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Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

great start. i like bella standing up to edward. she's going to be a challenge for him.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good start! I am assuming that Bella is the lawyer and that she also has jury duty, so she won't be able to join the firm for a week, but I am also assuming that will not be announced in the story for awhile.

Reviewer: TheGodsCanDance (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a lovely temptation you have offered up in chapter one! Delightful.
This looks GOOD! Reads well, written well, strong characterisation.... oooh, yummy possibilities!

Reviewer: erinzomg (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, I'm likin' sassy Bella XD
She's so much cooler when she's not all insecure and shit XD

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I had this story on my list to read at FF.net as soon as I was caught up here! Thanx for bringing it to us on Twilighted. Now the problem is can I wait or do I need to go directly to FF!
In any event I am looking forward to this story!

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was really good More please

Reviewer: Elizabeth (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

im intrigued haha what a naughty edward! we like him that way though

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