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Reviews For Romeo and Juliet
Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Prologue

oooh i love it more please

jules

Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Prologue

As usual Char, you have me hooked.  It seems like it would be interesting to see how they get here...Although there is another story that has me checking daily too.....*hint* *Hint*



Author's Response:

YES! I've sent the chapter to my beta. I HAVE WRITTEN IT!

I get mild seasonal depression which gives me one hell of a writers' block, which is my excuse ;)

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Prologue

Great start. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Prologue

Great start. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Prologue

looking forward to more

Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Prologue

oooooo have you read the book 'star-crossed'? because it has almost exactly the same plot!

wtm

 



Author's Response:

Nope, I haven't. I guess great minds just think alike, huh? Sounds like it might be good, though, so I might read it when I finish this. I know if I read it before it would just turn to follow the book.

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 01:24 AM · On: Prologue

Oooohh...I'm intrigued!!  I can't wait to see where this goes :)

Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Prologue

This is very well done! I can't wait to see what's next!



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Prologue

I thought I'd give you some feedback! I liked Bella's thoughts, they were interesting to read and gave us a bit of backround info. You seem to write nicely, and are very descriptive. It's a great beginning, it'll be fun to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm usually terrible and inner monologue because I'm more of a describing person, so it's nice to here that I wasn't a total fail ;)

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