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Reviews For Hide and Drink
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Those were some scary side effects. Hopefully the 28th time is the charm. They deserve their happiness considering all of the stress that they have been through.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize

Poor Edward.  He has to be freaking out!!!

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Vials and Trials

oh my --- i love it

Reviewer: Saxon23 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Another intriging chapter....just when Carlisle ( or another memeber of the family) have that "Eureka" moment? And how many more side affects can E take before he kills B without realising it!

Suspense, suspense and more suspence - liking it though!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Vials and Trials

I like the creative side effects of the experiments, but I think they should end in the next chapter. Edward is sick of them and his family is sick of him. I always felt that Edward's family would trade him for Bella in a nanosecond.

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Yes! Just shut up and write woman!!!! I can't believe we are near to an end - such a roller coaster. Fabulous.

Reviewer: guineapig (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Loved this!

You have such a wonderful, original plot, its very refeshing.

Thanks you so much for this story, sad theres only one chapter left :(

But im sure it will be great :D xxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Well it doesn't seem like the formula's are working. But I don't understand how if he turns her and can't have her blood anymore how that would help him.  He goes nuts every time he tries not to drink, so when it's no longer there what then?  I really like this story, thanks for shareing.

Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Yes...definitely just shut up and get on with it. :) can't wait for shit to work out for them!

Reviewer: dmlove (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Vials and Trials

I am so in love with this Edward that I literally swoon.  Love your writing more than I could ever say.  I will wait for the next update because I know it will be incredible. 

Reviewer: twistedbytwilight (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Forgot to say this in my other review, but CONGRATS! 

Reviewer: twistedbytwilight (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Total cliffie!!!  Holy hell! 

I really liked the different manifestations of the failed trials and vials.  And have I mentioned how much I love the titles of your chapters?  Brilliant!

My favorite freaking line from the whole chapter:  "Oh God…she…she…she…she had her…her…her…mouth…"  Stuttering Edward is so damned CUTE!!!  And SEXY!!!

Love H&D!

Reviewer: Moflo (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Oh that poor Edward. My heart breaks for him. How frustrating it must be for him and Bella to try and try and never find an answer. It is clear they are soul mates. Perhaps it is as simple as changing her? Can't believe this is almost over. Gonna miss Boobward!

Reviewer: shebonds (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Are u serious somethings gotta give.

Reviewer: edmom1 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Vials and Trials

loved it

Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Vials and Trials

#woooooo cliffffi this chapte left me depressed and  sad, and in need of ...........another chapter sooooon, pleaseeee!!!!!

Reviewer: Jadiona (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Yes it's a cliffy, because we don't know how bad this will be. Next chapter please

Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Aww, this so sad:(. Both parts - we're at trial 27 and still no cure and one of my favourite stories is ending in two chapters!

It was still a great chapter though! Lol. The lemon was fantastic:). Poor Bella - I think the fellatio will have to wait till she's a vamp (lmao). Wow, Edward actually considered and Is willing to change Bella once he's cured! That is amazing, I never thought he'd agree to that. Yikes, have to say Edward was a bit scary in his confrontation with Mike Newton. Carlisle is a great dad for trying so hard to help.

Can't WAIT for the next chapter...

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Mend and Bend

Poor Edward.  He is so lost without her!

Reviewer: sml6446 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Vials and Trials

I'm not really surprised that its taking so long. It's quite sad to read the things he's going through with the side effects of the synthetic blood. I so want them to find the rt one though. Until next time...

 

Stephanie

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Only one chapter and and epilogue?! But I love this story... but then again I would also love Edward to get well and for him and Bella to have their HEA and so for that to happen, yes, the drama has to end. This has truly been one of my favourite stories to read and so thank you for writing it and posting so regularly.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Vials and Trials

love love love love love your story. :)

Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Vials and Trials

They say it took Edison thousands of attempts to perfect the light bulb. Where would we be if he had quit at #27. Glad you didn't make the first attempt perfect.

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Vials and Trials

My opinion..... it's time for some happiness - rainbows and unicorns and such.  Ok, forget the fucking rainbows and unicorns.  Just some happiness and peace for E/B would do.  Let's have this last batch work, ok?  A side effect would be ok - maybe a limp or something, nothing harsher though. 

I am going to miss their sex.  It's fabulous.



Author's Response:

A limp what? ;)

Reviewer: mariamaral (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Vials and Trials

Didn't feel like a cliffie to me. So, so sad this is coming to an end soon. I'll miss your funny, paranoid, slightly crazy boobward when it does, ;)

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