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Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Burn and Churn
Oh dears! What will happen to our midadventured lovers? Edward promised Bella that he would never drink from her again - I don't think that he will break his promise, unless she demands he drink from her.
Bella does have a uniqeness to her mind and I am hoping that this will save the day. The best part is that I have NO IDEA where you are going with this story and I love that!
Thanks for the update - I always look forward to my Boobward updates xxx
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Burn and Churn
I dont understand why the Volturi have essentially said "there problem solved!" As immortals, drinking Bella's blood for the remainder of her life would really be a short term solution... youve essentially said that when the blood is gone he'll go crazy again. I would think they'd still be concerned...
I guess its not like human addiction where you go back to normal after withdrawal.
Reviewer: mjpiper74 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Burn and Churn
I thought it had to have something to do with Bella being his singer but I never put in terms of addiction.
This completely changes things. Can Edward go back to hurting her? Will Bella allow him if it is the only way to keep him sane?
I don't think I completely understand why Carlisle felt he needed to hold Bella hostage. She had been fine staying at Charlie's up to this point. Was he afraid she would flee from them and would become a liability?
I just hope there is another way to cure him that doesn't include him having to continually drink from Bella.
I will be anxiously awaiting the next update.
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Burn and Churn
Wow, what a bizarre twist!! What an awful Hobson's choice for Edward. Yikes.
Reviewer: 50bestfriends (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Play and Pray
Friend, okay now I wish I were Bella having Edward lean over me while running his finger over my body saying - you're stunning. Yep that does it for me. There was a pause at his obsessive jealousy but in the end - I want to be dazzled.
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Burn and Churn
Wow. I think Bella will be more than willing. But Edward won't like it. I think they will come up with a way to do it safely.
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Burn and Churn
Wonderful chapter!!
Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Burn and Churn
oh! poor edward! i miss his sharp mind, please bring him back -let him drink blood!!!!
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Burn and Churn
Whoa, now I am really worried, I love HEA's and it would appear that there is going to be trouble with this. Please let Edward change Bella and keep her, she may be even more important to him with the change because she will never leave him
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Burn and Churn
Ok I agree with you...WTF is Carlisle thinking holding Bella? I understand safety but it sounds bad. I am horrified that the only cure to Edward's condition is continual drinking from Bella. Will changing Bella be detrimental to his health? Aro is one creepy fucker and I don't like what he may be plotting...full body shudders!
I understand that it is hard to reply to all of us reviewers so don't feel bad if you can't get back to me in general. I appreciat the updates none the less... =)
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Burn and Churn
I had a feeling you'd use the singer twist to be why he's lost his mind. It fits. I'm curious what else Aro has planned. I'm betting Carlisle is holding Bella only so Aro THINKS he's keeping her captive thereby keeping them all safe. Or something like that. I don't know how Edward is going to handle drinking from Bella again. I know Bella would let him if that's what he needs but I don't think in his mental state he would be willing to break that promise. Ok, now my head hurts. Can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Burn and Churn
1. The idea of E debating the merits of pineapples underwater was great comic relief. 2. Smart move on Carlisle's part - Aro needed to see he had Bella under wraps. 3. Poor Edward, I'm wondering what hope there could be now for a happy life w/ B and certainly there will be no vampire B, right?
This gets better and better!
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Burn and Churn
That was one of the theories I had, but I discard it easily. The strongest one was that the mating process hadn't been finished because Bella is still human.
Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Burn and Churn
Oh my goodness! I have no clue how you'll manage to write your way out of this one. It sounds to me like Bella's toast. Aro seems to think he can use Edward's abilities for the Volturi, and I could see him holding her captive and blackmailing Edward into working for him. Also, there's nothing that says that Edward has to drink directly from Bella, right? The Volturi could keep her captive and force Edward to do their bidding in return for time with Bella.
Obviously, my mind has thought of many possibilties. None are very satisfying, though. More tragic than anything. *sigh*
Reviewer: dreamzuvedward (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Burn and Churn
Oh this is such an amazing plot, an incredible chapter, and I love it!!! But I'm starting to get upset, I don't see any solution for B/E, unless changing her somehow cures him? But how the heck would that work? Maybe because he quit her cold turkey, and he has to wean himself?And worse, Aro just wants to keep B and E with him, yikes! Drinking her blood can't be the answer, what happens when she dies of old age? (nevermind how tragic that separation would be). I'm going crazy with all of my dumb theories. I was terrified for Edward, he is so far gone now. I can hardly bear it!! Bella just loves him so, and wants to help him get better, but how will she react to this news? Not to mention I hope Alice and Esme were able to concoct some believable reason for Bella to be away from Charlie. B and E HAVE to be together, but I still feel for Charlie, no wonder he's like a jailer! I really can't blame him. He would have a shitfit if he knew the extent of everything.
I hope the craziness above (that I pretend is a legitimate review) shows how much I love your story! Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Burn and Churn
okay. Ther's got to be another cure
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Burn and Churn
shit i washoping it wasn't that damn thanks awsome chapter thanks
Reviewer: heyitsmattkim (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Burn and Churn
oh poor baby! what if b dies? his mind deteriorates more???
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Burn and Churn
I think Carlise is holding her captive so that if anyone asks she is being held captive but if they dont return she can be set free to hide or run or whatever!
Edward is a junkie and perhaps it was the cold turkey more than just stopping all togeather and maybe carlise can draw blood and he doesnt have to take it from the source. But then again there is no need to stay in Italy for that. I mean clearly there's no reason he can do that at home in Italy Aro will just turn bella to make her a part of the guard.
Based on what Aro is saying...so much for hope!
Reviewer: 50bestfriends (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Fight and Flight
Friend,
OMG- Carlisle, the reasonable one, the voice of calmness hit Edward. Very good indeed - I love Carlisle even more!!! I'm still glad I'm not Bella - hope you make me change my mind soon.
Also, enjoy your writing. There's not much you miss in this most engaging story. You've quickly captured an Edward that is both terrifying and sexy. Well done.
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Burn and Churn
wow! i never expected that!
Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Burn and Churn
Wow...so many questions! Why the heck is Carlisle holding Bella hostage? Was she aware of this when she was with Edward? If so...she took it really well, haha. Poor Bella...she's going to be a blood bank for life. That's going to suck...no pun intended. She'll do it for him though. I think Aro's hiding something...I don't trust him. You have to update this asap! It's excellent!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Burn and Churn
ok now i know whats wrong with Edward but theirs still so much to solve now....thanks for the update.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Confuse and Amuse
Shudders...I still hate the idea of Edward going to see Aro. Aaacckk!
I guess it's for the best but I still don't like it. I do have to wonder if Aro really does have the answers...My guesses are still to do with a singer's blood but ince Bella said his changes happened on the island, I have to wonder if drinking dolphin blood effected him more than anything and since he didn't feed the entire time he was there, well the effects stayed with him...ok so enough of my tangents...I loved the chapter! Edward getting Sponge Bob pants was hilarious! Knock Knock jokes had me in stiches,Bella is right, he should burn that book...
Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Burn and Churn
This really is one of the best fics around at the moment. I loved Edward's descent into real madness at the same time that it broke my heart. I know they'll find a way through this. Right?!?!!?
Thank you so much for this story and for the gift of your words.
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