going to find out if Bella married Jacob recently? She broke up with Edward in HS, right? So five years later they are 22 or 23... I'm just trying to figure out the timeline. :)
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
Will they be seen by someone?
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Past Reaching Out
I'm loving it - very intriguing.
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Time Goes By
She left because she was pregnant?! That's always a gut-wrencher for me. Reading on! (I'm sooo intrigued!) :)
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
It's agonizingly slow going here. ;) I know, I know... but Bella needs to get her act together and speak the truth so Edward can make up his own mind about this. Now that's going to be a heck of a chapter to write. ;) Great stuff!
Author's Response: Its slow going for now; but I am half way into the next chapter and shit is going to hit the fan. Also, depending on response- the may be a sequel or a prequel. If you're asking if it is going to be a HEA- probably not because life isn't always HEA and I'm a realistic writer.
Reviewer: amwine (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
I understand that Bella is scared, but she made this mess. She is going to have to come clean and make things right. Edward has a right to know that he has a daughter. I kind of feel bad for Jacob in this one, but he is in a marriage with someone that is not in love with him. I am sure she loves his, but not in the same way he is with her. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Great job...thanks so much!!!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Old Photograph
Hmm...He is pretty observant isn't he?
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Only Lunch, Right?
THis is beyond dangerous! She needs to be completely honest with both of them and let the pieces fall where they may.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Can't Sleep
I'm not sure the I belive a teanage girl is selfless enough to walk away, pregnant, for the sole reason to not want to ruin his life. She had to be scared. But for entertainment purposes, I'll go along with it. ;)
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Seeing a Ghost
This is going to get messy, isn't it?
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
sorry, really?! he's still waiting? after all the shit she puts him through he's letting her get away with stupid no-answers?
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Past Reaching Out
Was it really Charlie or was it Bella just trying to find out about Edward?
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Time Goes By
I was looking for something new to read and ran across your fic. I'm intrigued to find out more. So far I like what I have read.
Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Judgments
Hi
I think things are starting to come to ahead - I just hope that Edward doesnt get too mad with Bella when it all comes out, but I think he is going to have a hard time accepting that she has kept his daughter from him even if she thought it was for a good reason.
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Canon Ball
Edward can't just walk out of her life.....it would be so sad great story
Reviewer: xXxYasmin (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Canon Ball
Amazing story!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
xXx.. Yasmin
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Canon Ball
you are brilliant doll simply brilliant i love this story sooo much and bella is such a peach haha slapping edward had to have felt good after all poor thing must be crazy with guilt and poor edward he has sooo much on his plate right now and with him never giving up on him and bells its just all too sweet :/ i dont know how to describe how confused everyone must be cant wait for the next chapter doll :D
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Canon Ball
I don't like what Bella is doin and no matter the spin she tries to put on it she is cheating on her husband and brining poor Edward into a situation he knows nothing about.
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Canon Ball
man bella should of told him after she slapped him!!! lol
tiny
Author's Response: Talk about adding insult to injury. But Edward isn't as clueless as ypu may think. He has his assumptions...
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