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Reviews For Episode
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2012 07:23 AM · On: Lament

They've both come a long way. Bella makes Riley see that his explanation comes too late (I want to hug and high-five her for it) and Edward isready to fight for his happiness at last (cheers!).

Author's Response:

Thanks honey! Yes, and now for Edward to meet Charlie! Squeeee! Lol



Reviewer: Lily Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 09:14 PM · On: Grace Note

I'm really glad you didn't extend the angst. I love this story and I'm glad you're back :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad that you are still with me... next chapter posting soon xx I hope you enjoy it :) Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 09:43 AM · On: Grace Note

Glad the misunderstanding was short lived

Author's Response:

Yes, me too... I think I've tortured poor Edward enough :)

Next chapter posting soon.. xxx

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 05:05 PM · On: Grace Note

omg! so glad you didn't leave us on the cliff! Just don't take too long to update.......i want more!

Author's Response:

Sorry, you know me, I always take forever to update!! Not long now... I hope you enjoy it xx


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 03:54 PM · On: Grace Note

Can't wait to meet Alice now. Meeting the parents . Wow I guess they are moving ahead. Loved how Edward over reacted.



Author's Response:

Hi Kat,

Thank you! Next chapter should post as soon as my lovely validation beta takes a squiz...

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2012 04:28 PM · On: Lament

ARGH! Don't leave it there!!! Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Sorry... I wasn't really quick with writing this one ... forgive me?


Posting very soon xx


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Sadie Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 08:39 AM · On: Lament

I'm on the edge of my seat...

Author's Response:

Have you fallen off yet, from old age, becasue I took so long to update??? lol


It's coming soon, I promise!


Thanks for reading xxx



Reviewer: cnehren (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2012 07:56 AM · On: Lament

So happy to open up twilighted and see that you had updated your story and Oh my! What a chapter!  Poor Edward, what he must be thinking!  I love it!  Go fight for her! 

Author's Response:

Yay! Will he! Next chapter coming soon xx


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 09:10 PM · On: Lament

Arrghh! Hurry, hurry with the next update....PLEASE :)   It's soooo good, but I'm on pins & needles....HURRY ;}}

Author's Response:

Sorry!!! I tried, I tried, but you know me... lol

Chapter is written and will post soon!  *massages your pins and needles*

All better! lol

Hugs and kisses,



Reviewer: Ehllenalin (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 11:10 AM · On: Lament

Okay, this story was really awesome right up to the point when the "misunderstanding" when Rose came to the hotel room to demand Edward give her Emmet. Then? It became a high school drama level of miscommunication. I'm really disappointed because I was expecting a grown-up relationship between E/B especially since you started off with the both characters being so strongly written with confidence. Their relationship now is just pathetic, I've known 14 year olds who know how to be more mature than this.

Author's Response:

Fair enough. Thank for continuing to read past chapter 16 (that was the chapter with the Rosalie misunderstanding)... so sorry you thought the proceeding 29 chapters wern't worth your time. Sorry you were disappointed, but thank you for letting me know.



Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 04:44 AM · On: Lament

What a great chapter! The ending makes me cringe though. Hopefully Edward follows thru on speaking with Bella so that he realizes the messages was garbled.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the cringe-worthy ending....


Yes, I think he gets the message was not what he wanted to hear...will he let it get to him?



Next chapter should post in a few days :)

Thanks for readng!!!


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2012 04:44 AM · On: Lament

you are leaving us on a monumentql cliff!  I think I am out on the precipice of said cliff hanging on by a teeny tiny thread.........please update soon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: frosticles (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 10:00 PM · On: Lament

Excellent, another brilliant chapter but that cliffie is evil please can we have the next chapter immediately? Thanks x

Author's Response:

Sorry for the evil cliffie. Immediate, yeah, that was a fail...but it will update soon, so I hope you want to find out what happens :)


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 04:18 PM · On: Lament

you are leaving us on a monumentql cliff!  I think I am out on the precipice of said cliff hanging on by a teeny tiny thread.........please update soon!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I temporarily reinforced that teeney tiny thread with vampire grade wire... lol

Sorry, I am a complete fail at updating soon!

