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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 02:40 PM · On: Coda

Oh, I think Edward needs to be more upfront about everything.....

Author's Response:

So do I! Will she give him the chance????

 

*kisses*

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: mizzezpattinson (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 01:20 PM · On: Coda

Holy Hotness *wipes brow*

 

Poor Bella, we need to get her out of the frame of mind. Why does somethin tell me we have more drama ahead?

 

Desperately waiting for more

 

xo

M



Author's Response:

Hey My Mrs,

Thank you for reviewing, you know it means a lot to me :)  You know Bella, she's a tad damaged, but Edward will keep trying, , he loves her...she just needs to believe.

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: mizzezpattinson (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Rhythm

JFC.....*melts*

 

Damn you are a minx!

 I am so thrilled that Bella finally, truly is able to feel the love that she deserves....

Beautifully done babe

*runs off to calm pounding heart*

 

Love ya

 

M

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 07:14 AM · On: Coda

no no no no no!!! GAH! I love this story so much but Bella drives me batty sometimes. Just so you know! I love you bunches though so please update soon. My chair can't take the bouncing for much longer.



Author's Response:

Yes, I know...Bella is infuriating...but not unlike someone that has been truely mentally done over by an ex. I'll try and be real quick with the next update, promise... Don;t bouce too high... xx lol

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Coda

I can see Bella making the stop with her friend from Aussie, but it surprised me. I expected Edward to have to explain but he didn't. then Bella hanging up quickly made me think her mind is really getting away with her & making her think all kinds of bad thoughts that could happen. I know she is insecure but at least she expressed her thoughts that back at cabin. I hope Edward will be caring & understanding with her. He keeps telling her he is going to hide her away but he isn't exactly stating it is to protect her from paps! I just don't want Bella to run away again!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Hi Tracey,

I know, Bella is a mess and it's all Riley's fault! Edward senses she will run, so I'm thinkign he'll take some steps to stop that from occuring...communication is the key...let's hope they both talk it out!

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 04:10 AM · On: Coda

I realize that Bella was hurt by Riley and that isn't always easy to get over.  Perhaps she needs to seek therapy.  I don't know how she plans to make things work with Edward when she has all this doubt and insecurity.  With his line of work she is going to have to man up.  They both need to work on communicating.



Author's Response:

Yes, they are going back to the reality of their lives - the cabin was more like a sexed-up fantasy! lol

Hang in there... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Luv BB

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Rhythm

awww! Some hot lemons and lots of the 3 letter word! I can't wait to see what happens when they get back to the hotel.

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 12:12 AM · On: Rhythm

awww! Some hot lemons and lots of the 3 letter word! I can't wait to see what happens when they get back to the hotel.

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 12:12 AM · On: Rhythm

awww! Some hot lemons and lots of the 3 letter word! I can't wait to see what happens when they get back to the hotel.

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 05:52 PM · On: Rhythm

BB - this was a beautiful chapter. Although I am still pretty worried about all they haven't talked about and about B's belief that she still isn't good enough for him.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I know, they do need to talk, but their sexual attraction is dominating everything...they are addicted to the intimacy that they have both longed for. Reality will kick in when they get back to the hotel :)

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: ECsfan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 06:39 AM · On: Rhythm

You are amazing!!!! I haven't left a comment because I couldn't stop reading!!!!! Absolutely love this story!!!!! I can't wait for another update!!!! Update soon please!!!!!

Renee`



Author's Response:

Thank you Rennee,

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the next chapter...*kisses and Hugs**

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 06:19 AM · On: Rhythm

I see that our kids have made some definite progress.  I cannot wait for them to get back to the hotel so that they can finally have one another.  That evenign should really be an episode....THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'm writing the next chapter now. Yes, a lot will happen when they get back to the hotel... *smiles*

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 04:17 AM · On: Rhythm

well thank God they are finally talking, a little. at least Bella knows that Edward can't have sex due to lack of protection, rather than he doesn't want to. them still pleasing each other was a nice compromise lol. I am worried about Bella's building confidence when they return to the 'real world' though, I use that term loosely because it isn't her real world but his. I wonder if the next night together at the hotel together will be as special as they both want??? cannot wait to read about it :)  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Hi T,

