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Reviewer: orez_reads (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 32
please do some one needs to
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment!!
:)
Tami
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
OMG. Not what I had expected at all. While, I am not a fan of a dead daddy. The story line does change a bit from other fanfic and should prove for interesting reading.
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 32
Mike is obviously gone insane. ;o) Great storyline.
Author's Response: He really has taken his little obsession to a whole new level!
Thanks for the comment!
Tami
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 27
I'd say he should be thanking Carlise... haha.. OMC!!!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 26
Finally! Haha.. This is great!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 22
Jasper is awesome!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 20
Haha! Hell hath no fury....
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 18
She seriously forgot about him? I thought it was that she didn't want to talk about him. ;o)
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 16
Yay! Off to hunt!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 15
I still think Carlise should have whipped Edwards bottom. Haha!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow, that was kinda fast... But I guess it's to move the story along. ;o)
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hmm. I'm not sure Carlise would have asked her that soo quickly. ;o) But I'll bite, b/c I love this story you're telling. ;o)
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
What did Alice see? Is Jasper able to read her thoughts??! Or is it a husband/wife thing?
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh! Why Charlie!??!!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 32
Poor Angela. I really feel for her.
Author's Response: Every chap I write I wait to be lynched for what I have put poor Angela through!!
Thanks for the feedback!
:)
Tami
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 7
Haha! The timing was too convenient! Must be Alice!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
Haha! Frankly I thought Carlise should have pulled the daddy card and lambasted Edward. (tongue in cheek)... But I'm looking forward to that when Edward comes home! Great work!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
Gotta keep reading!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 3
I would have thought that Carlise would have had her pulled out of there immediately. ;o) Looking forward to what's next.
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Why would Esme not accompany Carlise? I don't think she would ever leave his side....
Looking forward to the Charlie chat.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 32
i hope that they destroy mike and victoria! and hopefully bella and angela survive!
Author's Response: Thanks again for commenting!!
:)
Tami
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 32
I really want to know what happens next! I'm guessing Bella sneaks off alone. Right now she's the strongest and fastest out of all of them. She could easily slip away when they go hunting or something and then just take off! Of course, she'd either get killed or (attempted to be) raped by Mike, but she could fight him off. Sorry, I'm rambling. Please update again soon!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: I love the rambling! I love to see what you guys are thinking!
Thank you so much for your continuous support and feedback - so appreciated - even though I am horrible at responding!
MWAH!
Tami
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 32
oh oh oh ....oh no ... Mike is truly evil
update quickly .... pulease!
Reviewer: Whiterose70611 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 12
I LIKE THE STORY ALOT AND THE Concept is very creative and neat.
I think you are really good:)
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 32
Who knew that Mike could be so damn evil. I hope that Edward kicks his ass, Can't wait for it to happen.
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