OMG... The last chapter, for real!

*faints*

I released her nipple, stroking each tip quickly to make sure they were even, and then helped her free my erection from the fabric.

You just had to have that word in there in the last update, huh? 'Even'. Hehe.

Bella hummed my name again, looking at me through hooded eyes and playing with herself until I couldn’t stand it any longer. 

“Mine,” I growled as I pushed my hands under hers and pinched lightly at her nipples.

OMG... *laughs* Pretty soon it'll be a nipple war with those two!

“I’m going to hunt,” I said, kissing Bella softly on her lips.  “It seems prudent.”

“In those?” Bella raised her eyebrows at me, looking down at the Sponge Bob pants I wore.

Oh wow, those pants are going hunting with him? I hope they won't be torn... And he'd better stocked up hunderds of those so that they can have enough pairs to last for eternity. ^^

I strolled back into the opening of the sliding glass door and saw Bella devouring the last of a half-gallon of Moose Tracks ice cream.

Wow, I'd miss ice cream, too. Good choice for a final meal, Bella! But only one flavour? Hehe.

“Forever,” I said softly as I sank my teeth into her throat.

So much for death.

OMG... It's done. I tried scrolling down for more, but nope. There is no more. Whoa.

I'm happy you ended it on a positive note, really. That other ending was just cruel. I'm happy people have managed to convince you to write a few more chapters. They fit in perfectly with the rest of the tale.

Thank you so much for H&D, it's once of the most awesome reads I've ever seen. Congratulations on writing it, and on finishing it. And good luck on all the other projects you've got going on.

See you again for Surviving Bella. I'm ready. ^^

Spikey

I am sobbing like a dope.  Such perfectly beautiful ending.  Thank you for giving them a HEA.

Loved it  of course would have loved to see how she adjusted to vampire life..but it was perfect...... I am so glad he got better and now they have forever to be together...... loved this story and even though i am sad to see it end... it was a great story and a good way to end it.....

Thank you so much for writing this story for us... you are truly talented and I still have your other story to read so i'm good.....

Great from beginning to end..........   : )

Sad to see it end, but happy for them both. Thanks for such a great story.

Now get on with Survivng Bella :D

EEEEKK! while i would of course prefer edward's full recovery--this would work too...*sigh* one can still hope!! lots of hugs to you!

I just didn't see Edward not wanting to be totally right for her, but somehow I get it... I'm glad he at least convinced her to stop trying. it was a realistic HEA

I never thought it could take this long to find the right formula, and still, they haven't... (sigh)

how can a teenage girl handle that???

I just love this story.... thanks so much for sharing this with us !    I wonder what Edward is going to do with Bella !

I love this story, however after waiting so long for an update, somehow this left me kind of feeling lost.  Maybe I'll feel better with the Epilogue, or maybe I just need to read the previous chapter to this one, I can't really figure out just yet why.  Anyhow I overall think it was a good chapter and I am looking forward to the wrap up of the story!!!!!

Have I you I love you?

Are you going to have a Renesmee?

Author's Response:

Nope. :)  Thanks for reviewing!

Another good chapter.  Is Edward really going to settle with nearly improved self?  can his cure last? I could live with him like that but can he much longer?