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Reviewer: smwch (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved your story.  I really enjoyed the way you used description and setting, the bracelet was very vivid.  I enjoyed how well I felt as one with the main characters innermost thoughts and that I could see everything happening as if watching a movie!! You have a great talent, I would like to see more of your work! Is this your Genre? You are very good at it! Good luck with your writing. I am sure you will go far.

Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

That story is very good! Thank you so much for mentioning me by name! I didn't realize that you were on the site yet, I just checked my stats and saw your name.



Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice. :)

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow ... that was awesome! Love the way you handled 'it' being a memory and a dream at the same time. Edward's reactions were dead on (no pun intended).

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my Chapter . Glad you enjoyed it. I have been thinking about adding some more to this story.


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