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Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Semiquaver

Phew, getting steamy in here....

Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Treble Clef

wow, love it, building up the intensity already, can't wait for more....

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Semibreve


Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Semibreve

Excellent chapter I can't wait to see if he takes his sisters advice. More please soon.

Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Treble Clef

love it.. I have been hooked since the first chappy!! Cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: LadyExcalibur (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Semibreve

I just found this. I can't begin to tell you how much I love it. Every word just fits perfectly. Your characterization is flawless. Gorgeous. I don't know what else to say!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:06 AM · On: Semibreve

Loving all the Australian references :) Of course Sydney is nowhere near as cool as Brisbane, but you know... *LOL* :P

Yay for Bella's writer's block being gone, but I'm sad it's as a result of her thinking that she's never going to have anything more with Edward.

Alice is a force to be reckoned with :) So glad that Edward FINALLY called her - that everything he told her simply confirmed what she already knew from her dreams.  Now to convince Edward to take a chance to lay his feelings out there for Bella :)

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Semibreve

I love this chapter!!! It sounds as if they're both so close to the breaking point. I can just imagine what would happen if someone decided to just say 'fuck it' and go for it! Great job!!!!


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Semibreve

Can't wait for more. I seriously love this story SOOOOOOOOOO Much!

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:52 AM · On: Semibreve

I love your story but these two are driving me crazy.  At least he called Alice and admitted his feelings.  That is a start I guess.

Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Quaver

Love this fic!  Had the most surreal, out of body experience today.  Rob Pat is actually filming his movie in the town I teach in on a train I can see from my school room door and had coffee this morning at my local Fillmore CA Starbucks!  Why couldn't we be staying in the same hotel and have a musical hook up? 

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Quaver

Nooooo!! Update soon PLEASE??????? PLEASE??

Reviewer: arocora1 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Quaver

thanks for the new chapter

Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Quaver

I love drunkward happy on song, beer and Bella. Don't know that I would have been able to contain myself if I had been Bella this chapter. A drunkward would be hard to resist or play with.

Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Quaver

I love drunkward happy on song, beer and Bella. Don't know that I would have been able to contain myself if I had been Bella this chapter. A drunkward would be hard to resist or play with.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Quaver

I want to hear from Drunkward. I do I do I do!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Quaver

Aww, drunk Edward was adorable!  I can't believe Bella didn't steal a kiss before going!  I hope he decides that he has to tell her how he feels!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Quaver

Oh dear god, how did Bella keep her hands to herself? So help me god, if I'd been in her situation with a drunk Edward making salicious comments; I'd fail for sure. *L*

I'm so hoping those two biddies in the club continue to stay in her mind - constantly reminding her that what other people see and observe is often drastically different from what you notice or are seeing when you're in the centre of it.


Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Quaver

Drunk Edward was cute I kept hoping he would drag her down and not let her go. More please soon.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Quaver


Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Quaver

Poor Bella! He's not going to remember anything from that night. And the hangover is going to be awful. Ugh. I hope that he figures out a way to tell Bella how he really feels. She needs to be able to make the decision for herself on whether or not she wants to be with him. Or maybe she should 'fess up to him....

Great chapter!!!!


Reviewer: Sara701 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Quaver

Love it! This story is so adorable! Please update soon!!

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Quaver

I know he would want to protect me from the intense scrutiny of the media and fans. If I was going to be with someone, I couldn’t be hidden away. I’d want everyone to know, I’d want a real relationship, one that was public and open. I never, ever again would be someone’s dirty little secret.- Ah the irony....

I think they've pissed around long enough, time to spill the beans!!

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Quaver

Loved Drunkward!!  Now, lets get to the schmexing...

Reviewer: terrabella (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Barline

Had to read again - amazing chapter! Please update, I am waiting oh so patiently......cheers!

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