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Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Study

I'm so glad they finally got that far.  He should tell her he doesn't have condoms.  The poor girl is having a devil of a time.

Reviewer: lbb83 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Study

oh wow what a cliff hanger !!! whens the next update ??

Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 03:56 PM · On: Study

Oh some pool time fun... :)

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 03:29 AM · On: Study

Oh, thank goodness, they started to talk. I'm not sure if Bella is prepared to see the latest pictures of Edward and Rosalie and still believe him. They are way more graphic. Maybe Rose could clear it up for Bella?

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Study

Okay, so it seems as though she's starting to get a grip. But they need to discuss the practical side of things. She needs to know that she can talk to her parents and a close friend about her life. He can't expect her to keep that part secret or it will be a lot like her last relationship.

Reviewer: Like_a_meteor (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 12:23 PM · On: Study

Thank god she gets it! So glad Edward's laid it all out there...although I fear badness will come when Bella sees the actual photos...

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 05:12 AM · On: Study

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 10:39 PM · On: Study

They talked...thank you! Can't wait to see what happens when they get back to the hotel.

Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with it.... um, yes, real life may be a challenge for them both ;)

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Study

Very nice it looks like shes finally starting to beleive him.

Author's Response:

Starting to... let's hope she continues?


Thanks for reading,


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 06:56 PM · On: Study

love the talk. i was so excited reading it all after a hectic weekend of work.  i see there are still  some insecurities....i keep hoping that they wont wait four months like alice and jasper. that would kill me .....teeeheeeeee

very very hot water scene......thanks again for sharing. again, i love this fic......tons

Author's Response:

Thnak you so much! I'm glad you love it...I love writing it... 


Oh yeah the Alice /Jasper timeframe...I think that would kill Edward, he'd lterally EXPLODE, so I think it will be quicker than that tee-hee.


Thanks for reading,


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Study

More!!  :):)  He needs to just tell her that he doesn't want to...ONLY because they don't have protection!

Author's Response:

You're so right about that...but will he? I know you'll keep reading to find out ;)

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 05:04 PM · On: Study

Thank fucking god it is about time! I am so very proud of Edward. He is actually a man, complete with balls, under all those good looks. He came clean - explained - was observant of her behavior - and most of all patient. Thanks for the update. looking forward to where the story leads us.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes, he grew up and took charge. I think that is exactly what Bella needs to get through her insecurities...more to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing xx

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 03:57 PM · On: Study

Finally!!! They've talked!! The only problem is Bella has not seen the recent pictures. I hope she doesn't run again.

I look forward to more.


Author's Response:

Hello!!! Thanks so much *shh, you're only the second reader that commented that Bella is picturing the wrong pictures* um, yeah, so how do you think she will react?  I'll try not to keep you waiting too long :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 03:21 PM · On: Study

Never had a doubt!  Love love love it!

Hugs, Stephanie

Author's Response:

Thanks Stephanie,

I'm glad you are still enjoying it, loving it even ;)

More to come, so much more to come :)

Luv BBxx


Reviewer: petite_femme (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 01:14 PM · On: Overture

you know, there was a reason i stopped reading this story.  i was driven crazy by bella being a supreme jackass.  i decided to pick up where i left off today cause i'm procrastinating writing an essay.  i'm still just as frustrated with this story.  i want to strangle the bella you have written.

Author's Response:

I completeley understand and you were not alone in the tanty 'not reading any more' club! So, did you get passed Overture...or did the frustration spur you to write your essay? If I do not hear from you again, I will assume you flounced...but thanks for reading this far...


Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Study

LOVED IT!!! So happy they've finally revealed their issues. Can't wait to read more!! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'll try not to keep you waiting too long ;)


Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 12:27 PM · On: Study

thank you!

Author's Response:

No, thank you ;)


Reviewer: Rizandace (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 11:07 AM · On: Sharp

"I wish I knew some hunky Native American who I could flirt with to get a couple of rain dances going on..."

Haha. Loving your story! I've been reading straight through!

Author's Response: I'm glad to welcom new readers. I hope you stick with it and supply your feedback along the way. Luv BBxx

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 09:36 AM · On: Study

thank god she finally got it!

Author's Response:

Finally....but completeley? I hope you continue to read.


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Study

Thank Heavens they are talking. I think alot was said in this chapter. Wish Edward would have told Bella he was also holding out because he did have any protection. Obviously he couldn't go to the store, but she could. I understand taking it slow so she really knows how much he cares too. I imagine things will change a little when they get back to hotel but hopefully not too bad. BTW, what ever happened to package she received before leaving hotel for cottage, you haven't mentioned that again? Will we hear about that soon? Loved it as always, Tracey xoxox

Author's Response:

Um, the package, you remember!!! You may recall Bella threw it into the trunk of her hire car, and that is where it still is. I wonder when she will retrieve it *evil grin*

Thanks so much for reading Tracey!


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Study

*Jaw drop* Holy crap! *swoon*

Author's Response:

lol, um, yeah, Edward knows how to make an innocent swim in a lake a very steamy event...


Thank you :)


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 08:29 PM · On: Transposition

love it....keep going (quickly please)! :)

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:57 PM · On: Transposition

this chapter had alot in it!! so they almost took it further without protection in the heat of the moment, so many freakin interruptions, so happy Emmett is leaving them alone, freakin Rose & her stupid ass stunts & who the hell is she to hide after she asked for it, poor Bella constantly having flashbacks & making herself so insecure. I hope to God this next chapter actually allows them to talk and maybe a lil more LOL  awesome chapter!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Transposition

The suspense is killing me - whenever Edward tries to talk to Bella something gets in his way. At least they spent a wonderful night together and Emmett is going to leave them alone. Rose's "sorry" is a very poor reaction. No reason for her to go into hiding, she brought it on herself willingly. She really should have listened to Edward instea of doing everything her manages wants her to do.

When will Bella read her forwarded mail?

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 06:11 PM · On: Transposition

He'd better tell her asap... and hopefully he's smart enough to get Rose on the phone to confim it was a set up job because I do not think Bella will buy that.

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