Yes, I wonder what it will be like when they get back to reality...I'm kind of wanting them just to stay and be together alone in the cabin, becasue I fear Bella is not in the right frame of mind to deal with seeing the real pictures, or being 'hidden' away and have to supress her feelings for Edward unless they are alone. xoxoxoxox

Luv BBxx

 

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:10 AM · On: Rhythm

Finally Bella believes Edward loves her !! Hope she won't doubt him or her again when they're back at the hotel. Wonder when Alice will make her appearance and Belle not opening the mail that was forwarded is still nagging in the back of my mind - not that I completely understand that she was majorly distracted by Edward.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, the mail that was thrown in the trunk...wonder when she'll open that? *evil grin*

 

Majorly distracted by Edward, so true. Let's see what happens back at the hotel... ;)

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Rhythm

That is the one thing that had me soooo confused in this part of the story.  I was wondering if he had ever TOLD her it was because he didn't have protection not that he wanted to wait until after all the contracts for the song had been signed and all.  And the fact that you had him mention about Laurents to her was priceless.  Now maybe she can truly truly believe that he is really in love with her and loves her that it is not just some crazy act that he would do with a character in one of his film.  He needs to tell her that Rosalie like Emmett and then she will finally and definitely know for certain that it is for real!!!

Hugs, Stephanie

*great chapter btw!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Stephanie *hugs you back*

No, he never told her he didn't have protection. He nearly lost it and made love to her in the shower, remember? But he asked her if she was protected and when she said no, he stopped himself.

 

They really need to communicate, but the lust and love and desire and need is getting in the way...there is no doubt that he would have made love to her regardless of the song not being officially signed, if he had precautions against pregnancy...but he didn't, so he couldn't...we'll just have to see what happens in the hotel...

 

Kisses,

 

Luv BBxx

 

Reviewer: robskitten (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Rhythm

stimulating, satisfying, sensual. so lovely. lots of ground covered in this chapter. nice to know how edward and bella are so attuned to each other.  i can't wait till they get back to the hotel.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yes, the reality of the hotel...how will it affect them and their newfound openness?

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 12:57 PM · On: Rhythm

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 10:41 AM · On: Rhythm

Thank goodness she's sort of starting to believe him. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yes, she is starting to believe. Let's hope nothing happens that will make her revert...

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: andias (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 09:44 AM · On: Rhythm

About time she realised he was in love with her...



Author's Response:

Yeah, let's hope nothing happens to make her relive those horrible mental doubts...

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 07:49 AM · On: Rhythm

So, does she finally understand? Will they talk more about who can know things and why others can't?

Author's Response:

Um, It's Bella we're talking about...does she understand? Um, well, let's hope something doesn't happen to make her doubt him, or herself...

 

They are pretty distracted with their sexual attraction to actually open up and really communicate...we can only hope :)

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 05:30 AM · On: Rhythm

Whew. yum! and don't u forget it, miss bella, when the shit hits the fan ...
Llllove the updates!

Author's Response:

Oh, yes, let's hope she doesn't...forget....it.... lol

 

Luv BBx

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 11:15 PM · On: Rhythm

Damn...if that was only a little finger and mouth music, I can't wait for the whole orchestra to play :)



Author's Response:

I love your analogy... oh the orchestra will play, eventually...let's hope the mood, preparation and timing is 100% perfect, and there isn't an audience and no performance pressure is evident, as well as hoping their instruments are well oiled and ready to to feel a sweet intimate song, just for them. :)

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 07:00 PM · On: Rhythm

I love this story... I hope Bella doesn't freak when she sees the REALLY bad pictures of Rosalie and Edward!! More, more, more....Quickly? ;);)

Author's Response:

Hmmm, yes, she will eventually see the pictures that Edward is referring to, not the ones she thinks he means :) Will she remember everything that he said, or will her self esteem knock her back to where she was before? hmmmmm.

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 06:27 PM · On: Rhythm

absofrickinlutely awesome



Author's Response:

*Blushes* Thank you!

Reviewer: amanda1 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 04:41 PM · On: Rhythm

Shit that was HOT!!!! And I hope Bella's REALLY starting to believe Edward loves her just as much as she does. :)

~Amanda



Author's Response:

Thank you Amanda. Yes, hmmm, Edward, yum. 

 

BBxx

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