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Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!!
Reviewer: lizkrohn (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2012 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Of all versions of Twilight, I have enjoyed yours the most. Thank you
Reviewer: lizkrohn (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2012 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Of all versions of Twilight, I have enjoyed yours the most. Thank you
Reviewer: lizkrohn (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2012 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Of all versions of Twilight, I have enjoyed yours the most. Thank you
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
I really liked this story =) very very interesting twist to it. Oh and I applaud the james bashing scene hehe!!! I am so glad for once Bella wasn't weak and could finally defend herself! =D Can't wait to see if you continue this?
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
greta story!! i love Bella as a vampire!!
....(maybe)?!?.....ohhh!! ;)
Reviewer: teamcarlisle-ftw (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Wow S.M should have taken a leaf out of your book. Your Vampire Bella story is awesome :D xxxx
Reviewer: dc_author (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2011 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Close Call
Enjoying your story so very much!
Reviewer: dc_author (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Enjoyed it. Last chapter dragged a bit but it was hard to top the action of the fight and the proposal.
Reviewer: dc_author (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Center of Attention
Enjoying your story.
Reviewer: dc_author (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2011 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 2 - You're Not Alone
The way you have woven cannon into this story makes it very enjoyable. One note..I think Bella would have been able to hear all that Alice was saying to Bella, being a vampire.
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
I had read part of this a while ago but loved reading it through the end. You wrote this so wonderfully! Thanks for sharing your writing talent.
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
I just read through this story for the second time now. I have to say that its still as good as the first time I read it!!! This is a fanfic that I could read over and over again! It truly is a wonderful piece!!! Good Job!!!!
Reviewer: pennylynn (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Very nice. Well written, a creative premise and believalbe characters. Thanks.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
if u were to write a sequel i would read it
i loved this story is was amazing and that i loved how bella recitied poems
this was a very good story close to twilight
i loved you protrade everyone exspecially bella and edward loved there chemistry very cute wish there was a little more smutt/kissing but watever
u are an amazing author and i look forward to reading more from u
keep me updating if u plan to write a sequel or one-shots
until next time
mbellaandedwardm
Reviewer: sunnydonya (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Oh, this is a cute ending. I really hope that you make a epologue with this one. It would be awesome to see what happens like a year later or something. If not, you wrote an awesome story!
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Thank you for sharing your story! This was a really great and well-done twist on Stephenie's Twilight. I hope you are inspired to continue the story...I cannot imagine you NOT doing an equally great job no matter which point of view you use.
Again, thank you and well done!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Loved the story. The phone was not letting me review. I hope it is not the end.
But no new moon time. :) please. Meg
Reviewer: msa (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 8 - The First Night
WOW! I just found this fic via lazy yet discerning ficsters blog and I am totally in love with it. This plot is so unique. I can't wait to find out what happens at school. On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Awsomonium (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Phoenix to Forks
U have to do more. Pls dont leave us hanging.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Epilogue?
Reviewer: Purple Akua (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Beautifully written!! I thought this was a perfect wrap-up to everything that's happened, and I feel a sense of satisfaction that Charlie is more accepting of the situation and that things will be good in the end. I would really love some EPOV or a wrap-up with Victoria or even a wedding scene though. I have really enjoyed this fic, and have loved your spin on the series while keeping it as canon as possible. Amazing work!!
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
awww this was sooooooo awsome! I loved it so much!!!!!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
What a great twist on things I hope you keep writting I loved how you letf ot open ended. Thanks for sharing!!!
Reviewer: Nikita Michaels (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Yay! I loved your story so much-the romance, the drama... This was the first fanfic I've ever read and I really appreciate your writing. It continues as my favorite story. I hope you consider writing a sequel as you are very talented. I'll keep you on my author alerts! Thanks for a great 22 chapters! I'll start it over again soon.
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