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Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 7
edward right????
Author's Response: :o)
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow, so different from every other story I've read. I love that the family is coming back to take care of her. I've always loved Edward's character but he really was being an ass. I feel like these 6 chapters are only the beginning and I can't wait to see where the story goes because at this point the possibilities are endless. I always knew Bella had an inner strength nobody gave her credit for and it's showing.
Author's Response: What a lovely review!! Thanks so much! I agree - Edward's choices are quite frustrating at times and I really felt like Bella was missing everyone...so wanted to incorporate that into my take on things.
Hope the rest of the tale continues to please!! :O)
Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 6
So good! I want to know how Edward will handle this turn of events when he finds out!
Author's Response: Good to hear! You shouldn't have to wait too long to find out!!
Reviewer: raquelnjake (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
I am really loving your story. Great writing!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow, Bella has come such a long way in such a short period of time.
Interesting that Charlie realised how connected Bella and Edward were and that is was more than just "puppy love".
Excellent chapter, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: She has - but I think more time has actually passed than I conveyed...weeks have passed but I was fairly vague as to how long because in reality - each person is different so didn't want to put a specific time frame on it.
So glad you are enjoying it - more coming soon!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 6
YAY BELLA & CHARLIE ARE BACK ON GOOD TERMS!!!!!!!!!!!!! I also love how Charlie was okay with Bella going to live with Carlisle & Esme in Seattle! I also love how Rosalie asked about what she and Emmett could do to help!
Author's Response: :o) Thank you!!! So glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 5
I love how Esme & Bella got time by themselves!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
You did a wonderful job with the meeting between Bella and Charlie. I could feel the awkwardness. Can't wait for Bella to move in with Carlisle and Esme.
Wondering how Edward is going to take to the message from Carlisle and the news he needs to share.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you.....that means alot because I definitely struggled with that chapter! More coming soon.......and perhaps another Edward POV so stay tuned! :)
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 6
Let you know what I think, hmm? I think that I want more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: :) Thank you!! More coming soon!!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is a great story! I really hope Bella gets one hundred percent better. Though I was surprised by how fast she seems to have recovered. Hope you update soon!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Hi there! So glad you are enjoying it so far...I know it has seemed that Bella is recovering quickly but I didn't really put a time frame on it...only stating that weeks passed quickly because in truth - there is no set time that it takes someone to recover from trauma so I figured it would be better left up to the reader's imagination to determine how much time had actually passed....
More coming soon - hope you continue to enjoy it!!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 6
First... hubba-hubba (lol) for Carlisle taking advantage of being alone with Esme. Nice!
Okay. So. I'm so pleased Bella has chosen to work toward better health and hope that she will soon be able to at least talk about what happened.
I was glad she and Charlie spoke and I like the solutions so far.
Carlisle's letter to Edward was a surprise to me. I am eager to see what, if anything, results from it!
GREAT chapter. This is an enthralling story.
Author's Response: LOL - thank you!! I love writing Carlisle and Esme's story (the lemons included!) There are sooo many great characters in these novels and love the opportunity to explore them more in depth.
More of the story is coming soon - I hope you enjoy it!!
Reviewer: Applegirl (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 6
fantastic really enjoying the story!
Author's Response: Much appreciated - more coming soon!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
You really have done a great job with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am really glad you are enjoying it and appreciate the feedback!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 6
Good chapter! With every amazing chapter the closer we get to the return of Edward. I CAN NOT WAIT lol I am so excited about it even though I know how heartbreaking it will be no matter which way you go at first. Update soon I am so glad Charlie let Bella stay with the Cullens.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great feedback!!! Will try and not make you wait too long for Edward's return!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Thanks fine with me, 100% Team Edward :) Is he coming back soon?
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 5
good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow... I'm finding this tale very touching - very heartbreaking. It's painstakingly slow, but I understand why... and it has me anticipating a whole slew of questions. Anyway, I'm enjoying the read and encourage you to continue sharing your incredible talent. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much for your kind words. You have no idea how much they are appreciated!
Reviewer: twilighter022 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 5
Thank you for updating :D i love the story
-twi
Author's Response: I am so glad!! More coming soon!
Reviewer: kkmomo3 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next. I like how Carlisle and Esme are getting their time alone with Bella-it's just what the doctor ordered
Author's Response: Glad you think so! Thanks so much for the feedback!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 5
But I don't WANT Edward to come home sooner! Seriously!
Nice chapter with Esme, but I don't feel that the story truly progressed in here.
I do hope someone can get Bella some non-institutionalized meals. Anyone would lose too much weight trying to eat that stuff.
I am wondering if the Cullens will be able to work something out with Charlie or if Bella will go home when her health is moderately better.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: LOL - hospital food is never appetizing... :)
You have to be the first person to tell me you don't want Edward to come home! LOL! I know the bit with Esme may have seemed a little "fluffy" but I really think Bella needs a mother figure in her life....I am not a big fan of Renee...LOL
More coming soon, I promise!! Thanks for the feedback!!
Reviewer: EJ Jones (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 5
Wonderful story - please post more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
More coming soon, I promise!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 5
OMG so good...I want Edward :( lol I know I know not yet lol I just can't wait...its going to be so heartbreaking when he finds out she is there. You are a wonderful writer and this is so heartbreaking but sooooo addicting. Update soon, I am really enjoying it.
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much!!! I hope you find it worth the wait for him!! More coming soon, I promise!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 5
Ooooooooooh! This was way to short for my liking (mind you doesn't matter how long it was I wouldn't like it lol)
Excellent chapter. Loved the bonding between Esme and Bella.
Can't wait for more, I hope you update again soon.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! More coming soon!!
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 5
Bella NEEDS to eat something. Hell, I want to feed her. It's good that I can get the emotion in the story so well. Send us the next installment soon!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks so much for the feedback...and yeah, she does need to eat...not so sure how long the pop tarts will last her!! More coming soon, I promise!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow! So Carlise automatically assumes Bella will be changed.
And I would love for Charlie to say that they can take her to their home.
Can't wait for Alice to return to help Bella.
And i hope somewhere, Edward is safe, and healing.
Can't wait for more, you have a new fan. I'm signing up for the long haul. I hope you update again soon.
Author's Response: Wow!! Thank you soooo much for your comments and I am really glad you are enjoying the story. Lots more to come.....
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