It's a good story. There are just some punctuation errors. I like it, though! :)

More?? I really like it thus far.

oh man it was almost painful to read, almost. hahahaa edward deserves the pain of losing bella after all he did.

Almost ready for happy times?? I do feel kinda bad for Ed but not that bad. And Sam was crappy to make the imprint comment in light of all that was going on.

I have a feelng that Bella will forgive Edward, it's her way. I odn't however, think she'l go back to him, especially because of the banner, which I love by the way.

Great chapter, sweetie! I loved it. I thought you handled Edward's collapse and realization of loss just right as well as Jacob's anger. And your new banner is terrific! I'm very impressed! I think it's an excellent portrayal of the friend to lover change in Jake and Bella's relationship.

Good spot for a breather, sweets - life isn't a carnival ride of adventure & leering ghouls! Good that B finally had a moment to start assessing things - and developing proper remorse over being such a dimwit!

Good to get jake's tho'ts on the matter, too; Charlie should relax - he probably has, J just doesn't know it - things are doubtless more chaste & respectful than he would suspect (he is a small town cop, after all, he knows what goes on!)

Where is Stalkward during all this...? <><3

Author's Response:

Hahaha Salkward is making an appearence very soon. No worries.

GreAt use of Emily! I really like her in this story. Edddie is so bad. Poor Bella this sucks. But at least she now realizes that life is a good choice. I hate it when people do this.... But could we find Leah some one to love too I just feel like she got the shaft big time!!! Anyways love love love your story!!!

I am really loiving this story. Very dramatic. I love that Charlie was brought up to speed on the situation. Keep it coming.

I think that Edward will be relentless for a while, but Iacob will get his turn in time.

I like the idea of Jake working on just being there for her as a friend...and hopefully Bella will eventually allow him to be everything she needs.. update soon

Well, I loved it! Wow, what a series of events! What on earth is going to happen next? I have no idea, but I'm here for the ride. Great job, B!

Girl, you are in serious need of a banner! I might could do something very primitive for you, or better yet, I might could get someone who knows what they're doing to make one. I missed the fact that you updated because I didn't notice it without a banner. Let me know if I can help.

Author's Response:

Leelator I love you. I am currently working on a banner but only time will tell when I create one that I like! I'll keep you updated on the progress of my banner and, of course, the story.

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I never thought Bella would be unforgiving of Edward. She was so forgiving of Jasper after all when he tried to attack her. Anyway, I think I like this Bella!