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Reviews For Blood Lust
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

Love it.... cant wait for more =)

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 4

i like the story but it is hight time that you give readers some info about the physiology of your particular vampire brand...

If their venom heals, then it is not venom, what the hell is it?  But if it not poisonous , how does one become a vamp? Edward was transformed by Esme, he tells us. how?

And finally, why he is so repentant? It was Alice telling him to save Bella.

So I think you owe some explanation to your readers ...



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I appreciate every reader who takes the time to leave good feedback.

In regards to your questions...

In every good book I have read there is not when time I have seen the author lay all their cards out on the table in the first few chapters. In my opinion, unanswered questions are what keeps the reader reading and coming back for more. There are some stories I have read that you never even understand the "physiology" of the main characters. I have chosen to do the same. Everything build up to the climax, where everything is answered. My vampire characters are extremely OOC. Should I have posted that in my summary? Yes, but I didn't. That has now been added. I had hoped that people would figure that out on their own since in the very first chapter Bella drank Edwards blood. That is not anything like Stephanie Meyers version, therefore is OOC. Since this is my first fanfiction, I have just learned recently what the "codes" even mean, and I am on chapter 18.

As far as the venom goes, it is poisonous, but you need to continue to read to understand that. I would love to be able to post my chapters on Twilighted quicker than normal but that seems impossible. The truth is you are going to have to wait, but your question will be answered...eventualy. If you would like to venture over to fanfiction.com there is 18 chapters posted and everything is out in the open. I did not go into how Edward was changed by Esme in great detail because this is indeed a story about Edward and Bella. I didn't find it important to the main plot. Edward's blood is killing Bella as was revealed in a much later chapter. Before she finds out about that there needs to be more connection between the two of them.

Edward feels guilty because he chose to heal Bella. He could have very well just taken her to the hospital and have them try and do something. But he did what he felt in his heart was the right thing to do. As much as Alice was screaming at him to help her, it was still his decision. No one can force anyone else to do something they don't want to do. Should he feel bad about her eventualy changing into a vampire? I should hope so. Whether it was to save her life or because she chose it, it is still quite the burden to bare.

Thank you again for your questions, I hope I did a good enough job answering them. Once again, you can find 18 chapters of Blood Lust on fanfiction.net. Just search for my penname, writerinmydreams007, and it will be there! -Amy

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

why did she have to have sex with the mutt! YUK



Author's Response:

haha! I know! It was sad to write. I love Jacob but he's just not meant for Bella. It was a guilt thing. Don't hold it against me!!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 3

mmmm can't wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 2

this story is hot. and i like jacob in it.

Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 3

i really like this story....and can't wait to see where it goes

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

love your story cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 2

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY....A LOT

Reviewer: airekel (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi,

Well, I am very intrigued by your story so far.  Intrigued, curious, confused, and absolutely eager for more.  Are Edward and his family vampires?  If they are, how can he sleep, and how can his family eat dinner?  I'm sure these are questions you can't answer without giving away the plot, and I am definitely more than eager to read more.  I hope you update again soon.

Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

love the story - cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 (il_suo_cantante)

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

Reviewer: maggieloo402 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 (il_suo_cantante)

I'm so happy to see this over here!! :D Keep up the good work, darlin.

Love ya!!

PS- Put that banner Ashley made you up here! Twilighted loves banners!!

Reviewer: agbpixi (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 (il_suo_cantante)

Nice start. Are these vamps going to be a little like the ones in Charlaine Harris' series?

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 (il_suo_cantante)

cool lol omg I cant wait for the next chapter - i would love to know what the fuk is goin on but i can wait lol - love it so far  =) 

Reviewer: bellaval (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 (il_suo_cantante)

Good story!!!!!

Reviewer: Curleycue (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 (il_suo_cantante)

This story is strangely weird, it's just how I like it.  Yeah!! I can't wait to read more:)

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