Chapter is written and will post probably Sunday or Monday :)


Thanks for reading!!!


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 04:12 PM · On: Lament

BB - finally the confrontation. Like anything he would have said would be ok. Wow. what a man.

I am so proud of Bella. I hope that Edward comes in like a white knight in love and doesn't leave her.

I loved that you twisted the cliffy with Charlie and not Riley.

I can't wait for you to continue.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Yeah, no one has been a big fan of Riley...

Sorry for the delay in updating... I have no amazing excuse, simply, lack of time to spend living in this 'Episode' world...if only I could have more time :)

Chapter is written and hopefully updating very soon. Thanks for reading xx





Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 12:02 PM · On: Lament

Good for you, Bella!  See through that emotional manipulation.  Sorry, Riley.  Get yourself another nice girl. 

I suspect Edward's going to run into Riley and beat him up.... or maybe that's wishful thinking?

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for leaving me a review... you are an inspiration...

um, your wishful, yeah, not going to say - my lips are sealed! :)


Have a brilliant weekend!!! That probably goes without saying :) xx

Reviewer: madimommie (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 12:55 PM · On: Rondo

This is the third time I have read this!!!! I can't wait for an update soon!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm going to update! I know it's taken me ages! I hope you a few days :)



Reviewer: marinob (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 12:05 AM · On: Rondo

Oh I have finally catched up. I love this story and cannot not wait to see what happens next. Brilliant writing. Look forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thank you... will be updating in a few days, I hope you come back to read, even though It's taken me ages to write it :)



Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Rondo

I was so wondering where and when she was going to bump into him.  OMG!  What is going to happen next?  Can't bear to think how bad it might get.  Hope she stays strong to just let go even when he tells her what really happened.  Hate that he really loved her but not sorry that he can't have her now.  So sad though. I just hope it doesnt cause a misunderstanding and cause turmoil for the trip.

Hugs, Stephanie

Author's Response:

Hugs you back,


I am sorry for my tardiness in updating and responding to your review!


Chapter 46 is written and will post soon... I hope you come back :)





Reviewer: WolfREADERgypsy (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 05:54 PM · On: Rondo

I have to tell you, at first I passed this story a few times... Not thinking I could actually like it. Then the other night I found myself unable to sleep... And came across your story again. I haven't been able to put it down! I absolutely love it and I am so grateful I found it once you were 44 chapters in. The suspense would have killed me!!!! I can't wait to read more. 

Author's Response:


Well, I am glad you took the time to read and decide :)

Yes, a couple of readers that have been with me from the start had great difficulties with my direction and some of the 'cliffs' I left them with *ooops*

Next chapter is written and will post soon. Thanks for reading :)


Luv BBxx

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 08:01 AM · On: Rondo

Wow. The last two chapters were totally wOrth the wait. Yes I am worried about Riley. But I am even more worried that Edward hasn't told Bella about the Alice prophecy yet.

So glad she isn't telling Jess.

Great job. See you soon!

Reviewer: Talyareth (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 05:42 PM · On: Rondo

I just started reading this story a few days ago, and I am pleased so far with what I have read! A little more angst then I like but really great story and I love the Riley twists. Keep writing and I will keep reading! Thanks for the enjoyable read!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words....

Next chapter posting soon xx


Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 07:48 PM · On: Rondo

Oh man!  Dont leave us hanging for long PLEASE!  ;);)

Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 02:16 PM · On: Motif

Wow, this Bella really is an idiot.  She needs to see a shrink.  Okey, I'm ditching this story.  I've had enough.

Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 02:08 PM · On: Overture

It took 26 long chapters before we got to the part where Edward says I love you and now that we're there she does not even believe him. This is crap! 

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