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Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm crying already... off to chapter 2!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 15
Nicely done. I was really shocked when Edward called Carlisle a murderer. I think that will have struck a nerve for sure. Why is it we always hurt the ones we love the most?
And can't wait for more. I'm excited to see what kind of vamp Bella will become.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 15
I can't wait to see what Bella will be like as a newborn and how she will react to Edward. Update soon, Please!
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 15
great chapter
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 15
AWESOME CHAPTER
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 15
AWESOME CHAPTER
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 15
I am seeing Remember me absolutely! Not only for Rob but for that damn Eclipse trailer, its like a drug to me, I need my fix.
Great chapter! *sigh* edward is home...well kind of...Bella is about to wake up and a vamp now...its almost perfect...well almost ;P I cant wait for Bella to beat the shit out of Edward hahaha he better watch out she is stronger than him now hahaha j/k that would be hilarious though lol
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 15
I think Carlisle put Edward soundly in his place. Good for him. I am looking forward to seeing what newborn Bella is like. I hope she gives Edward hell for a while.
Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 15
I think you gave a great portrayal of what would happen between Carlisle and Edward in such an instance. Great job! I can't wait for Bella to wake up!
Reviewer: edwardftw85 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 15
I plan on seeing remember me... i read the original script and it should be a really good but kinda sad movie... cant wait... good job on the chapter btw. update again soon plz
Reviewer: jbnns (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 15
Wow, fabulous. My onloy complaint is that I'm craving MORE MORE MORE!
Loved how you wrote Carlisle's reaction. This is the first story that I've read where I am already planning on re-reading it when you've completed it.
Thanks...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 15
Wow! Ok so was a little worried what Edward would do once he got there but I am so relieved to see that it went relativly well. I do believe Carlisle and Edward will both live with guilt for awhile but Bella will do a great deal to aleviate that gift. LoL...I wonder if Bella will put Edward thru the wall once she learns he lied to her. I know she will kiss the boo boo better but I do smile at the possibility. =) Can't wait to see how Bella's first days will be.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 15
Oh... That was good and explosive and then mellow and forgiving.
Edward has GOT to get OVER himself.
Sorry this is short. Reviewing while holding melting ice cream cone. Yep.
Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 15
Emmett and Rose provide the comic relief, but it's Carlisle -- still -- who's the moral center of this story. I like your Carlisle a lot. This is very good: "Don't talk to me about betrayal, Edward. Not unless you want to talk about it on a two-way street." Edward's certainty and outrage and the beginning of the conversation is slowly defused by Carlisle. And while you don't leave me (or Bella) hanging off a a cliff, I am certainly impatient to find out how Bella's change is going (will we get an Esme POV?) and how Edward and she will react when they finally meet again.
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 15
can't wait for the reunion
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 15
Another Hit. Congrts. Keep uo the good work. As per your question...I'm still debating.
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
This is going to be fun!!!!!!!! Hopefully Bella & Edward will get back together!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 13
Poor Carlisle. I'm he did what he did though. I also loved Esme's POV.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 14
oh shit shit shit shit shit shit!! what a time to catch up to everyone!! Arrrrrrrrrggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
I need more.... please update again soon!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 13
Wow, ok now it makes sense why he chose to ask her then. I think he did the right thing to have her change happen now, beofre Edward gets there. I think he would be too distraught over the change otherwise.
Another fantastic chapter, but I'm anxious to move on.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 12
wowowowow did he bite her? or is he using meds to hopefully help her with the pain?
And i'd want edward to change me. But if not, then Carlisle.
Still loving it, still glad I'm behind, I'm moving on ....
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
wow... what??!!! Why is Carlisle going to change her now? What does he think that will do to her? Will she be mentally unstable as a vamp like Victoria?
Still loving this, I'm moving on ....
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh damn she is an evil bitch isn't she?
Can't wait for more..... so glad im behind...
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 9
Did she see something in Florida? Or something coming for them?
So glad i'm still behind, I'm moving on ....
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh damn :( u killed Charlie :( sniff that was horrible and a ballsy thing to do. I got SOOOOOOOOOOOO much grief when I made Charlie have something bad happen to him in my story so I hope you don't get flamed too much.
Loved the chapter. So glad Edward is on his way home. Feel so bad for Bella, I hope she doesn't backtrack.
So glad I seem to be behind everyone else. Don't know how that happened, but happy about it because I can just move on :)
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