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Reviewer: crazyinagoodway (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting to know the Cullens...Again

You mention posting another chapter but your story is marked as complete - is there still more to come? Also, a lot of the Edward POV chapters are word for word dialogue from the previous chapter. If you are going to go over the same events from a different perspective, you should summarize the dialogue in a few sentences in the second one because we already know what they say.  As is, your EPOV chapters are 4/5 nothing new which isn't very interesting to read.  Bella comes off as kind of a brat, but she is the Princess of the Volturi, so I guess that is to be expected. I'm intersted to see how this turns out and for your explanation of her gifts and how they work.  I hope you post more soon!

Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting to know the Cullens...Again

you should write more!!

it was getting good!!

Reviewer: playboy (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting to know the Cullens...Again

Please bring next chapter out im dyin to read it

Reviewer: Vampire1817 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Getting to know the Cullens...Again

Love this!! OMEAMC! When r u gonna update?!?!?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I don't know when I'll update again,

I have the rest of this up on fanfiction.

http://www . fanfiction . net/s/5455424/1/Volturi_Queen

:) I don't get on with Twilighted, so I might just stick to TWCS and MVF.

xo Beckie

Reviewer: ashleybobashly (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: Getting to know the Cullens...Again

I love this story i love strong bella she's my fav. i really like her being with marcus please please please update!!!!! i need more!!

ps. i don't really like going back and forth between edward and bella. just stick with bella



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

the swapping between Bella and Edward won't last much longer :)

and then it will be Bella's POV with the occasional EPOV.

:)

I'll update later today

Reviewer: ashleybobashly (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: Getting to know the Cullens...Again

I love this story i love strong bella she's my fav. i really like her being with marcus please please please update!!!!! i need more!!

ps. i don't really like going back and forth between edward and bella. just stick with bella

Reviewer: Vampire_luva (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 5: Getting to know the Cullens...Again

ONG! I love this story. Its like amazing. I just love how Bella's a bitch!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

do you mean OMG? coz you put ONG.

but yeah, Happy easter!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 5: Getting to know the Cullens...Again

WOAH! i am so glad you updated.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I'll update soon

xo Beckie

Reviewer: TheDarkSheWolf (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Answers from Edward's POV

I absolutley loved it!! However, (I'm in creative writing so this is constructive critisism, no offense) but you used 'phone' way too much. Use 'call' to replace at least one of them. Also you spelled 'apologize' wrong.

No offoense, and I do hope that you will continue writing, because I love it soooo much!! <3 <3 <3



Author's Response:

Thanks for the criticism, but the 'apologize'/ 'apologise' thing is a moot point. I live in the UK and we spell it with an S. Same with phone... we don't call it a call. we say its a phonecall, or phone for short. I know there is a clash of culture and spellings and sayings and that, but I won't change the English way for the American way.

 

Thanks anyway. and I'll be updating soon, but if you want more, then I have more chapters up on fanfiction.net at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5455424/1/Volturi_Queen

 

xp Beckie

Reviewer: charmtiarn (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Answers from Edward's POV

this is awesome 

please update like right away, meaning this very moment

this is so good, ahhhh

anyways 

i love it 

charmtiarn xoxo

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Answers from Edward's POV

Interesting update.  I am glad that Edward is acting gracious.

This Bella is insensitive, rude and obnoxious in some of the things that she is doing.  I guess that fact that she is powerful and is the Volturi Princess has gone to her head!!!

She don't deserve Edward and I hope that he finds his true mate soon, and that his family stop acting as if he commited a great sin in leaving Bella. Afterall, she has done well for herself and is showing her true colours.

Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Edward will find his mate, eventually :)

xo Beckie

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Answers from Edward's POV

i loved hearing edwards and everyone elses thoughts on that chapter. Thanks that was amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

You've made one author very happy! :P

xo Beckie

Reviewer: Queen_apples (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Answers

OMG I so luv this story need more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I'll upload the next chapter sometime today!

xo Beckie

Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Prologue

I admit that I'd be a bitter but, idk.. she just seemed really rude to me :/

 

Great story though :)



Author's Response:

yeahh, a bit, but she gets better. I swear!

xo Beckie

Reviewer: joeyjxo (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 3: Answers

amazing! more please. i love these bella/volturi stories.. but there just isn't enough.



Author's Response:

Yeah I know!

There are some on fanfiction.net so you should look on there too,

xo Beckie

Reviewer: Lys (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: Answers

I love it! :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

xo Beckie

Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 3: Answers

Ummm, Bella's kinda... rude.

Making out with Marcus in front of her ex.

Being on the phone while in the company of guest.

26 year old Bella is being a brat.



Author's Response:

wouldn't you?

If you were in Bella's postion, how would you act?

Thanks for the review though

xo Beckie

Reviewer: Vampire_luva (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 3: Answers

OMG i love this. Bella is so funny. But you should make her more of a bitch.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I'll try, but I already have up to chapter 13 written, I'll see what I can do.

xo Beckie

Reviewer: Vampire_luva (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 2:- The View From The Other Side

OMG This story is a beast! I love how you made bella like a beasty bitch! Its like amazing! And I also love how you made marcus bellas new mate. its awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

It made me smile.

xo Beckie

Reviewer: larisbell (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 2:- The View From The Other Side

truthfully i do like edward and he is amazing but I would like bella to stay with marcus instead of running back to edward like every other story.So now im team marcus i never would have thought haha



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Bella will NOT be running back to Edward so yay!

lol

Reviewer: imsdaler (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 2:- The View From The Other Side

Want MORE! :-D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I've written the next 11 chapters!

I'll update soon

xo Beckie

Reviewer: stacy74 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 2:- The View From The Other Side

please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and I've written the next 11 chapters!

I'll update later!

xo Beckie

Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 2:- The View From The Other Side

well i believe the cullens just got their asses handed to them!! great i can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Yup they sure did!

I'll post the next chapter later today.

Thanks for the review

xo Beckie

Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 2:- The View From The Other Side

I love strong Bella



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I do too!

xo Beckie

Reviewer: Ella-Beans (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 2:- The View From The Other Side

Ohhh i love this please update soon mayb with a bit of edward and bella ;) gotta love them :D and please please please with a cherry on top can you send a link for the rest of the chapters on fan fiction please? :] x



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Volturi Queen-Fanfiction

The link above is for Volturi Queen on Fanfiction.net :)

Edward and Bella will come, I've written it I'm just waiting for my beta to send it me back.

xo Beckie

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