Yay! Thought it was great :) I think that was a great way to end... better than taking us through her change and giving us vamp on vamp lemon. Not that we dont all love lemons, but the journey has been about human!Bella and Boobward, and we can all fill in our own blanks about their HEA as vamps together. Loved the final post-wedding lemon, though :) Thank you for continuing the story past the point you initially felt comfortable, and I can't wait to see more of Surviving Bella and anything else you have on the horizon.

Jenn

That was perfect!  I loved it!  Really hot lemon.  Thanks for writing this story - it was great!  I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Hmmmm.....I bet Alice was ticked off that Bella married in blue jeans!! The horror!!! LOL!!! I was surprised that it ended her. I guess I thought you would see them through the change. But that really isn't all the necessary I guess. I would have thought that Bella would have had the forethought to pack away a lot of her blood for Carlisle to store in case Edward needed it at a later date. This being done without Edward's knowledge. But I guess that would not have really worked at all since they already tried to use Bella's blood from a storage, right?

I thought this was a really good story. Kept me totally interested in reading and was not ever boring. Like to read more on this if you write it. If not, I will be curious to see what story line you come up with next.

Keye

Excellent story. Creative and thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you.

I was wondering how you end this, especially after reading your comment on your blog.  Somehow cure him completely for the perfect happy ending or go for the 'a slightly damaged Edward is what he deserved' route.

The slightly damaged Edward route sits well with me.  Like i said in my last review, they both ended up happy and have someone to unconditionally love them....for me, that's a perfect ending.

I found this story at the first chapter and never once did you disappoint.  It was a great ride.  Thank you for sharing your work and your talent.

xoxo

Judy

very good ending ,

and he did he :) i really loved your "so much for..." they made me giggle in very stressful situations lol

*Tear... I can't believe this journey has ended! Thank you soooo much for sharing your story with all of us, as it definitely has been on my top 5 list of fanfics. You are incredible & so is your writing. Also, thank you for half a chapter of smut - hot stuff! LOL. Please continue writing, you're amazing at it!

Currently adding you to my fave authors :)

Ok well.... what was the point of him remembering his human memories then?

Author's Response:

Which ones?

I'm going to miss boobward.  Great ending.  I guess they got their HEA.  Loved  this story!

Thanks for a wonderful story... I enjoyed each and every update.  I hope you'll continue writing ff... with something new in the future.

I have to admit, I am a bit of a lurker when it comes to reading some stories. I love to let them play out and them make my comments. I know that it would be a joy to the writer if I had reviewed much more, but I like to make my review count. And this is one of those stories, that I had to read and read before I could make a review. That is not a bad thing in this case. 

I have followed this story from it's inception to the Epilogue you have now posted (sadly all good tales have to come to a finish here...). This has been quite a ride of a tale, I must say. I have enjoyed reading your story and you write impeccably. You have a real talent for the written word and it is a joy to read a story that is not only well wrritten, but has a great story to tell as well.

This is one of my very favorite stories here, or any other fanfic site, for that matter. I have read hundreds upon hundred of stories at many fanfic sites and this story is Top Notch!  It is definitely in my Top 5 favorite Twilight oriented fanfics! 

Since I am retired, young, actually, I have a LOT of free time and I love to read fanfics. So I have tallied up at the minimum a thousand stories read...maybe more...None written by myself however...I have not gotten the itch to write one yet, though I do write other things. I want to have a very original plot and a story to back up that plot and so far, I have not thought of one yet that I want to spend time with writing. One must want to spend time with the story and characters. I have not gotten that inspiration yet!

Back to your story and my review of it... It has a gripping plotline that never slows down and keeps one on the edge of the seat. Each of your chapters is well laid out  and each chapter follows the last so naturally. It is a very well thought out tale that grabs one from the beginning and does not let go until every last emotion is wrung from the reader at the end.  You have written a very fine story and I cannot say enough good about it. I recommend it to all my fanfic reading companions and they love it as well.

Quite simply, I love this story. I also love your style of writing and hope to read more of what you write.

Do you have plans to write more fan fiction stories? They do not have to be prequels or sequels, Heaven fobid, but new original tales of our favorite Twilight characters would be delicious to consume! :o)

I just love your writing style and would read another story by you in an instant if you choose to write more tales for those of us who love the Twilight characters and your way of putting them into plots and showing what they can do at your writer's hand, creativity and imagination!

I look forward to more tales by your hand. If you choose to write more, we will be a better for it.

Thanks for sharing your talent and story with us. It was a real treat.  :o)

I can only ask, more please?

Disney Vampire

 

Author's Response:

THanks for your thought out and LONG review!  I appreciate all of your comments!  I definitely have other stories on the horizon.  You can find links to all of them on my blog. http://shaysavage.blogspot.com/

This is the one I'm going to focus on now  - http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=12466&index=1

Thanks again for reviewing!