No worries with grammar. I'm a teacher and you're doing just fine. :)

I'm intrigued with the story - Lord of the Flies, huh? Hopefully there's no "Piggy" episodes...

Can't wait for more. :)

I love the snoring. My hubby snores like that. I have to wear earplugs to bed...LOL!

I hope Bella starts treating Edward better. It's not his fault some other guy broke her heart and treated her like crap...She would be dead without sweet Edward! I am pissed at her reaction to his boner.....she is so sexually repressed..I am hoping that will change!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Yes, Bella is a bitch in the beginning of my story. Don't worry, she won't be that way for long! Edward will eventually start to tear down her walls.

 

Lol, my boyfriend snores, too. He also talks about video games in his sleep. It's adorable!

I am really liking this story! I will be patiently waiting for another chapter.... or not so patiently  =D

Author's Response:

:D I will update at the end of this week! I'm glad you like my story!

OK, I'm ready for the next chapter! Will they be able to build a more complete shelter? Will more interesting things wash ashore? What will Edward do to be successful catching fish? When will they give in to their attraction? What about fresh water? Do they have something to hold the rain in for fresh water? So many questions and I can't wait for some of the answers! :)

Author's Response:

Damn, you got some questions! lol, I'll answer a few easy ones. Thankfully, clothes will wash ashore. Edward catches a fish next chapter, and he abuses it haha. Chapter Ten brings my first lemon! They eventually find fresh water.

Thank you for reviewing!

Again, great job on this chapter. 

so, you asked what I'd like to see?  Well, with how they actually floated to the island, I would imagine (as happened in Castaway with Tom "Hanks) that debri from the plane would make it to the island.  Actually, its probable that this would happen.

And, to be frank, i don't want to get all weird, but surely they're gonna get together, right?  As in, biblicly....

Will she get prego?  Because, well, there's not exactly Aisle 4 on the island where Edward can go and purchase his Trojans XXL

 

nice 2nd chappie. 

What would I like to happen?  How about some doctorin by Edward?

And, Ima hopin that they fall madly in love pretty early on, cuz Ima romantic that way.

 

Just found your story and really enjoying it. I could feel Bella's panic and fear as the plane began to go down and fall apart! I'm off to read the next chapter!

love the story

Author's Response:

Thank you! Stay tuned!

aww sweet, they seem to be moving forwards now. Update soonies!

Author's Response:

Soonies? lol that's funny!

Yeah, they're starting to realize the attraction they have for each other. I can't wait for next chapter!

after reading just a couple of chapters, i can say that i am so hooked. ill be looking forward to updates. good job!

Author's Response:

Good! Cause I got a lot of good stuff coming! :D

Thank you for reviewing!

So, why is Edward sorry?  Why did he pull away?  When are they going to kiss?

Author's Response:

Edward is sorry for hurting her feelings, of course! :D You'll find out next chapter why he pulled away...

They kiss mext chapter...oh, I just spoiled it...oh well :D

Thanks for reviewing!

Nice chapter - although I feel like I should say "Why did you burn the rum?" ;)

Author's Response:

Hahaha I love that movie!!! And I love Jonny Depp; I can't wait for Alice in Wonderland.

"Why is the rum always gone?" lolol

Thank you for reviewing!