Wow.  Edward has come a long way.  I love this story.  I am so invested in these characters!

Hey bee-yotch! :),

As much as you make my blood pressure rapidly rise and than fall, I almost think Edward is drinking from me!!!!

"Oh,That's Just Mean!", she moaned. Quoting Savage. You must have been talking about how you give us hope then take it all away. You TEASE!!!

Hurry up with the next chapter, we can't wait to SEE (neither can Edward) what will happen next.

Love Ya!!!

Lori and Mom

 

 

 

Holy hell, the fake blood made him blind?!?  That is all kinds of crazy!  Poor Edward.  You can't help but feel so bad for him.

I loved the knock knock joke/ car-gasm.  That was very funny and kind of hot. ;)

Well i should have known but yes i was actually hoping for a miracle because these two have already been  through so much and now poor Edward is blind OMG i hope that goes away soon.

I am acutally happy she said she wanted him to change her... YAY..lol

but of course he doesn't want to ... ugh..

Can't wait for the next  chapter.. this story is soo good ...

OMG!!!! YUMM!!

Wow. I'll never view a knock knock joke in the same way again!

So glad that you didn't make it to easy!! I do hope that Carlisle is able to work something out though.

I check every day for an update- but so afraid of what is written!

I am still hoping for a HEA - please give us all this closure!

 

 

 

Perfect. Yes, please make Bella a monster. I like Vampella. x

Love this fic so so much, nothing easily solved but so hopeful at the same time.  Cannot wait to see what the next hurdle will bring, Bella immortal, will her blood or venom possibly be a cure?!?!

No way did I think the first try would work. That would have been just way too easy.... but OMG -- for things to be so traumatic, I was rolling. Glad to know I am not the only one with a sick, perverted sense of humor.. When Edward opened his eyes in the shower and could not see, my first thought also was that playing in the funland zone, does lead to blindness!! I really loved it when the monster tried to approach the forefront of Edward's brain, and he punched him and told him to 'get the fuck out'. Of course you had to finish it off with the leading the blind vampire to blood thing.. I kept trying feel sadness cause the protein serum did not work, but I just could'nt find it in me between the giggling!! .. thanks for the  post ...I did not want the bee-yotch word,,, genius maybe,,, awesome maybe,,, but not bee-yotch... Pam B............. besides, if he was cured too soon, that would mean the sooner th story might end and I am not ready as yet!!

Awww pooooor little eddie!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hey there, glad to see the update's here already!

Oh boy... *keeps fingers crossed at that title*

“Absolutely not!” Bella laughed again.  “I will not respond to that and you can’t make me.”

“I bet I can.”

Oh, I've been meaning to write this down since I saw that teaser a few days ago: I bet he can, too! :P

“Usher who?”

“Usher wish you would let me in,”

Is there even *one* knock-knock joke that's funny? I mean, the one who 'invented' it, they should either kill him, or I hope he's already dead. :P

Though, if I were to be exposed to them, having Edward 'force' the 'who's there' out of me like that would be... worth hearing it. :P

I even passed the red mustang along the way.

I *knew* it... Hehehe. Boys will be boys. Aka they'll stay small kids.

“I can’t see,” I stated, and heard her breath catch in her throat.

Blind by orgasm... Hihihi. Oh wow, it's really not nice of me to laugh at that. Still, I will. What's he gonna do? Bite me? :-D

She wanted me to change her into a soulless monster so we could be together forever.  How could I do this to her?

Not another discussion about turning someone... :P Can we skip that and just mention the outcome? :-P

You didn't think I was going to make it quite that easy, did you? :)

Hmm, no, not really, but it'll be fine, you'll see. Just peachy.

And if it doesn't, then we'll use bee-yotch on you. :-D

See ya soon.

Spikey