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Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 10
Before I read chapter 11, I thought I'd respond to your question to my earlier review ... I was actually referring to the "mystery" character being evil ... but yes, LOL, I could use the same comment for you since you left me completely hanging. Alas, you've made it up to me though since you updated so quickly ... off to read chapter 11!
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
It's getting intense! Bella, Bella poor girl, she's gotta pull through this though. I feel like it's just the tip of the iceberg with what's happened. You know...like how you can smell the storm before it comes, Edward is in for it now. Can't wait for the next chapter (or two) if we're lucky, ;-)
Author's Response: New chapter is up now....lots more to come!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yes, change her !
Author's Response: LOL
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
Well I'd send Jasper if I could...but...
Quick read! I was a little put off by Edward's apparent uncaring attitude as he reached the family's other home...until he saw the picture. Nicely conceived of you.
And with the Cullens, Bella is doing so much better. I think it was the right time to tell her about Charlie, for sure. I'm glad they were all there for her.
And there was Edward, vowing he would NOT turn her and here is Carlisle, asking if she would ALLOW him to do so.
Beautiful juxtaposition.
:)
LJ
Author's Response: :0) So glad you enjoyed it....the photograph memory was so much fun to write - I could just imagine Alice creating something like that so was nice to know that someone else liked it!!
As for Edward.....you know there will be trouble up ahead if Carlisle proceeds..... :o)
Thanks for sticking with the story!!!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh that was good...this is such a good story, I cant wait for the next chapter. *sigh* I hope Edward comes back soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much......soon......not too much longer...LOL
Reviewer: mil06 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 10
please update soon!
Author's Response: Next chap is up now!! :o)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 10
THIS WAS AN EXCELLANT CHAPTER
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
evil evil evil
Author's Response: :O) Who me???
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 10
This story is so sad... maybe that is why i love it!!!! but crazy bella is a good bella
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 10
I liked hearing Victorias POV.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback..glad ya liked it!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 10
Aw, and here I thought Bella would FINALLY find out about her dad. Sigh. Victoria, while I do feel a TINY bit of sympathy for her human life, is sick. I mean, really?! Twisted thinking much?! Please update again soon, preferably with one of the Cullen's POVs? Their thoughts are much nicer and make a lot more sense!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Sorry.....didn't mean to disappoint bringing Victoria into it.....LOL. Hope next chapter is more appealing to you.....LOL
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 10
LOL... you tease! Enjoying your scribbling - keep up the awesome tale!
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much....glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 9
This was fascinating!!!!!! I love how Carlisle asked Alice & Jasper to come back. Alice and Bella got along really well once again! I also love how Carlisle confided in Jasper that he wasn't going to lose Bella because of Edsward and considering changing her!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so glad you liked it!!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 9
Gah, the suspense is AWFUL! Please update again soon!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Soon I promise!!
Reviewer: trollmuffin (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 9
I want to know what Alice saw! Longing for the next update!
Author's Response: :o) soon....I promise!!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
Wonderful story. I'm looking forward to hearing about Alice's vision, although how he'd know it when no one else does is beyond me.
Author's Response: :o)
You won't have to wait too long......
Reviewer: BookbirdRiver (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is more realistic than others I've seen with the same theme- thanks.
-Bookbird
Reviewer: BookbirdRiver (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is really, really interesting- I'm really eager to see where this goes.
I have a request- do you mind if I wait until I've read the entire story before I continue reveiwing? It really disrupts my focus to get jolted back to the real world each chapter.
Thanks,
Bookbird
Reviewer: dls84 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 9
I just can't wait for more I really enjoy this story looking forward to what is coming up. Edward, telling Bella and all.
Author's Response: Thanks!! More coming soon.....I promise!
Reviewer: Reese1603 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 9
Can't wait to hear what happens next!!! Great story!!!! So sad to hear about Charlie, and hopefully Renee and Phil are okay. Poor Bella. Edward will be back soon, though, right?
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I promise you won't have to wait too much longer for Edward.....
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love dark sides of anything so i am loving this..keep it up
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
Gak!!! What did she see???
I am dreading having Bella find out about Charlie! Will the family be able to protect Bella from the outside evils as well as those she might still carry within?
I'm NERVOUS and you LEFT us here. LOL
Nicely played. ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad ya liked it.....LOL
It is going to be a tough one for sure. More coming soon!!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 9
You keep leaving us with these cliffies.
I'll forgive you if you update quickly.
Loving your story. Such a different take on everything. Great emotions and drama!
Author's Response: Hehehe......always leave the reader wanting more!! LOL Thanks so much for sticking with the story - your feedback means so much!!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 9
And the suspense builds. Charlie gone, possibly Rene and Phil, and Edward coming back. How will Bella react? Write more soon!
Author's Response: More coming soon!!! i promise!
Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
I'm really liking this story, I hope you keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
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