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Reviewer: LunaEclips (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Try and Fail
Oh, this is a great, great story!!! The plot is interesting and it is long enough that I really get into it! It is, of course, a twilight fanfiction, with some twilight similarities, but this is really like a whole new story, just with the same names of characters and such. Good job!!!! I really would like to read it from Bella's POV, so I hope desperately that you will do that next.
Oh, please, please, please write it from Bella's.
Good job! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: TWOddGirl (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 12:21 AM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
One more thing I forgot to say:
Do you think this Bella would have been as decisive and 'in-love' if Edward was unattractive, poor, or didn't have family support? Or a combo of all three?
Makes me question it as I think all three were a big draw. Not that I'm impying she was a money-grubbing jerk. It just enabled some dramatic and romantic scenarious and future possibilities.
Starting your other stories now! Thanks again for giving us a brilliant non-typical story!
Reviewer: TWOddGirl (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
This is the most original B&E story I've ever read! I can see Bella taking on the nurturing role but question the reason why. Was it the security of knowing he would/could never leave her? A few things bugged me:
1. She never had a real date with a normal guy to find out what dating was like. In canon, she had Jacob for comparison so she could say 'I've tried that and it's not for me'. Even the Mike friendship filled her with terror and didn't even allow her to feel flattered for fear Eddie would lost it and kill him.
2. She needed healthy, healing time for herself after being physically and psychologically tortured. Wish she could have gone back to school and healed before going to live with the Cullens. Thought Carlisle should medically recognize and recommend this. Wondering if she ever fully recovered from the 'Stockholm syndrome' symptoms and was really in love. Plus, she forgave the killings awfully quickly.
3. I never got a feel for why she loved Edward. Yes, we saw him as beautiful and sexually satisfying through her eyes but what other attraction was there? Another review mentioned if they would be happy in a 100 years and I wonder the same as the basis for a LT relationship was questionable.
Please don't take this as criticism because I couldn't put your story down! Would have loved to see something like your plot on SM's books. So exciting to see Edward freak out! Most of the things I didn't care for were the same when reading the books. Thought it was clever and interesting the way you played up the torture mind reading could turn into as 'hearing voices'. Although you hinted he was able to hear her after she was changed.
Did you explain why her touch was the only thing that worked? Was that the love aspect he felt?
Can't wait to read your other stories! Maybe I'll learn more through B's POV. Well done! You are gifted.
Reviewer: twilightlovergirl (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
Im so sad that ive finnally read the last words. ive been putting off finishing this for 2 weeks . i hate it when stories as amazing as yours ends.
ive had it in my tab forever and havent read it . and then one day i decided to . and i was so glad that i did because this is truly amazing.
im really gonna miss it
this story is truly amazing.
and so well thought out
Reviewer: Blye (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Desperation and Despair
Fantasy Bella and sand Bella were Hilarious, I found myself barracking for Sand Bella not so silently but alas I think Fantasy Bella would win in a fight....Ok may be going a bit crazy myself.
Reviewer: pipi (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Consent and Change
Really good story. Thanks for sharing with us
Reviewer: robpattinzon (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
Great Ending. Loved it,
Reviewer: Emily Bowden (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
I am both happy and sad that this story is over. It was such a fun ride. Thank you
Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
Great story. The beginning was always my favorite. I always wondered if the blood protein thing would be different once he turned her. I was kind of hoping.
Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Manipulate and Capitulate
I 'm just hoping that possibly Bella turning into a vampire would slove everything but it appears as if that won't happen. I'm pretty sure Edward and Bella haven't been using condoms everytime they have sex... shouldn't Bella be preggers by now? Great story! I want Edward to be better!
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Author's Response: Carlisle gave her a depo shot. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Patsy (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
Interesting chapter. Kind of reminded me of Cast Away and Wilson the volley ball...
Author's Response: Others have compared it to that movie as well! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dorothybert (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
So, thanks a lot for this great story. I liked this ending much better than Edward running off to Italy.
I also love a strong not so dependent Bella.
Great job - thanks for all the time and effort it took.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
Really enjoyed readiing the story! THX
Reviewer: Patsy (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Bite and Run
Very interesting beginning! I'm shocked I didn't find this sooner! A treat for me! Thank you for thinking up this interesting premise!!!
Reviewer: sinbad (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Know and Tell
I'm really enjoying this story so far, too bad RL has to interfere and I have to goo to work.
Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
This was a great story!
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
Whoa, just reading along and bam The End, well crap. Awesome story! I'm curious about 1 thing though. Will the protein treatments continue to work? Or will he get better now that Bella is a vampire and there is no blood to taunt him?
Author's Response: Epilogues can sneak up on you! :) Edward will continue to need to protein treatments. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
YAY!!! *sob*sob* I'm happy & I'm sad!!! Sucha great story! Crazy, dark, scary beginning...beautiful, full-circle ending ^__^ *sniff*
Thank you SO much!!!! Now I'm gonna start it over from the beginning!!!
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Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Realize and Rationalize
ARO!?! No no no no no. Aro will find out about Bella and how Edward drank from her and kept her prisoner. He will get in trouble. I don't like this.
But i still LOVE your story.
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Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Desperation and Despair
omg sand bella and fantasy bella were hysterical. That whole part was horribly sound but amazing humorous! Thank god Bella is back. I wonder how long its been and what Rose said to her? This story is addictive thank you for the warning! haha
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Author's Response: That's my fav chapter. :)
Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Choose and Lose
She was touching his erection and now she's leaving him. She might stay away for a few months max but I think deep down Bella is twistedly in love with Edward. He needs her.
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Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Beg and Barter
I knew he had to come back but I was hoping it would be much much later after bella and Edward were somewhat good!
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Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Regret and Redeem
i mad at this nurse! shes going to ruin everything! i wish edward could dazzle her and tell her she didnt hear anything... great great story. I hate edward being such a monster but i pity him at the same time. I keep hoping things will get better. It seems like possibly they finally will.
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Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Fight and Flight
shit he is desperate. A child! I was hoping he would get her back some other way but if this is the only way... even though its twisted I really do believe Edward loves her he just needs to see past the bloodlust. I wonder when Alice will be able to see that future. That he loves her.
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Author's Response: The boy ain't right. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Touch and Take
they found him! is he gonna run? i was kinda of thinking a warmer atmosphere might make it easier for them to get closer. super amazing writing!
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